SwaRon OS/FF : I Never Told you - Page 6

Originally posted by: sweetcherry95

lovely update, but you left it at a very wrong point

update asap and that too big one

Originally posted by: Swaron79

Thanku so much Deep 😊

Your comment just made my day !!

I am so glad you liked it.. it really means a lot 😊 ❤️

hey dear..m glad if my comment made u happy...i hv tried my hands in writing so i know..how it feels to get a long comment..u deserve it all dear😳

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

hey dear..m glad if my comment made u happy...i hv tried my hands in writing so i know..how it feels to get a long comment..u deserve it all dear😳

i love this part
sharon concern for him
nd swayam in drunken state n keep on blabering about stuff
love d way sharon handel him in his state

Originally posted by: surbhimathur

RES! wil edit it soon!
*edited*

Hey vartika! I guess we have chatted before..ryt?
Okay coming to your SS/FF...
Gawdd kaha thi mai?? How come i missed this??!!
I read all the three parts...and Muaaahh! What an amzing story and turns...awesomee!
Right from the starting when sharon woke up in tears..then in the canteen she was searching for swayam..and then reheasal hall's scene was superbb! Swayam's dance and then their small moment together..awww...! Then the cold war between them..especially from swayam's side...it was brilliant! I loved it!
Then sharon getting restless to talk to him!
The hotel scene and the conversation was cute in the car...
Now i am desperate to read further!! Update soon pleasee!!
Confession time!! Eeeppp!!
Lovely SS/FF!

Originally posted by: Suni1986

i love this part
sharon concern for him
nd swayam in drunken state n keep on blabering about stuff
love d way sharon handel him in his state

awesome...
swayam s drunk...
he doent believe sharon s there...
after reachin home he s back to angry young man avatar...
now waitin for d confesstion plz update soon...

Originally posted by: vaishu88

awesome...
swayam s drunk...
he doent believe sharon s there...
after reachin home he s back to angry young man avatar...
now waitin for d confesstion plz update soon...

Wow it was t awsm..
Drunk swayam and caring sharn treat to read..
Waiting for next part

It was nice.you have chosen a right plot to write good.i am waiting for the next part.