FF Last benchers #2 Part23 pg31(1/31)

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hey people. We are on the 2nd thread of this story. And this is first time my fiction has reached the continuation thread. I am so happy. Thanks to all of you. I really dont know what to write more here other than thinking all my readers. So thank you once again..

And a special thank you to pradeep as his halla bol aandolan for updates made the thread to complete so fast. And many others too.

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I hope you guys continue to support me here after as well. Thank you once again..and sorry for such a low profile thank you post. Itz a first time..please adjust karlo...😔

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<font size="4">Index</font>

Thread 1

Part21
Part 22
Part 23

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Teaser

Rey : vicky

Vicky knew what's coming. He was expecting it since morning. But he doesn't want to listen or face. But he can't help it now.

Vicky avoiding eye contact "hmm"

Rey says nervously "tomorrow..." he left the sentence incomplete unable to understand how to proceed knowing vicky's reaction. And as usual swayam has to interfere knowing where this conversation will go and how it will end.

Swayam : rey..leave it..this is not the right time.

All others except neha got confused with the behavior of these three friends.

Rey : but swayam..abhi nahi tho kab? We don't have time..kal ki tayyariyan bhi karni hai. Without his cooperation, how will we do all that?

Swayam (looks at Vicky's blank expression and then looking back at rey) "I understand but let it be. This is not the time rey. Please don't start again. We are done with this discussion with, vicky. Huh. Will manage somehow tomorrow. If he doesn't want, let him be"

Rey was frustrated and shocked with swayam's words "what? Ye tum keh rahe ho swayam? How can you..? Huh..swayam (pointing at Vicky, shouts) he accepts it or not, the fact will not change. How long is he going to ignore the fact? I don't understand why is he not ready to accept it mhaaan? (By now all 4, vicky neha swayam and rey had tears in their eyes) how long he ignores the fact that we had lost our "Pari"...


😉 😛 Enjoy guys...update is ready..I will post it soon..just building a curiosity for my readers :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res...
dii...congo...2nd thread...party to banti hai...
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😊
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Congratz for the new thread 😃
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Congrats smita for 2nd thread
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congo for new thread.. Nice teaser.. Interesting.. Continue soon..
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who is pari...his sister or some spcl frnd...???
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congrats 4the new thread...interesting teaser...update soon...

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