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Sunil

@Suni1986

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

it was awesome update

sharon nd swayam pain longiness, away from love of there life
restaurent scene was nice

sharon situation like broken frame nd sharon outburst as usual to state of her mind
swayam try to make her understand bt all his efforts gone in vein

end was good bt once again 3 years leap yar

love d update

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Phoenix_

@Phoenix_

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Awesome... 😆 I love ur OS.. ⭐️ Thankx for the pm..

Edited by Love_shantu - 12 years ago

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Twinkle_d3

@Twinkle_d3

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Its painful update bt loved it..
But a request pls give us happy wala update na ..
Cvs ne pahle hi pain bhar rakha h

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tiyasingh

@tiyasingh

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

u dragged me into tears..

Super-awesome update..

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Divya

@Winter_Falls

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

awesome update...just eagerly waiting for next part..update soon.. 😊

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Beautiful part dear...
loved the way swayam is trying to mend his mistake...
but sharon..poor girl has gone through enough
she is having her reason to be angry at him...
loved the way she realized the emptiness in her life..
a husband..a baby..lovely execution of a beautiful concept dear

Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

its a beautiful update...
loved each n every line...
d way u show cased d love pain loneliness were fab just fab...
everyline was beautiful ful of emotions...
u described sharon's feelings brilliantly...
loved d update...
rohan's character n his words which brought out fresh set of pain to sharon's already broken life was nice..
swayam comparin his life n s way he left sharon to d shattered photo frame was superb..
sharon's outburst on swayam wen he came was justified brilliantly d way she said how he broke off al d promises he made n how she s feelin lonely was fab..
sharon who s longin for family n again remembers swayam's broken promise wen ever she sees family wit their babies were nice...
lastly tina's baby d way she held was another blow for swayam for breakin his promise...
d sentense which sharon said maybe happiness s not meant for me was very painful...
lovely os... its fantastic fantabulous n mindblowin...
pm me d next update soon...

haaa am tired this s d very 1st comment am givin this biggg in forum from d time i joined in...

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Simren

@DanCing_DiVa_SK

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Tanya 🤗
Firstly m really sorry re for commenting soo late'was a bit busy re so I didn't get time to read'sorryyy'coming to the updates:

Chapter 1:
Awesome part' Pain of separation was beautifully written'.Sharon lost her whole family on the same day'.and Swayam left her aswell which broke her heart into pieces''her pain, her love, was beautifully described'.this was a very painfull update'..loved it'.

Chapter 2:
Yet again fantabulous update''Sharon pain was clearly visible in her words'..her feelings were beautifully described''and tina and veer got married and have a baby boy aswell'.awwiiieee'.but Swaron waha ke waha ki atke hue hai''the way Sharon said that maybe happiness is not meant for me was very painful'..Loved this chappy equally'..

Can't wait to read the next chappy please jaldi jaldi se update karde''waiting eagerly to read the next chappy n hope we get a happy end for this beautiful OS'.. 😃

Luv u❤️

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_bellaSwan_

@_bellaSwan_

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

ya it was amazing one dear but very painful .u have penned sharon pain very beautifully
it touched my heart . iam excited for next update .thanx for pm dear

Edited by bhanumathitanha - 12 years ago