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Originally posted by: Swaron79
Thanku guys for really appreciating my work and again I am very sorry for that 2nd update.. I know it was very tiny
Anyways I am back with the 3rd update but I don't know, it's just a little off !!When I was writing it all I could think of was TanHa and their awesomeness..God I miss them, so all this kinda got me upset cause without them I just feel very incomplete sometimes, so here's the thing.. this 3rd part didn't come out as well as I thought and also I guess it kinda lost the SwaRon- ish touch to it too,if you feel the same then I am really sorry about it !!😭 But ya the plus side is, it's kind of longer than the 2nd update 😛Part 3She drove as fast as she could, even though both her feet were badly injured and she could feel the pain but right now Swayam was all over her mind,and nothing else mattered to her at that point."But no one is opening the door""ya I have a key, ramu kaka must have locked it and went home" he said.He got out of the car but was unable to walk, he kept swaying from one side to another,so Sharon put his hand over her shoulder and helped him get to the door."You know what, just leave me.. I can manage" he said a little annoyingly and brushed her shoulder off ."Ya how well you can manage, that I can see" she said sarcastically"And Sharon Rai Prakash is back""Aur ab jitni chadi thee naa woh sab utar gayi hai, thanks to you " he said.Sharon "You know what, you are so confused.. here one moment you weren't able to believe that I was here and in the very next moment you are shrugging me off"Swayam "Ya well that's me,a jerk, ugly,loser and now a confused soul too nahi ?? Remember you used all those words for me, remember ??".Boy, he was furious.Okay sorry for ending it abruptly but that's it for this part. Please do share your views, even if you thought it was crappy !!😉Precap : It's confession time 😊 😃
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