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Roger

@HPHolic-3

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Awesome update
It was such a blackmailing update..:p
Swayam blackmailing sharon part was really nice.Loved the way he asked sharon's address😆 He deserve a slap..:p
Perfect ending for such a amazing ss
Loved it

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Rajeshwari

@-Raj-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Tanya!!

Beautiful end to a brilliant os!!

Loved the last lines especially!!

Swayam didn't forget her for a second!

Swayam blackmailed her nd poor girl her heart coudnt just stop caring for him!

Lovely end to a painful love story!

Thanks the PM!

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Shubhangi(shubhi)

@d3fan4eva

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Perfect last part...
Beautifully written Tanya!!
Well done girl...ur an amazing writer!!😊

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_bellaSwan_

@_bellaSwan_

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

dear it was wonderful ss finally dey are together . u have penned sharon pain very beautifully . perfect finish . thanx for pm

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Afshan Yasmeen

@Afshan9

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Hi Tanya...

I read all the chapters of ur Swaron SS Jab Dil Miley in one go and next I read Swaron SS Jodi maker vs Dil Breaker, then next I read this Swaron OS Second Beginning...

I loved all ur works...

The main thing I have noticed is Ur writing stlye for SS is very different from that of ur OS.

After reading all I again and again went through both ur SS and OS and for my surprise I couldn't find any similarity in all of ur works..

Plz consider this as a huge compliment as Most of the writers bring their unique style to represent it as their signature style. But I was totally mesmerized on ur writing style...

Hats off to U as only few people have such a great talent..

And now coming to ur Post I loved it from the depth of my heart. I could feel the pain of Sharon in my heart. Tears rolled down my eyes when I read the complete second Chapter...

Bravo man...

U deserve much more compliments than this...

But right now I'm out of words to compliment U..

Once again Love U a lot for ur writing skills..

Lots n Lots n Lots of love, hugs 🤗🤗🤗 n kisses... Muuuaaahhh...

Take care... Bye...

Feel free to comment or PM me if U felt something wrong in my post...

Edited by Afshan9 - 12 years ago

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Sunil

@Suni1986

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

lovely os
finally thy meet each other n want to love til thy die
l love d arrangement done by swayam for her

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Read the last 2 chapters together and though it took so long, I'm glad that Swayam finally managed to pacify Sharon and they're finally together !!

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Anu_TanHa

@Anu_TanHa

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

fantastic ending of a fabulous love story

very nice update swayam is all nautanki but he loves to tease her to know that she still loves him madly.beautiful end and start another one i know you have treasure of beautiful and mind blowing concept so i am waiting tic toc

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Lassi_TanHa

@Lassi_TanHa

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Awsum update
Swaron part on d cliff was cute.. 😳
beautiful endg swayam decoratg her room with deir memories i Loved it..😊

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#70

loved d update..
it was awesome..
swayam blackmailin sharon that he ll jump n sharon angry on him n hurt...
sharon surprised to c d decorations in her room n knew swayam ll b in guest room n found him n confessed her love was superb...
loved d last words by swayam cry til u want coz i wont let u cry from tomo was brilliantly penned...

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