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smileysmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#261

Originally posted by: Suni1986
Awesome update yar
d way rey bring smile on kriyas face was fab
nd end was superb
i love it

Thank you suni... 😊

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smileysmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#262

Originally posted by: vaishu88
awesome update loved it...
rey s really confused abt how to rectify his mistake... n was praised by fellow classmates.. he told neha vicky s missing her n sat next to kria n tried really hard to get her attention but kria s a good actor that she didnt bulge even for a sec... viha's cute convo was nice...
rey started a fight between coll to c who s best in away he made it clear to kria that al he did was for her n not in wrong intention.. d way rey interacted wit d students to make his point wit a puppy face was cute..
bittu's song to depict KR but seeing sharon was hilarious coz if kria gets to knwo its for her that bittu s gone... loved d update.. n KR's whispering convo..
waiting for d next.

Thank you vaishu...
Thanks for liking n commenting on each of my updates so lovely... 😊

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Shrutiagarwal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#263

amazing part bt tune mujhe pm nhi ki :-(

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smileysmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#264

Originally posted by: Shrutiagarwal

amazing part bt tune mujhe pm nhi ki :-(

Iam really sorry shruti...
I dont know how I missed sending pm to u...

Sorry...

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meghanakiran

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Posted: 12 years ago

#265

loved the updates a lot

kricky bond was really awesome

also want to see kriyam

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arsha_simran

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Posted: 12 years ago

#266

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

woowww woowww woowww

the only word i can use for all ur updates

i mean u make it so perfect

loved ur updates and den kricky's bonding sooo cuteee

and den dat bloody shivam hate him for hurting kria

den kriyaansh bondingg gud and den bittu and kria's bonding amazing

kria's dreamboy hmmm waiting 2 noe about it

den rey's hardwork and den kria ka gussa hona and all those tactics used to sit next 2 kria

rey ka manana hayeee sooo cute and mainly the thing i liked about ur dis ss is kria's character u r rite she is just sooo perfect so down to earth person and simply perfect!!!!
loved everything ⭐️

plzzz update soon!!!!!!😊😊😊

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smileysmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#267

Originally posted by: meghanakiran

loved the updates a lot
kricky bond was really awesome
also want to see kriyam

Thanks meghana...
In this ss, instead of kriyam I am focussing on kricky bond...

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smileysmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#268

Originally posted by: pradeep_maurya
Hey update na
Waiting

Vl update in few hrs dear...

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smileysmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#269

Originally posted by: krishaluv
👏
woowww woowww woowww
the only word i can use for all ur updates
i mean u make it so perfect
loved ur updates and den kricky's bonding sooo cuteee
and den dat bloody shivam hate him for hurting kria
den kriyaansh bondingg gud and den bittu and kria's bonding amazing
kria's dreamboy hmmm waiting 2 noe about it
den rey's hardwork and den kria ka gussa hona and all those tactics used to sit next 2 kria
rey ka manana hayeee sooo cute and mainly the thing i liked about ur dis ss is kria's character u r rite she is just sooo perfect so down to earth person and simply perfect!!!!
loved everything⭐️
plzzz update soon!!!!!!😊😊😊

Thank u..thank u thank u...
Thanks for such an encouraging comment...n liking my ss...
Yeah I am gonna update next part in few hrs...
Enjoy

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smileysmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#270

Part 9:

Bittu : serving food for the gang singing- do dil mil rahe hai magar chupake chupake(he serves for kr 1st avoiding looking at her or anyone...pretending as if he z busy in serving) sabko ho rahi hai... kabhar chupake chupake...

(Den he goes to serve rey) kahi aag lagane se pehle...(pause for couple of secs) uthata hai aisa dhuaaa...

(Then serving sh vi bh sw ne ri one by one) jaadoo ka mein isse naam dooon...jaadoo chal raha hai ...(pause for 2-3 secs) magar chupake chupake...

Aise bhole ban kar hai bhaite...jaise koi baat nahi ...

(Now serving z over..he stands near sh facing her...as if expressing to her)
Sab kuch nazar aaraha hai...din hai ye raat nahi...

All were trying hard to control thr laugh...they knew bittu was singing on kr n rey...bittu always expressed those things which others even sh, scared to express infront of kr..he never missed any opportunity to express what he felt about kr in different circumstances...but yeah he has his own ways to express ...like this time by singing he expressed what he felt about kr WITH REY.

Rey was blushing...he also understood that the gang has seen thr eye lock...so he did not dare to look at kr...because he doesn't want to ruin everything...he knew kr vl b irritated with this bittus song...

Kr :(in stern voice..looking at bittu) hogaya??

Bittu.: with the same attitude n stern voice...- haan...(after few secs) serving z over...jaa raha hoon...(pretending he doesn't know what kr was asking...)

Kr : main serving ke bare mein nahi puch rahi thi...

Bittu : accha..?(acting as if he doesn't know what she z talking about) fir kis bare mein pucha aapne?

Kr : (frustrated) ye jo apne new talent dikha rahe the uske bare mein puch rahi thi...

Bittu : new talent??(scratching his head for few secs then) acchaaa u mean about my singing talent??

Kr : exactly...agali bar mere saamne aise gane gaaye tho dekh lena...

B : kya dekh lena ? Han? Main gaunga...100% gaaunga...main bhi dekhta hoon kya karlenge aap..

K : (she z fuming now...she knew bittu uske aur rey pe gaa raha tha wo song...but she cant say it directly...n she knew bittu z taking advantage of that) dhamki de rahe ho muje??

B : haan de raha hoon...muje bhi haq hai apne talent dikhane ka ya apne singing hobby maintain karne ka jaise aapko hai..

Kr : accha..? Aaj tak kaise chupake rakhe the ye talent ..?? Haan?? Aaj hi ye tumhari hobby ka yaad aaya tumhe..?? Isse pehle tho kabhi nahi dekha tumhe aise gaate hue...

B : INSPIRATION...INSPIRATION naam ka bhi kuch hota...aaj tak kisi chees ya situation ko dekh ke gaane ka mann nahI kiya tha...but aaj (smirks n stops...because he knew what will be kriyas next sentence...n he prepared his answer in mind)

Kr : inspiration...? ? Yeah right...tho aaj tumhe achanak se gaane ka mann kia ryt??

B : (innocently) haan...main jab serve karne aaya tho dekha yaha par kuch n suddenly situation ko suitable gaana bhi mind mein flash hua tho bas gaa dia...wo kya hai na di pehle kabhi aise najaara nahi mila tha dekhne ko...

Kr : fuming but she z helpless...she lost it...cant continue her argument...because bittu already won it...

B: main chalu ...muje aur bhi kaam hai...yeah fir aap aur kuch puchna chahte hai mujse?

Kr : dobhara mere saamne gaana Gaye tho bahot bura hoga...I am warning u bittu...dont act smart...

Bittu : gaaunga...jo karna hai karlijie aap...(saying this he turns to leave...n he leaves saying) hadd hai...meri talent ki kadar hi nahi...aapki talent, talent...mera talent kuch nahi...aap apne gs duty karte waqt skating karte hue ek jagah se dusri jagah jaa sakte ho...laptop pe work karte hue gaa sakte ho..work load jada hua tho mind ko shant karne ke lie dance kar sakte ho...but mera mann kia tho main gaa nahi sakta...?? Main gaaunga...jaroor gaaunga...(he almost went near canteen counter...he turns n says) aur haan...main aap pe hi gaaunga...aaj ke baad...q ki aap hi mere sabse bada inspiration ho...rok sako tho rok lo muje...(saying this he left)

Kr was fuming like anything...but not like before because bittus last 2 sentences some how made her anger to calm down.. but she doesn't want to show it...she smiled slowly...looking at bittu ...who z working now in canteen kitchen...he z also smiling...he was happy seeing kr like that for the 1st time...looking at the kriyas smile the gang also had wide grin on thr faces...except one person...

Vi : haan gooro...aur gooro usse...bhai hai na tumhara...pyara bhai..

Kr : looks at vi...who commented seriously on kr bittu sis bro relation..

Vi : main kabhi gussa hojau tho muje manake, mujse hi maggi banwake kaate ho...aur bittu naraj hua tho uske lie khud apne haato se gajar ka halwa banake le aaye...wow...

Kr : hits her forehead with a book she was holding...she takes her bag n goes to canteen counter...she did not answer vi...

Vi : dekha ne main kuch nahi hoon uske lie...

Ne was about to open her mouth , she saw what kr iz doing in counter...so she keeps quite...after 2 mins kr comes with a tray ...n she keeps it infront of vi...seeing which vi smiles widely...the tray contained 2big bowls...1 bowl has carrot halwa. N the other bowl has vanilla ice cream in it...n few spoons...

Vi : ye mere lie...?? ( looks at kr who z smiling at Vickys childishness)

Kr : haan...tumhe kya laga main tumhe bhool jaungi?? Ya aap sabko bhool jaungi..? Looking at the gang...now again looking at vi - tumhe carrot halwa ice cream ke sath khana accha lagta hai na so here it z...

Vi : thank u kr...so sweet of u...

Kr : kabhi bhai nahi bulaati tho iska ye matlab nahi ke main tumhe bhai nahi manti...idiot...dobara aise sochna bhi math
..abb mooh kya dekh rahe ho...have it...n haan guys...warning you all...jaise bhi bana ho chup chap khalo...kuch bhi ulta seedha comment maara tho mujse bura koi nahi hoga...pehli baar maine kuch banayi hai ..so dont expect it to be very tasty...

All laughs at her dhamki...n. starts eating halwa...it was really yummy...though kr prepared something for the 1st time but it was very delicious...they enjoyed having halwa from one bowl...suddenly something strikes to kr...she taps on rays shoulder...

Kr : rey announcement...

Rey : oh yeah...ready?

Kr : what ready..? ? U r the one who will announce now..

Rey : meee?

Kr : yup...I want you to make an announcement

Rey : but kr mera koi nahi sunenge...

Kr : smiles - I know...thats y I want u to make an announcement

Rey : matlab?

Kr : matlab...I vl make them to listen to u...they are not going to accept u as Ags so easily...u have to prove ur capabilities...so plz go ahead n make an announcement...I will handle the rest...dont worry

Rey : making puppy face - bachalena plz ...

Kr : laughs - dont worry I am with u...

Thats it...our hero again kkho gaya kriya ke hasi mein...on top of that she said "dont worry I am with u"

Kr : observes him ...n clears her throat..n succeeds...rey comes to his senses

Rey : stands up...takes a glass n a spoon in his hands...but he z nervous...itz something new for him...he again looks at kr who just smiles n signals him to go ahead...

Rey : tapping spoon on glass makes sound to get attention from the students...- attention frnds...we have an announcement to make...we know that continuous seminars bahot frustrating hoga so just to keep an frndly atmosphere during seminars we have decided to allow food in the class room...(all students starts whispering) but...but only dry food items like sandwich s n toast s..n yeah u can even carry cold drnks with u guys...but no chips or any items which makes sound during eating it, are allowed...because they vl distract seminar...n we have arranged a big trash box in the class room so that we can keep the class room clean...if we see any student leaving any food left over or used cold drink can in the class room , will make sure ki that student collects the plates n cans from the students in the next seminar holding trash box...so be careful...u have to keep the class room clean...n even the person who z giving seminar can have cold drink or water during presentation...plz pass the msg to every one...thank you...

Rey :Sighs n sits ...soon some one taps on his shoulder..he knew who z that person...he looks at her

Kr : just smiles n shows tumbs up signal

Rey : smiles - kr I dont think ye log mujhe seriously lenge...dekhna ye log jaroor rule break karenge...n class clean nahi rakhenge...atleast few students tho rule break karenge hi karenge I am sure...

Kr : I know...accha hai ...karne do rule break...main bhi yahi chahti hoon...

Rey : kya...? Tum chahte ho students rule break kare...

Kr : yup...c wo rule break karenge taking ur words easily...tum unhe punishment dena whatever u said in announcement...2-3 students ko punish karoge tho khud aage se thumare baate seriously lene lagenge...winks at him

Rey : hmm point...

Kr : mimicking - main kuch bhi bina soche samje nahi karta kabhi...

Both looks at each other n burst out laughing...

Done...

Edited by smileysmi - 12 years ago