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zona_malik

@zona_malik

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

FANTASTIC..

LOVED IT..

IT SEEMS SO MUCH OV FUN..

REYAM ALREADY HAD THERE GIRLS IN MIND..

WAITING SO UPDATE SOON..👏

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Adima

@cutekriya

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

wow fabulous update
gang convo is nice
vicky n reyam r superb
waiting fr nxt part
pls update soon.
loved it ❤️

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anjali

@anjali22

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

intresting

awesome update

update next part soon

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Blackheart

@Dead_Nightmare

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Hahahahahahahahaha
Hasi rukne ka naam nahi le rahi thi
Realy freaky owesome update
Khud ranging ke liye ja rahe hai bhagwan bachaye inhe unse

Update jaldi update karo

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Sanskriti

@SanskritiS

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

awesome start 😊

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glmorous_diva

@glmorous_diva

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

amazing

vicky ke 2 frnd swayam and rey hi hoga...

lady dabbang kriya😆

loved it

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smileysmi

@smileysmi

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Thank you guys for wonderful comments...thanks a lot...here is the next part...hope u guys will like it...

Part 2 :

next day morning in the college...sh rinni Bharat kriya were sitting in the atrium on steps ...kriya is playing bike race in her ph..bubble gum in her mouth blowing it to make bubble n then bursting it n others just chit chatting..she is very much involved in it..neha n Vicky enters...

Viha : hey guys gud morning...

Rini bh : hey neha gud morning Vicky...

Sh : hey neha...n vicky tumhara ye "later" ka meaning 1 whole day kabse ban gaya...kal tumne " c u guys later " kehke gaye the na n directly aaj mil rahe ho hume uske baad...

Vicky : wo mere frnds needed help na tho I was busy in that only yesterday...

Sh : yeah yeah ...they needed help...wo wahan bait kar tumhe orders dethe hai n u tum usse pura karo aapne sare kaam chod kar...

Kr : sh leave it na...itz ok...like us, they are also his frnds...so chill... still concentrating on her race game..

Vicky : thanks kriya...then he says guys are they new students ?? (Pointing towards his 2 frnds...pretending as if he doesn't know them)

Sh rinni Bharat neha : instantly looks at the direction Vicky was pointing at...

Bh : han yaar ye tho new students hi lag rahe hai...(guys in this ss bh knows English n even nehas english is good in this story)

Neha : han pehle kabhi nai dekha inhe...

Rini : me too...

Sh : so what are we waiting for ??

Kriya who is still busy with her race just shakes her head for her frnds upcoming ragging...bt she doesn't even look at the new students...she continues her game...

Bh : whistles n says " come here"

The 2 boys understood by looking at Vicky with the gang that they are Vickys frnds n calling just to rag them...

Both : we ?? Pointing their index finger at themselves...

Bh : yeah aap logo ko hi bula raha hoon

They both go towards them...

Bh : naye ho clg mein ??

1St boy :haan...

2Nd b: 1st day in clg...

Sh : okay...(getting up n going towards them) chalo aapke 1st day memorable banate hai...what say guys...?? (With full on attitude)

Bh rinni viha : yesss (smiling slightly bt still carrying the attitude)

Bt kriya was still sitting in the same position busy with her game...

Sh : (sits again on steps with bh ri viha) okay u (pointing at 2nd boy)... side me ajao jara...will talk to your frnd 1st then will come to u...

2Nd boy goes n stands the opposite side of where kria was sitting...

Bh : so guys kya kare aaj inke sath ??

Rinni : yeah dikhne mein tho he is very cute like a kid...

Sh : yeah rinni he looks like chocolate hero...

Neha : baccho wali innocence hai iske face par..

Sh : tho chalo kuch bacchho walI task hi karate hai isse... q kriya..?

Kr : (still busy with her game ) whatever muje involve mat karo in sab mein ..u guys know very well that I am against this ragging funda...blowing bgum n bursting it...(it iz that instant, 2nd boy looks at her n smirks..)

Bh : arre par apna opinion tho bata iss bande ke bare mein...

Vi : yeah kriya without which we can not proceed further...(looking at 2nd boy or indicating that she is the 1 to whom his that idiot frnd calls lady dabangg)

Kr : okay okay ...just looks at that boy for few secs n then continuing her game says ' dnt underestimate him guys...jitna child like dikhta hai na, utna hai nai yeh...he z very matured n sensible guy...agressive some tyms bt not beyond control...he vl become soon 1 of us'

Listening this both boys are very impressed with kriya...they just smile at her remark..

Sh : what ?? U mean he vl become 1 of our gang member ??

Kr : may be (seriously involving in game ) as I always say my instincts may not be 100 % true all the tym..bt I say whatever I feel...

Bh : tumne ajj tak tho kisiko hammare gang member banega aisa nai kaha...

Rinni : han tho phir ajj q?

Neha : aisa kya hai isme kriya jo tume ye hammare frnd bann sakta hai laga..

Kr : dnt knw (still focussing on game ) muje jo laga Maine bas wahi kaha...

Sh : ok leave it...vl c later abt that...tho pehle isse task de...

Bh : haan task...tho kya karaye isse...

Sh : I knw kya karana haI isse...so mr innocent...

Kr : (still playing the game) aaahaan..correction ..mr sensible...

Ne : kr shut up...tu game khel...ye hammara dept hai..

Kr laughs.. okay as u sAy mam...(carry on with her game)

Sh : so mr...do u rem multiplication tables...

1St boy : yup...

Sh : can u say 1 one za for us till 10...

Vi thinks abb ayega majA...

1St boy : says 1 table till one 10 za...

Sh : ok now say it more fastly...

He says it bit fastly this tym...

Sh : okay this tym as fast as u can...

He says it bit more fast this tym..

Sh : okay tho just rem the speed in which u said just now n say the "Bow Table" with the same speed..

The boy : " bow table "

Rinni : dont know ?? Dnt wry will explain...

Bh : tho mere bhai " bow. Table " means bow 1 za bow , bow 2 za bow bow, bow 3 za bow bow bow so on till 10..

Ne : bt rem u have to say it with the same speed just now u said..

Sh :and...yesss AND rem if u make mistake in between, (looking at him with full on attitude n smirk on face)

Rinni : u have to start it again from first...

1St boy thinks ye kahan fass gaya main...abb back out bhi nai kar sakta...pakka majak ban jayega aaj mera...n the 2nd boy standing one side n thinking aaj tho gaya yeh...

1St boy starts saying bt makes mistike saying bow 4 za...instead of 4 tyms bow bows he says 5 tyms...

So the gang (except kr) shouts " stop"

Ne : u made a mistake start from beginning 1ce again...n laughs

Boy : ok...he starts again bt this tym he makes mistake saying bow 5 za..instead of 5 tyms he says only 4 tyms...

Again all shouts stop...n makes him to start 1ce again...it went on like that for almost 20 - 25 mins...the gang was enjoying fully n laughing like hell...some more students also gAthered n enjoying the scene...it was very embarassing for that boy bt cant help..he had to complete the task any how...n finally...yess finally he says it with full concentration n succeeds also all clapped for him bt he was not in a state to feel happy after that hummilation..

Sh : (controlling her laughter goes to him ) well done mr chocolate hero...forwarding her hand " welcome to st louis"

1St boy : shaking hand with her ...thanks (this tym he smiles)

Vicky hmm tho abb iska kya kare pointing at 2 nd boy who was enjoying with others till now his frnd under going such hummilation infront of the whole clg...listening to Vickys words he gets scared lil bit...

All ( except kriya who was still playing game) looked at 2nd boy...1st boy goes to him n whispers best of luck..this makes him more nervous...

Rinni : he z so handsome...look at his muscles...

Bh : haan yaar..muscles tho bahot accha banaya hai isne ...manna padega...

Ne :sh isko kuch aise dethe hai ki sari girls enjoy kare...munda bahot handsome hai..

Vicky : kagu kya main hAndsome nai hoon??

Ne : babu tum tho sabse handsome munda ho mere lie..main tho baaki ladkio ki enjoyment ke bare mein baat kar rahi thi...

Vicky : ohh okay...then its ok...

Sh : hmm tho ideA...SO mr handsome

Vicky : w8 w8 guys..kriya se tho pucha hi nahi iss ladke ke barein mein uski instincts kya kehti hai..

Bh : haan bhool hi Gaye the...kriya batana iske barein mein bhi kuch..

Till now kriya has not looked at 2nd boy...she was so much involved in her game..bt after her statement on 1st boy, the 2nd boy kept on looking at her oftenly just to get 1 look from her...bt unfortunately she was unaware of all this n busy in her own world...now after Bharats sentence, the 2nd boy hopes to get 1 glimpse from her...but unfortunately it did not work this tym also..

Kr : guys dnt disturb me...bahot tension hai..final level mein hoon..n yahan tak pahuch ke main harna nahi chahti ye race...so plz carry on..

Ne : hey bhagwaan ye ladki kab sudregi..

Vi : leave it neha...let her play...itni tension mein hai wo hum usse disturb nhi karte...

Sh ne ri bh looks at vi n says : kriya ki chamcha...

Listening to this the 2nd boy smiles shaking his head slightly...

Bh : hAs q rahe ho ?? Aajao idhar...

Sh: so mr handsome...ur task is very simple...all u have to do is...looks at all the girls who are drooling over him...yeah ur task is do 50 pushups...

2Nd boy thinks " basss...I can do aram se...Maine tho kuch serious hummilation hoga socha tha like with my frnd"

Bh : par u have to do it in such a way that all girls should get impressed n all boys should get jealous of u...

2Nd boy : what ?? U mean my pushups should seduce girls...

Rinni : if u think so then yes...girls should not take eye from u...do it in that way...

2Nd boy thinks for a while then says ok I am ready...

Kriya(shouts) : come on come on u can do it ...u can do it..

All gets shocked n looks at her...then they realize kriya is talking abt herself about completing her race game...n she did not even paying attention towards whatever happening there...

Sh : thank god...kitna darr gayi thi main..kria aise kisi ladkee ke bare mein...no.no

Vi : come on sh hammari kr ko lekar aise tho mat socho yar...she is diff... not like other girls...

Again all looks at him n says " kriya ka chamcha"

2Nd boy " oh god miss kriya look at least 1ce here...I m going crazy to get 1 look from u towards me"

Sh : s o mr...start...

All girls are waiting to witness how he vl impress them though they are already impressed by his handsome look, they dnt want to show it..

2Nd boy slowly removes his t-shirt showing his well built body, starts pushups...that was enough to make the atmosphere pin drop silent...after few secs kriya shouts again I did it yess yess n kisses her cell..the boy stops doing pushups for couple of secs n looks at her n smiles shaking his head..bt again he continues with his pushups...the same silent 1ce again...that z when neha jumps off listening " phuTtt" sound which was becoz of bursting the bubble which kriya was making from bgum...kriya looks at the boy who was doing pushups...n throws the bgum from her mouth...den she looks at the girls surrounding him n staring at him ...including her frnds neha rinni sh also..she gets annoyed...jumps off from the step where she was sitting n takes the t-shirt which was next to d boy doing pushups,

Kr : get up...

All girls now come to their senses...n curse kriya for ruining such a breath taking moment...all other girls except sh ne ri, leaves the place silently disappointed...

The boy is happy now seeing kriya looking at him...n he looks at sh...

Kr : I said get up...nowww (almost shouts)

Huh done for now...I hope u guys will like it...I vl edit any typo errors in few mins...till then sry...

Edited by smileysmi - 12 years ago

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madhu

@Madhu_ArSha

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Me first. . . . . . . .
Me first. . . . . . . .
Me first. . . . . . . .
Yupieee. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
OMG SMI. . . . . . . . .
Super awsome update. . . . . . . . . . . . .
Lovd it truly. . . . . . .
Kriya is just superb,
i realy loved her charactr,
buss ek look on swayum and kriya ne uska puri histroy-geography-physics bata diya. . . .super IMPRESSIVE. . . . . . .
Sharon and gang ne ache se swayum ki lagayi,kya ragging ki hai,bahut maza aya. . . .
And bechaara rey,
kriya ki ek look ke liya mara ja raha tha. . . . .
And kriya apne game mai busy thi. . . .
Bechara swayum kitni humilation sehan ki usne. . . . . . . . . . . . . .
And rey seducing all gals around her.hahahaha. . . . . . . . . . . .
Kriya ne sabkuch kitni jaldi band krwa diya. . . .
Smi nxt part jaldi update krna. . .egarly waiting 4 it. . . . . .

Edited by Madhukumari - 12 years ago