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Posted: 12 years ago
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dat ws amazing end dear..loved it.. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72

Lovely Update!!!!

Completely loved the os..End was beautiful too...
Keep writing :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
lovely ending ๐Ÿ˜Š
beautifully penned
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
It was a beautiful experience reading this OS...luvd the way u concluded it๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
awesome ending sweetie๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
Hey...tanya...tu mujhe pm send ker ya na ker...m one of reader jo kaise bhi tere work ko read kerne ya tere talent ko praise kerne aahi jate hai...u know we r that much chipku...n bhukkad too for ur writing stuff...
Coming to the last part it was very impressively penned n abrupt too...I know being not good frnd of urs mein aise comment ker rahi hu. but seriously I was expecting more then that...
And tannu maa kasam I like these lines...
She tried all this 6 years to not think about him, to forget him but it was like she thought of him with every breath, he was her oxygen and how possibly she could stop breathing.
Kya likha hai yaar m speechless especially reading after these lines๐Ÿ‘
She used to rub her palm on empty side of bed thinking that he might could be here every night with her and then she would not have to sleep alone fighting with the pain herself all alone.
Just hats of u yaar, n love u n plz plz plz plzzz pm me na...nw toh m requesting u re plzzz


P.S.just ignore if not interested. ...sorry I didn't mean to hurt u sorry...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Tanya ๐Ÿค—
Firstly again really sorry I know m super late'.sowwiiiee'.now I agree wid u'.lazy me'
Coming to the update
Chapter 3 was Awesome'.you have beautifully penned down each and every part of this update'.Loved Swayam he tried so hard to get her back in his life'.Swayam blackmailing her to commit suicide for her'.Sharon tried soo hard not to care'.but all her attempts of trying not care went in vain'Awiiiee Swayam planned all these things for her all her pics since the first day of college'typical lover boy'.the painful journey came to an end'..m so glad u gave it a happy ending
"I won't stop you from crying, cry as much as you want tonight because after this I won't let even a single tear dropped down from your eyes. No one can hurt you Sharon, not me and not even god." He said and rest his head on her head, and kept like that promising to be with each other and to love each other madly till they die.
These last lines were written so beautifully'..It just made me smile that this painful journey came to an end and the start of second beginning
This was OS was simply amazing'.Loved all the parts they were written very beautifully'specially loved the way you have built Swayam and Sharon's character'.so all in one loved this OS'.. your simply a fab writer yaar'just love your writing skils
Luv u โค๏ธ

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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
hey tanya ๐Ÿค—


sorry for being late ๐Ÿ˜ญ

awesome os...luved d way u described der pain n d longingness๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ ...dey was so much pain swaron were witnessing...but destiny ke aage kisi ki nahi chalti...but dis both proved dat love can win over destiny โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I m reading dis now. Reserved ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved this OS. Painful start but happy and hopeful second beginning. The last two lines you used is apt and kind of sums up the entire OS. Keep writing.

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