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Roger

@HPHolic-3

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#121

Awesome update
Loved kricky bonding.Kriyansh part was nice
Waiting for next part

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glmorous_diva

@glmorous_diva

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#122

amazing part...

kria n vicky's bonding is superb...

kriyaansh part was awesome...

loved it...

thnx for pm...

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Sonia

@princessSonia

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#123

yay u updated...

loved it...

nw wat tht Shivam did???????😕

show mein kya kum kand kiye the

ki edhar bhi...😡😡

wat he did wid kriya?????😕

bdw

love KRICKY's bond...❤️

hatsoff 2 dem...😎

lastly

thnks 4 d pm...

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dancersqueen

@dancersqueen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#124

awesome...loved kriya and vicky's bonding...

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#125

loved dupdate.. its awesome...
just loved it..
al busy preparin for seminar n reyam unpackin...
vicky gets hyper on hearin abt shivam n doesnt tel them d exact reason but said he has caused prob for kria...
that shivam s just
loved kria-vicky's relationship.. it was pure n real sweet..
loved their convo..
loved how vicky said abt d gang n abt krisha's relationship how they got diff surnames n y they stay separated..
kriyaansh's convo along wit vicky's shocked expression were nice..
loved wen kria ruffled rey hair n said chabilal..
missin chabilal n romaira a lot
rey lost in kria n swayam n vicky understood it by seein him.. cho chweet vicky preparin noodles for kria ...
update next part soon..

Edited by vaishu88 - 13 years ago

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GARIMA

@grungta11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#126

amazing luved d bonding bween vi n kr...:)

n lovued d growing relationship between rey n kriya

n waiton eagrly fr d nxt part n d revelation of shivam's truth

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zona_malik

@zona_malik

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#127

"Rey : arre kr wo mera cup tha...

Its then..kr looks at him..

Kr : haan tho...?? I needed badly tho bas lelia...agn taking a sip, speaks slowly...waise bhi half cup hi hai isme tea...that means u already had half cup...so chill..

Rey : exactly...wo mera pia hua cup tha...u knw...

Kr : so what..? Tum apne frnds ke sath ek cup mein tea ya ek plate mein food share nahi karte kya? ?

Rey : smiles...okay okay sry mam...u have it...

Kr : smiles...tum mana bhi karte tho bhi main ye tea peethi...

Vi : lagta hai some1 is in good mood...jagada karke aane ke baad bhi..

Kr : han...nahi...I mean haan I am in good mood bt maine kisi se jagada nahi ki aaj...

Vi : accha ...aunty ke sath argument nahi hui aaj tumhari ..??

Kr : finishes her tea n keeps it back on the table...n then snatches Vicky s cup n says - nahi...aaj argue karne ka mood nahi tha tho nahi ki...mom ko bola vi ke ghar ja rahi hu n agayi yhan...

Vi : smiles...good improvements..

Kr : I knw...keeps the cup on table..folds her leg n sits comfortably on the couch...so whats up...kya kar rahe the aap log..??

Sw : kuch nahi bas gappe maar rahe the...u tell me...preparations hogaye kal ki seminars ki??

Kr : yeah...bas 1-2 examples add karne hai 2 presentations mein...I vl do it at nyt if I get time..otherwise I vl manage without adding them in slides...

Rey: impressive..if u dnt mind can I do it for u..?? I mean bht tired n frustrated lag rahe ho...

Kr : haan...seminars ke sath sath chat room mein sabko reply bhi karna was lil bit frustrating bt duty hai...I have to do it...

Rey : ya saw ur suggestions...manna padega...sabko unke lie jo jada tuff subject hai uspe seminar dene advice kar rahe the...taki they vl get grace marks in that...good idea to make them work on thr tuffest subject...

Kr : smiless...good observation...

Rey : smiles...thanks...waise tum kaunse subject mein seminar dene wale ho. Kal??

Vi : accounts..

Sw : hmm tho its a diff subject for kr...??

Vi : no ...she z the topper in accounts..

Swarey gets confused..

Kr : I dnt have tym to think abt my tuffest subject n work on that...so I am giving seminars on most easiest subject for me..during exams tym I vl utilize more tym to work on other subjects than accounts..

Rey : cheating...sabko kuch aur advice karo n khud kuch aur karo...not fair..

Kr : mr ags...kal se apna post sambhaalo den u vl understand how difficult it z to manage everything along wid managing ur studies..

Rey : okay okay sry...I was just kidding..

Kr : I knw...its ok...vicky bhook lagi hai...

Vi : no way kriya...

Kr : plzzz...making baby face..

Vi : no...aise shakal mat banao ..i am not going to prepare anything for u...order karta hoon kuch...

Kr : plz na Vicky...bas Maggie hi tho mang rahi hoon...2 min tho lagte hai banane mein...plz banado na...

Vi : bt kriya kuch order karte hai na...plzz

Kr : nahi chalo utho...I vl help u...she pushes vi into the kitchen...the other 2 also follows them...smiling at the bonding kr n vi shares..

Kr sits on the slab...n vicky starts preparing Maggie for every1..

Rey : wah kya help kar rahi ho vicky ki ??

Kr : yahan par kitchen mein aake baiti hoon yahi bahot bada help hai...q Vicky..??

Vi gives her angry look on which kr keeps her finger on her lip saying sry...

Sw : waise kr how did u say abt me only by seeing at me. For the 1st tym only .? ?

Kr : I have this habbit of studying on face reading...I research on it all the tym...I studied so many articles on it...so bol lethi hoon ..

Rey : waise mere bare mein nahi bataya...he was standing next to kr whr she was sitting on the slab..

Kr : tumare barein mein..smiles...moves her hand on reys hair, chabilaal...

Rey : chabilal ...?? Ye kaun hai..??

Kr : tum ..?? Tumhi ne tho kaha tha tumhare bare mein batane kelie...

Rey : oh tho my new nick name...miss ramaira se..??

By listening this both sw n vi gets shocked n looks at rey ...who was busy in staring at kr...they understood every thing...

Sw puts his hand on Rey s shoulder to stop him staring at kr..

Vi : kr tune aaj bittu ko q daanta...?? Bechara ro raha tha..

Kr : Maine usse manners sikhaya bas...bado se aise baat karte hai..??aise majak udhate hai.??

Vi : bado se ya mujse..??

Kr : silent for few secs then - w whatever...waise bhi clg ke boys kya usse kam bhigaad rahe hai..?? Apne love letters uske thru dilwate haI..n tumhe kya lagta hai ki bittu un letters ko bina pade de deta hai..?? Aise hi ??

Vi : tho thume pata hai ki bittu wo love letters padta hai.??

Kr : u mean wo sachme padta hai ?? Muje tho doubt tha..chodungi nahi mein uss sale ko..

Vi : kriya language..

Kr : sry...

Vi : chodo..n han uss shi ke saamne kab tak aise silent rahoge..?? He z misusing it..

Kr : arre haan...rey plz b careful...abse tum mere sath kam karoge tho u have to face shivam...wo tumhe kuch na kuch jaroor kahega hamesha...u plz handle him carefully...uske baathe bahot hurtful hote hai...dnt take them seriously...otherwise thumhare identity ko hi badal denge uske baatein..

Rey was about to reply bt kr continues agn..

Kr : usse na...obsession hai kriya naam ka...ek ajeeb si paagalpan...wo kisi ko b kr ke kareeb nahi dhek sakta ...he vl definitely try to hurt u rey...she was almost in tears...remembering all those bitter words which shi said to her in past..

Vi was hell shocked bcoz after that dark incident, kr never talked abt that with any1..not even with him or with sh...even kr stopped talking abt shi completely...she became a serious person after that incident..she stoped crying completely...yes after that nyt, kr did not cry till now..bt today she spoke abt that incident with rey...not completely bt atleast said something...

Rey understood the situation of both vi. N kr...

Rey : dnt wry...I vl handle him..

Kr smiles n says : I know...which gives another shock to vi ..bcoz after speaking abt that incident, vi expected kr vl bcome sad remembering all those things bt here she z smiling with rey..."

loved vicky n kriya's bonding..

vicky's reactn while talking abt shivam etc..

n dis whole scene den..

AWESOME update..

CHABILAL..

n kria being comfortable wid rey..

UPDATE SOON.

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keetha...

@keetha...

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#128

awesome yar... thanks 4 the pm

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smileysmi

@smileysmi

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#129

Thank you all for such lovely comments...I know last part was not so interesting but as per story it needed...I hope u guys will like this part...thanks. a lot once again...I am updating the next part now...enjoy ..

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smileysmi

@smileysmi

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#130

Part 6:

Vicky finally prepares Maggie...he pours all the Maggie in one big bowl n takes 2 forks ...reyam gets confused...

Rey : itna bada bowl mein Maggie...??
Sw : ya...n only 2 forks?? No plates??
Vicky: ye hammara style hai Maggie khane ka...n ye dono forks aapke lie hai..main aur kriya tho hath se kathe hai...
Rey : Maggie hath se??
Kr: yup...main tho kehti hoon aap dono bhi try karo...bahot maja ayega...
Rey : achha...?? Bt (after thinking for few mins) no no I cant...main tho fork se khaunga...I am not used to it...
Sw : me too bt I am ready to try...

All 4 starts having Maggie...they enjoy a lot seeing kiddish behavior of kriya...she some times used to take single long noodle in hand n by making srrr sound she used to eat...they had nice tym...by looking at the other 3 enjoying having Maggie with hands, rey felt guilty for not trying like sw...soon after finishing Maggie they all settled in living room on couch with coffee...Vickys ph rings...bt kr takes it n receives the call..

Kr : hello darling...kaise ho baby...

The caller : ollle mela sona...main teek hu ..tu kaisi hai. ??

Both burst out laughing...

Kr : sry neha tumhe disappoint karne kelie by picking ur call..ye lo Vicky ko deti hoon...

Ne : nahi nahi dats ok ..I am feeling tired...main usse nyt if possible bat karlungi...I need lil bit of rest now...

Kr : r u sure..??(keeps the ph on speaker)

Ne : han na yar...sure hoon...waise bhi gs ki tarah khali nahi hoon main Vicky ke sath gappe ladane...I am very busy girl u know..?? (With full on attitude)

Kr : neha ki bacchi teri tho...chodungi nahi main tuje...

Ne : meri bachi ...? Hayyee...ghee shakkar tere mhu mein...bt u know kr meri bachhi na bilkul Vicky ke jaise hona chahie (she doesn't know that ph is on speaker)...wo halki si 1 gaal(cheek) pe dimple...mann karta hai ki bas...

Kr : winking at Vicky...kya mann karta hai ?? Bolna.??

Vicky was blushing n also happy to know what neha thinks on his dimple...the other 2 were enjoying the scene..

Ne : haha..chodna...kuch kuch hota hai tum nahi samjoge...(dramatically)

Kr : nautanky..waise itna Vicky ke barein mein baat karne ke baad bhi r u sure u dont want to talk to him ryt now??

Ne : yup I am very much sure...waise tu bahot kush hai aaj kya baat hai?? Haan ?? (In teasing way)

Kr : standing on couch with full action...main hammesha kush rehti hoon baalike...q ki i am still single...haaahaha (in much dramatic way)

Ne : oh I c...bt I dnt think u can keep "I am single" tag for more days now...

Kr : q?? Main single thi ...hoon...aur hammesha rahungi...koi prob ??

Ne : smiles shaking her head n says...draamebazz..aaj jo teri halat dekhi na maine subha ragging ke waqt...pause for few secs..I think tumhe wo tumhara dream boy...kya naam tha uska..? Jo hammesha bola karti thi. Mujse...??

Kr : removes the speaker mode...jumps off from couch...shut up neha...aisa kuch nahi hai..wo tho main 2 yrs back bataya karti thi...I dnt even remember that name (looking at rey)...

Ne : accha ..??(smiles)...okay okay leave it...bt remember aisa kuch bhi tumhare lyf mein hua na tho pehle muje batayegi tu samji...??

Kr : nahi hoga aise kuch bhi mere lyf mein...abb paka mat tu...rakhti hu mein ph...

Ne : okay bye sweety...gn...
Kr : yuck neha...ye sweety kuchi ku wale batein mujse mat kar...bye...disconnects the call n sits on the couch again...with serious face...

Vi : kya hua...? Aap dono itna ladte q ho ek dusre se??

Kr : chodona...I am not in a mood...ye jo committed girls hote hai aise q hote hai..?? Har choti choti baaton ko yaad rakte hai..? ? N har cheez ko directly le jake "pyar" ko hi connect karte hai...I mean koi insaan yuhi kush nahi ho sakta kya...?? N2yrs back ki baatein...? Huh...

Vi understood that thr is something more to it...kr wont get upset on such silly things..thr z definitely something related to kr dream ...vi thinks "pata lagana padega"

Vi : arre leave it kr...it happens sometyms...dont spoil ur mood...chalo hammare presentations complete karte hai...tumhe bhi kuch examples add karne hai na ..? U do it on reys laptop...n mein bhi tb tk mera presentation complete karta hoon...den I vl drop u home...

Kr : yeah...cool..

Rey gives her his laptop n was about to go...

Kr : sit na...tumhe meri presentation dikhati hoon...n tumne kaha tha na u vl add ex ..?? U can do that if u want...

Rey : he was very happy...he sits next to kr...sw n vi become busy in preparing vickys presentation

Kr shows rey her presentations...n explains here n thr whatever she has prepared on few things in between...rey was very much impressed...the standard of the presentations were very high...then he took the laptop n adds few ex which kr has missed out...n also in some other parts also whr he thinks some general examples would be better..kr looks all those edited parts by rey n says...

Kr : Vicky lagta hai iss bar competition bht bhari padne wali hai in exams...

Vi : smiles n says...wo tho hai bcoz these 2 (swarey) are also toppers of thr previous clg...

Kr : interesting...I need to buck up this tym then...

Swarey smiles at kriky...

Kr : chalo den I vl leave now...rani laxmi bhai talwaar leke khadi hogi abb tak..its too late...n thanks rey...

Vi : shaitaan (hits on her head)...aunty ko rani laxmi bhai bolti hai...

Kr : smiles...

Vi drops kr to her house...then he returns back ..n as soon as he enters the house, he calls ne..

Vi. : hey neha ...sleeping??

Ne : no re idiot...aur kitni baar bolu main tuje ki jab kr aayi hui hoti hai tumhare yahan tab ph math utha...han ??

Vi : arre usne khud ph rcv kia tho main kya karu..?

Swarey takes the ph n keeps it on speaker...so that they can tease vi later on..

Ne : han tho silent pe rakhdo na uske aate hi...koi disturbance hi nahi hogi...

Vi : okay I am sry...nxt tym aise hi karunga...

Ne : senses the sadness in his tone - babu I am sry...u knw na baby kr bas tumse hi saari baatein share karti hai...n she comes to ur house to share everything with u...or just to relax her mind...uss incident. Ke bad wo sirf tumhare sath hi comfortable hai kuch bhi share karne...so I just dont want any disturbance between u 2 in such situation...dats it...I am sry...

Vi: it s ok ne...I understand...accha leave it...tum ye batao ke ye kr ka dream boy ka kya chakkar hai..??

Ne : silent for few secs then : are kuch nahi ...wo tho bas school days mein aise hi bola karti thi...nothing serious..

Vi : senses that ne vl not tell him anything abt that...okay chalo vl meet u 2mrw in the clg...I need to call sh also...u know na..

Ne : ya ya..go ahead...bye gn..

Then vi calls sh..n narrates everything..(this tym he goes far from swarey n talks...even swarey dont stop him bcoz they understood the concern for kr in everybodies life)

Sh : u mean kr ne khud shi ke bare mein rey se baat ki..?

Vi. : yup n on top of that she was not even sad after talking abt that idiot...she was smiling with rey...

Sh : unbelievable...I mean meri kr aaj itne dino bhaad freely smile kar rahi hai..did u observe in the clg..??

Vi : yeah sh..I observed..we got to c the old kriyas glimpse today...after almost 1 n half yrs..bt I dnt knw what is the kr dream boy mystery...?? Even ne bhi nai batayi muje...thr z something imp which we both dnt know sh..

Sh : hmm n vl not get to know now...bcoz ne tho nai batayegi pakka..

Vi : koi baat nai vl come to know soon when we go to farmhouse for outing next tym..

Sh : smiles...good idea...waise vi...can I ask u something..?? If u dnt mind..

Vi : yeah sh plz..

Sh : iz ur frnd...I mean reyansh..is he single??

Vi : smiles...yeah..he z single..

Sh : okay...n I mean...what he thinks abt girls?? I mean girls ko leke kaise react karta hai..?? I mean itna handsome hai...I am sure girls followers bhi bht honge uske bt he z still s ingle tho I am just curious to know..

Vi : haha..relax sh..u can ask me anything abt him without any hesitation...afterall yeh kriya ka mamla hai..

Sh : u understood..

Vi : haan...actually I have the same thing in my mind...kr n rey makes perfect couple..n yeah abt rey...u dnt need to wry on that...many girls proposed him bt he z waiting for his ram...I mean wo ek diff ladki ke lie wait kar raha hai...n he says ye " different" ka meaning usse wo ladki milne ke baad hi pata chalega...idiot..

Sh : haha..cool then...vl c in the clg then 2mrw..

Vi..: yeah bye...gn

Done...

Edited by smileysmi - 13 years ago