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AmYraaA

@AmYraaA

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

damn beautiful...and too zyada emotionally packed os...wow hats off to u!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Nice beginning...engaging narration, looking forward to see how Swayam brings Sharon back to life with his luv

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Anonymous--

@Anonymous--

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Interesting OS. Waiting for the next part ! Update soon.😊

Thanks for the PM!

P.S - tanha29 aka Mihika isnt commenting on your PMs because she is inactive. She'll be back in March and will see all your PMs then.

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paro1311

@paro1311

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

nice start :) i like the veer and tina...

update soon

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Roger

@HPHolic-3

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Awesome os
Sharon's pain was beautifully penned.Tiya n Veer r truly a sweet friend.
Waiting for next part
Ps. tanha29(Mihika),muzzy-sk n ananya we all r in 10th std n our praticals,projects works r started n our exams will start from feb starting I think thatswhy they don't get time to come onli9.I m sure whenver they will be free they will comment on your works..:).Hope u understand as I will be anactive from next week.
Sorry

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Rajeshwari

@-Raj-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Loved the os!!! it was beautifully penned!

Tanya, your one of the best nd most expressive writers on iIf!

You prove that again nd again!

The pain remorse nd separation was protrayed really well!

Well done!

Do update jaldi:)

Thanks for the PM too:)

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Lassi_TanHa

@Lassi_TanHa

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Nice start..
Veer n Tina r true friends dey r carg n understandg.. I liked wen Swayam says Tina is second best in god's creations after sharon...
Swaron happy to hear deir names from other.. Poor Sharon she lost her family n love on d same day.. 😭

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Anu_TanHa

@Anu_TanHa

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

awesome story and fantastic update.

plz update soon and pm me

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Neeraj

@nature2

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

pain pain pain 😭😭 itna pain kyu Tanya😭😭

update soon Tanya

Edited by nature2 - 12 years ago

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Sunil

@Suni1986

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

it was nice update
both of them feel d pain of longiness of there love
veer nd tina r great friend of them who knows about very well know
sharon also lost her whole family too which is more painful for her
i love to read next part

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