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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: Swaron79

Thanku so much Surbhi
Yes we did talk before.. Infact you are the one who taught me all about IF rules and what in the world does AT mean and stuff !!😆
Thanku thanku so much.. appreciation coming from such a dhansu writer herself does mean a lot !!😊😊
Will update soon.. I am glad you liked it 😊

Arre haan..now i remember..umm if i am not wrong you posted a swaron siggy on if?
sry yar my memory is vaahiyaat! :-(
Taareef ke laayak kaam toh tumne kiya h yar..
as di said..you deserve it all!

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pratik vyas

@pratik54000

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Hey that was really nice update... finally got to know where Swayam was...

Sharon side was shown really nice in the update. I could feel the her state and thinking very clearly so nicely penned down.

Then Swayam was also believable because he thought he lost somebody whom he loved most and that was really nice to see he was behaving weirdly and he himself didn't knew what he was doing because he was drunk badly.

And finally it came to breaking point for Swayam and the guy now is about to explode so it would be nice to see what happens next.

Thanks for the PM. Update soon.

Pratik

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Roger

@HPHolic-3

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Awesome update
It is ur first write up r u sure because it doesn't seem soo...:)
Good to see that sharon is worried for swayam.Lol swayam become devdas😆 jokes apart but I really liked the part where sharon come n save swayam from falling.Drunk swayam was really cute n amusing hehe they r fighting like kids..:p
Precap confession time..:D
Waiting for next part

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Phoenix_

@Phoenix_

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Wow yar super like... 👍🏼

Precap main confession...!!! Awww can't wait for the next part. ❤️

[/COLOR] 😊 Thankx for the pm

Do pm me when u update next.

Edited by Love_shantu - 12 years ago

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Lassi_TanHa

@Lassi_TanHa

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Nice update..
Sharon waitg for swayam in abonded coridor with d.trust dat he would cum even wen he doesnt reply..
Liked d way she determined herself before enterg his home...
Sharon's concern for swayam n he in druken state..
U ended der.. But waitg for swaron confession..

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Nikki

@HR-DMG4life

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Nice update :-) can't wait for the confession

Nikki <3

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Sowmya

@Joshua_TANHA

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

You have written beautifully in the first attempt

Edited by Joshua_TANHA - 12 years ago

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Swaron79

@Swaron79

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Arre haan..now i remember..umm if i am not wrong you posted a swaron siggy on if?
sry yar my memory is vaahiyaat! :-(
Taareef ke laayak kaam toh tumne kiya h yar..
as di said..you deserve it all!

Ya I did make a siggy too, but I think I abused that taani chick in my post and u sent me a PM saying I shudn't be abusive cause the IF rules are strict and stuff. That was really sweet of you to do 😊

Thanku, thanku.. I really thought everyone would think it's bakwaas, so thanks a lot for the appreciation ❤️

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Swaron79

@Swaron79

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: pratik54000
Hey that was really nice update... finally got to know where Swayam was...

Sharon side was shown really nice in the update. I could feel the her state and thinking very clearly so nicely penned down.

Then Swayam was also believable because he thought he lost somebody whom he loved most and that was really nice to see he was behaving weirdly and he himself didn't knew what he was doing because he was drunk badly.

And finally it came to breaking point for Swayam and the guy now is about to explode so it would be nice to see what happens next.

Thanks for the PM. Update soon.

Pratik

Thanks a lot and I recently read your Love struck story.. Dude you are so awesome 😊

Ya I will try to update as soon as possible

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Swaron79

@Swaron79

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron
Awesome update
It is ur first write up r u sure because it doesn't seem soo...:)
Good to see that sharon is worried for swayam.Lol swayam become devdas😆 jokes apart but I really liked the part where sharon come n save swayam from falling.Drunk swayam was really cute n amusing hehe they r fighting like kids..:p
Precap confession time..:D
Waiting for next part

Hehe.. Thanks a ton 😊

It indeed is my first one.. thatswhy the whole story has been written in simple english, neither am I aware of a lot of exotic english words nor can I play with words like most writers here can,

but really thanks for the appreciation. I am glad you liked it 😃

Will update soon

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