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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

loved d update...
sh bha ne ri were nice poor swayam got humiliated coz of his task... loved it... kria impressed both d guys very wel...
loved d way she corrected sharon by tellin swayam s mr.sensible n got engrossed in her game n didnt give a 2nd look to the raggin got back to her game..
rey's task to seduce d gals by doin pushups were also nice..
loved d shocked reaction sh ne n ri gave wen kria started to talk to herself while gals mistookit to b for rey..
kria won d game while rey waitin for her to give him just a glance...
finally she gave but ordered him to get up n disappointed d gals who were droolin over rey...
loved d update..
pm me d net part n update it soon plz...

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unisha

@unishaz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

yar kya storyline hai really loved it... in this ff new things are included... really good

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GoldenLuna

@GoldenLuna

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

amazing ss yar...

the gang is superb...

i guess boy1 = swayum n boy2=rey...

the ragging part was superb...

the 2nd boy waiting for kria's 1 look..

loved both parts yar...

thnx for pm n sorry for late comment...

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zona_malik

@zona_malik

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

dat was FANTASTIC..

super awesome..

grp ki ragging..

kria ka opinion n vicky always on her side..(always imagined kricky's bond lyk dat) n den kria angry..rey toh gaya

update soon 👏

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smileysmi

@smileysmi

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Thank u thank u ...thank u guys for such an encouraging comments...this time my update has got long long comments...I am very v happy...so I am updating the next part within an hr...1ce again thanks a lot for such a lovely comments...

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smileysmi

@smileysmi

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Part 3 :

Kr : get up...

2Nd boy was happy that finally kr noticed him...then he looks at sh just to get permission to stop his pushups...

Kr : I said get up...nowww ( shouts )

He gets up immediately sensing anger in her tone...she holds his t-shirt infront of him not looking at him...he takes it without uttering a word...now sh ri viha bh are standing in a line with thier heads down n these 2 boys standing opposite to them facing them...kr inbtwn these two groups...

Kr : (looking at her gang) what the hell...kya kar rahe the ye aap log?? Decency naam ki bhi koi cheez hoti hai ki nai...aaj aap logo ne sare limits cross kardi..ragging ke naam pe ek ladke ko pure clg ke saamne shirt uthar kar pushups karva rahe ho?? They are also students like us...(more loudly) they are not our slaves...got it...I thot ragging ke naam pe thoda masti majak karoge bas bt ajjj aap logo ne ...disgusting...shame on u guys...aur tum (turning towards the boy)

Kr : (as soon as she turned to face that boy, she sees that the boy is standing still without the shirt...holding shirt in his hand only...) she closes her eyes with her hand n says : chiii tumne abhi tak apne shirt nahi pehna hai n turns to the other way..

2Nd boy : sory sry wo main...main bas ...I am wearing..sry (actually he. Was shocked to c her shouting on her frnds for ragging him like that) ...hogaya done...haan done...

1St boy n vi smiles at their frnd's expression...

Kr : (agn facing the 2 boys ) uuu...tummm...kya kar rahe the ye...?? Haan ?? Sharam nahi aata tume pure clg ke saamne girls ke saamne aise shirt uthaar kar pushups karne mein...?? Show off karna hai apne muscles ka haan ??

2nd boy : arre what did I do...?? We are new students n agr tumhare frnds rag karne lage tho hum kya kare...we have to do whatever they are telling...daantna hai tho tumhare frnds ko daanto hume nahi...

Kr : dont u dare to tell me muje kisse daantna chahie kisse nahi..i have already scolded them...n leave them...u tell me...mana nahi kar sakte the aise task karne se...unhone kaha shirt uthaar ke pushups karne ke lie n tum shuru hogaye saare girls ke saamne haan ?? Manners nahi hai tumme ?? Guts nahi protest karne ka ??

Vi : par kr v did not tell him to do pushups removing his shirt...v just told him to do pushups dats it...

That was enough for kriya to erupt...that sentence of Vicky made kr more angry...

Kr :(looking directly into 2nd boys eyes) kya ye sach hai??

2Nd boy : wo...wo...actually...looks at vi who takes a step back so that his frnds cant c him n makes balle balle action with his hands to tease him...

Kr : ans me mr shirtless wonder(I liked that tag a lot so using here)...i am asking u something...

2Nd boy :suddenly something strike in his mind...yeah they did not tell me to do pushups removing my shirt but they said me to do pushups in such a way that it should seduce all girls present over here...

This made kriya angry beyond limit...her frnds gets scared n starts bitting their nails...they starts thinking how to escape from krias anger or make her calm down...

Kr : kya ye sach hai ?? Sedu...I mean...cheee...aise indecent harkathe aap kar bhi kaise sakte hai...I mean aapne new student ki ragging nahi balki insult kar rahe the...which is not at all tolerable in this clg...shame on u guys...nooo...I vl have to take strict action against all of u...this is not acceptable...

Sh : (takes charge...with full confidence n seriousness) 1 min kria...whatever happened 2day I know its not acceptable bt humne usse seduce karne ke lie nahi kaha tha...v just told him to do pushups in such a way that girls should get impressed...

1St boy who was till now standing quitely n observing the scene, comes for his frnds rescue : oh really...can u just explain how can a boy impress girls while doing pushups...??

This is something which sh could not take...the boy hits her ego directly...

Sh : oh shut up...u r asking meee...meee the sh rai prakash...for explaination?? Haa...(full on attitude)

Kr : isme galat kya hai?? (All are trying hard to control their laugh...bcoz sh can only shut her mouth infront of krias anger otherwise god can also cant control her attitude)...

Sh : kria (shocked...no actually hurt or nervous ki now how can she cover up for her egoistic statement
)

1St boy : yess ask her...(folding his hands on his chest with a victory smirk on his face looking at sh)

Kr : I already asked her...u plzzz...I mean...let me do my work

This was enough for vicky he could not control his laugh...bt he has to becoz if he laughs it vill lead to more damage since kria has already become out of control...

Vi : guys guys chill...ye sab bas ek prank tha...actually ye dono new students koi aur nahi mere frnds hi hai...my childhood frnds...n

Sh : what ?? Ye dono ur frnds ?? That means

Bh : ye hum logo ko bewkoof bana raha tha apne frnds ke sath mil kar...??

Rinni : how can u do this to us Vicky...?? Apne frnds ke sath mil kar u played a prank against us??

Ne : babu apne childhood frnds milgaye tho apne kagu ko hi bhool gaye?? Unke sath milkar humme hi ullu banaya??

Vi : arre guys meri puri baat tho suno...

Ne : basss (showing her palm to stop n closing her eyes tightly) bas babu bass...I cant tolerate any more...starts singing dost dost na raha pyaar pyaar naa rahaa...zindagiii ...

Kr : hey universji..ye kahan fasa dia hai muje inn nautankiyo ke beech...main hi mili thi aapko...

Vi : kagu meri baat tho suno ek baar...aise kAise tum bhi muje galat samaj sakte ho baki frnds ki tarah...

Ne : nahi babu...ab sab katham...sab katham. (Putting her hand on forehead, sits on the step as if the world is finished for her)

Sh ri goes n sits beside ne one on each side ..

Bh shouts : ab main kya karu ?? Kahan fasa dia yar bhagwaan...(as if bhagwaan is his frnd)

Kr : cut the crap guys...vi tu bata...I cant handle it anymore

The 2nd boy hides his head behind 1st boys shoulder n starts laughing slowly...

1St boy whispers "chup raho warna ye kriya tuje nahi chodegi...already bahot bhadki hui hai"

Ne :tu ab bhi vi ko hi support kar rahi hai kr...bhool ja usse...usse uske frnds mil gaye hai abb...hammari jarurat nahi hai usse...

Sh : yeah kria...within a day he changed so much...i mean he played prank against us...usss??

Ri : that too uske frnds ke sath mil kar...he is no more our frnd...

Bh : koi muje samjayega vi ne kya prank kia hai hammare against??

Kr : chup raho warna

Ne : (now crying) warna kya kriya?? Tu bhi hame chod kar chali jayegi?? Apne bhai vi ki tarah?? Jao ...sab jao...bhagwaaan muje uthale...

Vi : hawww (closes his mouth with his hand) neha ye kya bakwaas kar rahe ho...??

1St boy : ok ok guys. .plz listen to me 1ce ...plzzz...neha...plzzz

Neha : still sitting with her 1 palm on forehead...

1St boy : okay...guys hum kal hi aaye hai goa se n we gave Vicky surprise by telling him that we too joined his clg only from this term..he said at that tym only ki he vl call u all to home n introduce us to u all bt humne hi mana kia...we said will meet u guys personally 1st then he can introduce us to u all...he warned us also abt ragging bt we said will manage..we wanted to c u all as some normal classmates of u..we wanted to experience the ragging...so its not vicky s fault at all...n waise bhi ragging hamari hui hai tho prank Aapke against kaise hua?? Aapke agAInst koi prank nahi khela gaya hai...

Ne ; sacchi...??

Vi : han neha...

Sh : ya he z ryt...humne inki ragging ki hai tho ye hammare against prank kaise hua?

1St boy C: exactly..

Kr : hogai aapke saare misunderstandings door...??(looking at sh ne ri bh)...draamebaaz...

Vi : chalo guys mere frnds se milata hoon...bht hogaya rona dhona...pointing at 1st boy , ye hai swayam shekawat n he, pointing at 2nd boy , reyaansh singhania...all says hi to them n then vi introduces kr ne sh bh ri to sw n rey...

Peon comes n says

P : kriya gai aapko principal sir bula rahe hAI...

KR : okay main abhi aati hoon...peon leaves..

Kr : ok guys main aapko badme milti hoon...I have to go now...

Rey : kr...wo I am sry wo mere pushups walI behavior ke lie...holding his ear...

Kr : pushups k lie ya jo show off kar rAhe the uske lie??

Rey : hey that was not a show off ...okay okay...whatever ...sry...

Kr : smiles slightly...dats ok...

Rey : frnds. ?? Forwarding his hand

Kr : shaking his hand...yeAAH ...FRNDS...

Others just watching them unbelievably...bcoz kriya was not a kind of person to make frndshp with any guy except bh n vi..n rey was not a guy to say sry to anybody so eAsily...

Their sweet moment was distracted by a voice

"Ye ladka kaun hai ye kria"??

Done...

Edited by smileysmi - 12 years ago