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Posted: 12 years ago
ookay sorry for late
but i love this
Kr ka dance to amazing he hota hey
then rey ka plan
yaar jaldu bta na why kriya tolrating that idiot shivam
and then bittu ki talk
haha viky ney kya bool diya
vo gf pakka uski daadi ja naani hey
or vo musibat mey phas gya
update soon m waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update

gang reaction on reys gf was amazing
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Posted: 12 years ago
Note :

heya people...how are you all doing? Actually I wanted to make an announcement that I am changing this into FF instead
Of ss...because this story has lots of exciting scenes which needs more updates...so I think this story will be bit longer one to categorize as SS...AND ONE MORE HUMBLE REQUEST PLEASE WHO ARE NOT INTERESTED IN READING MY WORKS, DELETE ME FROM YOUR BUDDY LIST...plz...because though I dont have that huge buddy list but the thing is I visit 2 more forums in IF so I have friends from their also..so sending pms is a very irritating task for me I need to carefully select people to avoide sending pms to non d3 forum members...and I always update through my smartphone...it obviously takes lil bit more time thAN Laptops...so please...and the next update is ready...but I will post it soon...

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Posted: 12 years ago


Will update in few hours...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: smileysmi



Will update in few hours...

yaay
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Posted: 12 years ago
i really like all your works...
but this time my comment will be in short as i am not well... i have gone sick...
continue soon and pm me... but will comment it late do not mind...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Thank you all for lovely comments.. PLEASE SEE THE NOTE ON PREVIOUS PAGE (PG 51)... here is the next part...hope you guys will like it...

recap :

Vicky : will tell you...bittu pehle main akele rehta tha I used to manage somehow..but abb rey aur swayam ke sath rehta hoon..n inko bahar kI khane ka aadat nahi hai..because goa main rey ki girlfriend thi inhe banake khilane...yahan pe koi nahi hai...so plz mere sath aajao..salary tum decide karo..

Bittu : rey bayya ki girlfriend hai?(shocked)

It was then every one realised what Vicky said unknowingly...

Sharon : rey ki girlfriend?(almost whisper)


Part 12:

All were shocked to the core...swayam wanted to clear this misunderstanding but thought against it because he somewhere in his heart unknowingly felt that the speed at which kriya and rey are becoming close, this misunderstanding is needed to clear their opinion about each other...it will make them to realize what exactly they are feeling for each other...whether itz just a friendship? Or more than friendship? Or itz just a attraction or crush?...he just chose to keep quite in this situation...let kriya and rey react on this situation and clear their misunderstanding between them by themselves...

All were very angry as if they already started considering rey for kriya unknowingly...bittu sharon and neha were shaken and also angry on Vicky...they didn't know why...they all were looking at vicky with hurt visible on their faces...but one person was continuously staring at rey...and that was kriya...rey too was trying to clear the misunderstanding so he was trying to say something to Sharon and bittu but all were busy giving hurtful look to Vicky as if asking him for explanations...after few secs when rey thought itz waste to tell them anything right now and looks at kriya who was looking at him as if he had cheated on her, kriya clears her throat which brings back all of them to the present...

Kriya :so bittu kiske sath rehna pasand karoge? We all need you...but itz your choice...

Bittu : huh...di actually sabse jada jarurat meri I think (looks at Vicky and then at rey then avoiding them) swayam bayya ke ghar mein hai...(Vicky felt bad that bittu doesn't want to take his name now) so...

Kriya : cool...good decision bittz...chalo now will go for some shopping and then will get your luggage and I will drop you to (pause)(looks at vicky and then at rey then avoiding them as bittu did)swayam's place (looks at swayam with a slight smile and swayam also returns the same)

Bittu :(who observed kriyas sadness) haha di shopping?

Kriya : haan kyun nahi? I am your di and I want to buy a special gift for you...

Bittu : really?(excited) what is it di?

Kriya :hmm ...you will get to know in few mins...she goes to Bharat and whispers something in his ear and Bharat smiles and nods his head in approval...

Kriya : so guys you all go to (pause)...I mean bittu ke rehne ka arrangementz karo... main bittu and Bharat will join you guys after sometimes...bittz ko uske gift ke sath I will drop him there...

All simply nods their head as they were still in shock and were hurt...within 2 days they had developed so many hopes for kriya..in rey...

Kriya bittu and Bharat left the place in bharat's car...once kriya left,

Neha : rey u have gf?

Rey just nods his head first up and down and then left and right...

Sharon:(gets irritated with this response...keeping her hands on her hips) what does it mean? Yes or no?

Rey : both(takes a deep breath)

Neha :matlab?

Rey : matlab ...when I was 8 years old my parents brought a girl to our home who was just 14 years old that time but she was upset because she had lost her husband in an accident...I mean you know she got married at the age of 13...and when she started adjusting with her husband, he died in an accident and she was mentally very weak that time...my parents brought her to take care of me because she didn't want to go to her parents house who were very poor...she slowly started forgetting everything and adjusting with me...within no time we became very close friends...I never used to call her di or something...I always used to call her by name...then slowly I started calling her my gf...every one knows her as my gf only...I even took her to many parties with me and introduced her as my gf proudly...but all know that how special she is to me...when our(rey swayam and Vicky) parents moved to abroad, she was the one who took care of me n swayam...she is my second parent, my di, my friend n my everything...and whenever our parents tried to convince her for second marriage, she always said that " I got my reason to lead my life...my small world ...reyansh...I want to live my life seeing him grow in his life...I want to see his real gf I want to see him settle in his life I want to dance in his marriage I want to take care of his children like how I took care of him till now...I want to be a part of his life...be it as a second mother or di or even as a guardian of his children..."...so she is my everything...I took her to parents meet every year on behalf of my parents when they went to abroad to settle...its like she is a major part of my life...its just I address her as gf but she z one of the most respectable person in my life after my parents...

All were speechless to listen the whole story...and also felt guilty for overreacting without knowing the truth...

Sharon : am...I am...really sorry rey...without knowing anything I reacted in that way...

Neha : haan rey...sorry...

Rey : smiles - hey thats ok...no need to say sorry...

Vicky : guys wo sab tho teek hai par kriya...

Rey : saale sab tere waje se ho raha hai...she wont talk to me now...

Swayam : (smirks) kyun?

All becomes confused with swayams question...

Rey : kya kyun?

Swayam :(putting his arm on reys shoulder) kyun kriya will not talk to you now?(stressing each word)

By the smirk on his face, others understood what swayam trying to do...so they just starts enjoying the scene...

Rey was numb for a second to answer...he immediately got the straight answer from his heart and mind when swayam asked the question but was unable to accept it...itz been just 2 days he met kriya...

Rey :(clears his throat) what...what are you asking dude...itz nothing like that...wo ...wo bas ...

Swayam : bas what?

Rey :(removes swayams arm from his shoulder and goes 2-3 steps ahead) wo...bas we shared lot of things...with ...each...other aur usse lagega I have not shared such an important thing with her...tho...wo

Swayam: tho wo...gussa hojayegi?(completes reys sentence for him)

Rey : huh...leave it...I will talk to her(almost whisper) chalo lets go and arrange a room for bittu...warna ms perfectionist fir se gussa hojayegi(saying this he turns towards the others who were all grinning like idiots seeing reyz confusion and reactions for swayams questions)

Rey : what?(confused or may be understood their grin)

Sharon : nothing...letz go guys...

All went to Vickyz house and cleaned a room for bittu...actually vickyz house was very big...it had 6 bedrooms (just imagine :D) but he used only 2 or 3 bedrooms and others were locked...so they were done with the cleaning part and about to start setting up the bed and other things, kriya with bittu and Bharat comes to Vickyz house ...all goes out to see kriyaz gift for bittu...

Bittu comes with a racing bicycle with wide grin...he directly goes to neha and Sharon...

Bittu : uuuhhuuu ye dekhiye di kriya di and Bharat bayya ne milke muje ye bicyle gift kiya hai...howz it? Ye bahot accha hai na...bilkul stylish and racing wala...wow...muje tho abhi bhi yakin nahi horaha hai that I got racing bicycle...u know I just told once to kriya di that i like this race wala bicycles...she bought one for me.. and neha di I also bought a Mobile phone for myself...this is the first thing I ever bought for myself from my salary other than food...itz a basic model but thatz okay...jab acche se earn karna start karunga then will take accha wala...

All had a wide smile on their faces seeing bittus happiness and excitement...

Kriya : so guys bittu ki room ready hai?

All starts looking at each other...because they only could manage to clean the room...they still need to settle things in the room...

Kriya : (looking at everyones faces(ignoring rey and even Vicky completely)) okay...I got it...so the task is incomplete...huh...bittu chal kaam pe lagte hai...will arrange your room first...

Bittu : haan di lets go...

All again resume their task setting up bittu's room...once they are done all went to living room and settled on couch...

Bittu : aap log baito main sab ke lie kuch snacks aur coffee banata hoon...vic(he was about to call Vicky then stops ) swayam bayya can you show me kitchen?

Swayam : yeah let's go...Bharat can you come with me for a minute..?

Saying this swayam takes bittu and Bharat to kitchen and while bittu starts preparing some snacks, swayam tells them about the rey's gf mistery...bittu and Bharat also feel sorry for rey and vicky...



Done ...I know itz a short update but the thing is I want to cover the next scene in a single update ...so sorry...next will be the super long update..promise...

Precap :

Rey enters kriya's room through window..."reyansh please leave aapki gf ko pata chalega tho she will feel bad...please leave"...

All are sitting in canteen...kriya looking at rey "bhedha ghar...yeh maine kya kardia...without knowing the truth I was punishing rey..."..." wow rey looking handsome today"...rey smiles and about to reply kriya but bittu glares at him...so again pretending he is still mad at her, leaves the canteen..


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Posted: 12 years ago
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unres


yipeee

me first...

lets party... 🥳🤪

lets dance!!!!

love the update

the back story of rey having a GF was wow

it was really well written 👏👏

i loved it like anything

amazing piece of work

and bharat + kriya ne bittu ko cycle gift ki

aww!!!

and the gang cleaning bittu's room... 😛😛
cant imagine... 😆😆


all in all dhasu update
ek dum jhakkas
loved it
update soon
and do pm me

thank you for the pm
🤗

i'm waiting...

Edited by spongy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...
loved it...
awww rey's gf is his everythng...
so sweet of rey's gf...
kriya bichari not aware of d truth...
hope kriyaansh MU's will b clear soon...
precap i awesome...
waitng for update...
thnx fr d pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
AWESOME

AMAZING

SUPERB

FAB

SPLENDID

FLAWLESS

ROCKING

LOVED REY'S GF SECRET

KRIA FULL ON JEALOUS

GREAT

BITTU'S GIFT N EXCITEMENT...SUPER CUTE

EVERYBODY IGNORING VICKY...Aww

PRECAP IS SPLENDID,SUPER SWEET

UPDATE SOON

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