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Posted: 12 years ago
hellofriends..i am here with the next part..hope you guys will like it...and sorry to say this who are not responding to my any updates since last 1 month or so will not get pms now onwards...i dont want to disturb them by sending pms if they are not interested in my stories...so silent readers(if any) want to get pms then atleast hit the like button..not on regular basis but atleast once in a while.. so here is the update..enjoy...😊
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Recap :

Bittu : aap log baito main sab ke lie kuch snacks aur coffee banata hoon...vic(he was about to call Vicky then stops ) swayam bayya can you show me kitchen?

Swayam : yeah let's go...Bharat can you come with me for a minute..?

Saying this swayam takes bittu and Bharat to kitchen and while bittu starts preparing some snacks, swayam tells them about the rey's gf mistery...bittu and Bharat also feel sorry for rey and vicky...

Part 13:


All had good relaxing time having snacks and just chitchatting...but one person was silent...kriya...she kept on playing game in her mobile...sharon and neha used to feed her in between...she avoided talking to vicky and rey completely...though they tried a lot to talk to her...but she kept on answering in "yes" and "no"...she avoids them completely...after some time when it became difficult for her to ignore vicky and rey, she just went and sat with sharon...cuddling her...sharon felt bad for vicky...this was the first time kriya ignoring vicky like this...vicky and kriya fought many times before but they used to talk and shout on each other...they never ignored one another any time...infact all felt bad for vicky...they wanted to tell her the truth...they tried also...but she cut them off saying something or the other or by just changing the topic...in all this heated situation, one person was happy...and that was swayam...he understood rey and kriyas feelings for each other..the way both are hurt because of this single misunderstanding is just hilarious for him..he was enjoying the scene infact...and he also felt bad for vicky at the same time...after some time, kriya left excusing herself by saying she needs some rest and hot bath right now...no one stopped her...soon after her exit, everyone left one by one...

at 10 pm:

rey was in his room thinking about kriya and her reaction...it was difficult for him to sit quietly with that misunderstanding...he visits college sites..since he is AGS, he has some authority to access students database so he just went to kriyas database and noted down her address...and without wasting time, went to her home...


rey was standing infront of kriyas house now...

rey : is it okay if i visit her at this time?? what will her mom say?? no..i need to talk to her right now at any cost...but kaise??

at that time he sees kriya in the window in first floor room...she just stands there couple of minutes looking at sky..she was upset..anybody can make out by her face...after some time she went away from window but her bedroom light was still on so rey thought she has not slept yet..without wasting any time he climbs to her room using the pipe...he enters slowly in her room...kriya was sitting in chair facing her back to window...

rey : kriya...

kriya : tum??(shocked).. i mean tum yahan kya kar rahe ho???wo bhi iss waqt?

kriyas mom :(shouts) arre kriya kya hua?? kisse baat kar rahi ho??

kriya :(shouts back) koi nahi mom..i am on phone..talking to bharat...aap sojayiye..

rey : i am so sorry kriya..i came here at this time...and that to aise window se...i am so sorry

kriya : window se?? are u mad rey? gir jaate tho...?? tumhe har waqt hero banne ka itna kyu shauk rehta hai??

rey : no no kriya...i just wanted to talk to you badly...

kriya : haan but aise risk nahi leni chahie tume..itni bhi kya urgency thi ki tum aise chale aaye...wo bhi window se?

rey : wo..wo.. bas main mu clear karna chahta tha...about my gf

kriya : leave

rey : haan??

kriya : i said leave...this is not the right way...please leave

rey : par kriya..meri bat tho suno ek baar

kriya : REYANSH...(controlling her anger) please reyansh jao yahan se abhi...waise bhi tumhare gf ko pata chalega ki tum iss tarah se kisi aur ladki ke room mein gusse the tho bura lagega usse...so please atleast uske lie..leave

rey was about say something, kriyas mom enters her room..

smriti : kriya ye kaun hai??

kriya : mom ye reyansh hai...vicky ke goa wala friend..abhi hammare college hi join kia hai isne..

smriti : oh..hi beta(to rey)...1 min.. tum andar kaise aaye..? i mean door bell tho nahi baja..

rey : wo main window se aaya aunty ...(after blurting this he realizes what did he say just now)

smriti : kya? window se? (starts laughing)...hmm...tho koi kriya ke special friend hoge tum then...warna itna risk kaun lega...haina beta?

rey : ji???(he was confused as to what to reply...he looks at kriya who was standing there with serious face crossing her hands on her chest)

kriya: mom gn...

smriti : arre muje reyansh se baat tho karne de...

kriya : fir kabhi karlena...because abhi wo bhi ja raha hai..

rey felt bad for her reaction...

rey : aunty bye..i think i should leave now...he leaves from the window again before kriya or smriti could say somthing

smriti : bhaga dia na usse?? accha ladka hai waise...(kriya gives deadly look to her mom) nai i mean dikhne me bi handsome hai aur attitude bhi hai...i liked it...

In vicky's house:

as soon as rey enters..he directly went to his room...he was frustrated...

bittu : (knocks at the door)

rey : hmm kya hai bittu(in low tone)

bittu : aapke lie khana laya tha...plz mana mat karna bayya...khalo...(when he did not get any reaction from rey) accha main aapki prob solve kar sakta hoon

rey : just nods his head left and right and smiles

bittu : arre aap muje baccha mat samajie..i can clear the mu between you and di...that to within a minute...

swayam and vicky enter to reys room at that time..

vicky : rey he is right..now only bittu can handle kriya..he has his own way to make her understand...dont underestimate him

rey : huh...okay but how??

bittu : oh aap mujpe chodie..kal bas sab roj ki tarah canteen mein mile..i will handle next...but haan 1 condition hai

rey : condition??

bittu: yup condition...main di ki mu clear karunga kal but agar aap mera ek baat manenge tho...

rey : kaisi bat??

bittu : see when i clear the mu..from that point of time till evening 8 oclock aap usse baat nahi karenge..wo jitni bhi try kare aap usse baat nahi karenge...

rey: what? main kriya se baat nahi karunga?? no way dude

bittu : rey bayya mere baat tho suniye..unhe bhi unki galati ka ehsaas hona jaroori hai na...unhone aapko hi nahi vicky bayya ko bhi hurt kia hai...ye first time hai jo di ne vicky bayya ko ignore ki hai...so please let her understand her mistake..

rey : haan par aise baat na karne se thodi na understand hoga usse...vicky aur main usse daant ke bhi uski galati ka ehsaas dila sakte hai...

bittu : huh..bayya i know vicky bayya tho usse dant kar hurt nahi karenge kabhi...aur rahi baat aapki tho, di ki ek smile hi kaafi hai aapko unhe maaf karne ke lie...daantna tho door ki baat hai..

vicky and swayam chuckles at bittus respose...

rey :(embarrassed) what?? main..main aise kuch uski smile se affected nahi hota...main daantunga usse

bittu : i dont think so...leave it...aap khud hi solve kijie apne problem...main chala sone...gn

rey : arre..ruko..teek hai..will not talk to her till evening 8 oclock...but tu karega ka kya??

bittu : very simple hai..i mean aap kal jaan jaoge...waise aapki gf ki naam kya hai??

rey :(smiles) kushi...

bittu : hmm..kushi di...okay then deal..and haan aapko aage aise mere bahot si help ki jarurat padne wali hai so bhool kar bhi mere condition todne ki try mat karna aap...gn(saying this he leaves)

rey: huh...sahi bhai hai kriya ke lie...

vicky :hmm(in sad tone)

rey :(to vicky) i am sorry dude..mere waje se aaj tumhare sis aise behave ki tumhare saath...

vicky : dats okay...kal sab teek hojayega...i am sure...chal gn

rey felt bad for vicky...





done...😊

Edited by smileysmi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing part
really

woww kriya's mom is so cool...

love the way bittu is teasing rey
and swayam enjoying everything

gosh that was fun to read

cont soon
Edited by -Ocean.eyes- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsome update
rey n vicky is so upsat n specially vicky
kria usSe kabhi ignore nahi karti n aaj usse ignor kar rahi hen
besharam swayum sab enjoy kar raha tha
rey in krias room by window n kria ki mom aajati he
kria ki mom ke puchne par when rey answer ki wo window se aaya to kria ki mom ka reaction
hayyy
kria ki mom to supar cool hen
now bittu will help rey in clearing misunderstanding of kria
love th dialoge of bittu ki vcicky bhayya kria di ko daat ke hurt nahi karege n ap rey bhayy kria di ki ek smile dekh kar hi unhe maaf kar degen
after that rey getting embarenss n triol laugh on it
uncharo ka scean mujhe bahut pasand aaya
Edited by kriapatel - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update
rey n vicky is so upsat n specially vicky
kria usSe kabhi ignore nahi karti n aaj usse ignor kar rahi hen
rey aur viscky itne hrt h aur swayam ka bacha has raha h
rey in krias room by window n kria ki mom aajati he
kria ki mom ke puchne par when rey answer ki wo window se aaya to kria ki mom ka reaction
hayyy
kria ki mom to supar cool hen
now bittu will help rey in clearing misunderstanding of kria
love th dialoge of bittu ki vcicky bhayya kria di ko daat ke hurt nahi karege n ap rey bhayy kria di ki ek smile dekh kar hi unhe maaf kar degen 😆
bichara rey embarense feel kar raha h aur woh teeno uss par has rahe h
loved the whole update
Edited by angel_luvkreya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
suprbbb update... Window wala rey is back.,,.. Hilarius scene... Thn her mom... She is way to cool... But really feeling bad for vickey... Bt bt wen bitto is here thn no fear...:p nd glad he took promise frm rey as v all knw her smile really wrks 4 him... Nd vickey wo toh kch kAhega ni... Waiting for bitto's plan... Always mast hote h...:) continue soon... Thanxx 4 pm nd srry 4 late unres
Edited by shalini_arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
AWESOME

AMAZING

SUPERB

FAB

LOVED THE WAY SWAYAM WAS ENJOYING THE WHOLE SCENE

N EVERYBODY WAS FEELING BAD FOR VICKY

DA BEST THING ABT DIS SS IS KRICKY's BOND

I ALWAYS LOVED DEM...LOVED TO HAV DAT SCENE F DERE ENTRY IN SHIVAMS PARTY IN ORIGINAL D3 TOO

DEN REY WENT TO MEET KRIA

KRIA'S MOM LIKED REY...N WAS SUPER COOL

DEN BITTU'S CONDITION...INTERESTING

BUT BUT BUT CHOTA UPDATE THA

UPDATE SOON N BADE WALA :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome

loved it

well done

😆😆

swayam enjoying the whole scene...

and everyone feeling bad for vicky.. 😕

missing kricky's bond a lot..

(SHIVAM ki party ki yaad aa gayi 😉😉)

[they were hilarious back then.. miss them 😭😭]

kriya mom liking rey...

chalo ek barrier toh hat gaya.. 😉

thank you for the pm

update soon

and do pm me

love this FF

i;m waiting... 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsum part I really luved it thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome...loved smriti's mom...and bittu...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rhu90

awesome...loved smriti's mom...and bittu...😊


smritis mom??

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