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LittleBitOfAlexis

@LilBitOfAlexis

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Awesome OS😊

loves swaron convo ,looking forward for next part.update soonand thanks for PM

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Tania

@--Tanzz--

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Tanya...🤗

dear...amazing concept...wow...I am loving you as a writer dear...😳

awesome OS...😊

update ASAP...

LOVE TANIA...😃

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Sunil

@Suni1986

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

it was nice update
both of them feel d pain of longiness of there love
veer nd tina r great friend of them who knows about very well know
sharon also lost her whole family too which is more painful for her
i love to read next part

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

That's so sad that Sharon lost her family and Swayam's love all in the same day. Happy that Veer and Tina are so understanding and have freed Sharon and Swayam both to be with each other !!

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Sowmya

@Joshua_TANHA

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Amazingly beautifully written update!!!

I loved loved loved it...

You have improved as a writer exponantially... emotions, scenes , everything explained so beautifully..

Swaron sepearated for 6 years... poor sharon lost her family.. I like Tina and veer too.. SUch a supporting persons, who knows swaron are meant to be each other... hope swayam wins her back as she is beyond hurt

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tejal kor

@tejukor

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Tanya yaar what os...one thing I have to say k kuch logo k paas talent inborn hota hai n u r one of them...
Just classy yaar I mean the way u describe every movement I could actually imagin them n felt like I was their with them
Tanya m speechless yaar. But m angry too bcoz I ws thinking k this os toh mujhe uska end bhi jaldi read kerne ko milega but u guys know how to engross ur reader into ur story. Toh update soon plzz...

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tejal kor

@tejukor

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Oyye n mujhe pm q nahi send kiya 😡

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Marium

@pehlanasha.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: tejukor
Oyye n mujhe pm q nahi send kiya 😡

I don't think ke tum meri buddy list main ho! 😕
Check it and if i am not there, send me buddy then.

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muzzy_sk

@muzzy_sk

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

We are inactive these days due to exams. Will be back in March end or April. Sorry for not being able to commnt.

Coming to the OS.. It was awesome!.. Loved it alot.. :).

P.s : ur writing index bookmarked :).

- Muzzy