Vignettes -12. From ... , with love

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cool_tweety

@cool_tweety

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Posted: 12 years ago

#561

i totally totally loved it. Love the bond that Dhruv and Khushi share. wonderful update. Apt finish. Loved ti Aparna.

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rati123

@rati123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#562

Amazing !! It was so nice that they finally reconciled. Also I appreciate the details of relations that you depict ( like Arnav and Dhruv fighting over Football), since it is true. The real test for friendship in men is their ability to fight and tease each other comfortably.

God bless you .

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Soumya

@Siaa_Rickman

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#563

Yay!!

The Raizada's were definitely in for a shocking surprise. Thankfully Anjali had her calculative mind working and motioned others to act normal!

Payal asked, "By the way, Khushi, what were you upto today? And Arnavji, how are you feeling now?" Smiling fondly at his gentle sister-in-law from across the lounge, Arnav spoke up, "I'm fine, Payal, thanks for asking. As for your Khushi, ask her what happened today." I've always wanted to see this kind of bond between Arnav and Payal. I can imagine that small lingering smile that Arnav gives to people whom he is fond of.

Khushi pokes her tongue out..she's still a bacchi , a quality that Mr Raizada loves so much.

The whole family is certainly a bit crazy though the concern and love they have for Khushi is heart-warming. One statement and the next minute all of them are hovering over her. " As he leaned back, gaping at the hungama, he caught sight of his other Bhabi shaking her head at his Bhaiyya. He was even more surprised at the cheeky grin Arnav shot back at Payal, as he caught her knowing smile, one that sent across a mixture of admiration and admonition at how cleverly he had thrown her sister to the dogs." Anyone who looks at them would have to just have to gape..LOL! Aww is all I can say about the interaction between Jethji and Saali Sahiba.

"Soulmates" Both couples definitely are!! How much happy Nani and Mami must have been looking at both the brothers, the stark-ing similarity in their postures and expressions and after a long time are both sitting in the place as the other is!! Happy tears...

Her anger vanishes as soon as she knows that his sugar level had dropped down earlier and she's off into panic mode..! Arnav was so right!!

Khushi knows that her husband loves her cute silly antics and that mad streak in hers 😆

This time she tries to push the boundaries knowing that the matter has reached it's peak and there's no alternate go along with the assurance that he's not going to hurt her this time and would listen to her!! And he does exactly so, he listens to her yet firmly voices out his feeling.

Poor Khushi is hurt that she's hurt him. "Stricken at the thought that she had hurt him, Khushi sat frozen, her heart breaking at the thought of sleeping away from her Arnavji, when his eyes shot open again, "Do I have to give you a printed invitation? I said, let's sleep", and pulled her down, before curling up, spooning her. " When I read this, I got reminded of this pic..it sums up it all!!

Though he's kind of hurt and angry, though she's hurt, it does nothing to reduce their love for each other. How loving is that?!

He loves her to an extent that he's ready to anything and everything for her. She is no less. Painstakingly both are ready to do anything for the other's happiness!! ain't their love amazing?!! The pain with which he asks her to stay with him, to give him the courage and strength and the way she assures him and says "Hamesha" Their might be thousands of couples out there in love but they are the ultimate..Simple words simple gestures yet so poignant.

The curt reply not only must have hurt Dhruv, it would have hurt his Bhaiyya even more to utter those words to him.. I love the way Khushi has the ability to understand her close-one's need, the way she tries to support him and assures him, that love filled subtle gesture! She truly is a wonder woman, an angel in their lives! And even more whelming is the way Dhruv gathers warmth and courage from his Bhabi, a woman whom he'd met just days before yet is more close to him than anyone else. True is what they say that a relationship doesn't depend on time but the moments nurtured in that time..

I remember I'd said once that all both the brothers had to do was step into the other's shoes and realise what was lacking and what was fault. But yes that's not easy to do so..To forget your pain and hurt and place yourself in the other person's place is a herculean task..And the only way of trying to lessen that burden is to talk, to communicate which both the brothers lack. Words were hurled, egos clashed and then both were mum. Thanks to Khushi, time and again she pushed both of them to talk their heart out. And the result we have two brothers devasted even more than before, guilt overpowering them, and finally they realise that both were at fault and both were not at fault!!

Love the way he explains to his baby brother that he's not missing anything and he's got what he'd dreamed!! And that smile he gives to Khushi, of happiness, of thankfulness, of gratitude..all in one..Haaye!!

And finally the brothers unite..*I have happy tears glistening in my eyes* More than the brothers and their family, I guess readers here are more happy to see them together..I definitely am 🥳

Poor Mami, to have two of her sons at loggerheads must have wounded her a lot..Finally her troubled heart would get some peace.

"If your wife doesn't ensure your happiness, then who will?"

Tucking her again under his arms, he walked out, ready to face his family, ready to face the world...as long as he had her with him, his Khushi.

LOL!! Arnav is riling up his younger brother and is enjoying it too.. 😆 And Dhruv is all agitated..Waah..now I can truly say that they are the brothers..And Aakash..Aww..poor him is standing between the yin yang ☯️

And finally "All Izzz Welll" Love the way even the minute of details have been described..it's a pleasure to the reader's imagination..

It's so endearing to see the brothers reliving the past and the way Dhruv asks his Bhaiyya for advice. "Romaanchankari" Goodness Lord!! My eyes have popped out too and infact I'm like "What The..?" She's Shudh Hindi and he's Harvard English..Polar opposites they are 😆

Ahaan..Dhruv Miya likes Jalebies..Quite opposite to Arnav..Well till now I never understood whether Arnav basically didn't like sweets or was it because he's not allowed to eat them..What ever it is, it's one thing that differs in them.. Love the way he pulls his brother's leg and Khuhsi...aww wifey much defends her hubby dearest!!! And our Arnav Babuwa revels in the basking love and care of his wife..

Finally I've understood the title. I always wondered what it meant..To his Bhabhi..Always!!

Relationship's have been mended, strengthened more than before, and all in all Raizada family is one bonded one where the members are bonded and bounded with love..Up's and Down's are a part of life but when you have a loving and caring family around you, life's all well! A few words of comfort and love, a few gestures of solace and warmth, a few actions of care and "apnapan", was enough for a relationship of life time..

I'm really sad that it ended but I'm glad that it ended on such a note. *sighs* All good things do come to an end..why is it so? 😔

Throughout this journey, I could literally feel those characters, there emotions, infact I've cried with them , for them and I've laughed along too..Sometimes I feel they are more real than anyone else could be..👏 to you Dee for being able to evoke such strong emotions in us..In short 'I love you' I really do..sisterly wala love, fan wala love..!!

I'm really glad that Dhruv's gonna be around and please do show more of NK-Dhruv too..Would love to see them bond!! Like they say no one can take the place of other in your heart, so I would say, I love Arnav, I love NK and I love Dhruv..each have a special corner in my heart..This reminds me I've left out poor Akash..I would love to know him more and see him bond with the rest..! There will be that moment one day when I'd say "I love the Raizada brothers..all of them" 😆 Mark it Dee 😆

Edited by -Siaa- - 12 years ago

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Param

@pup03

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#564

outstanding !!! no words can define the extent of happiness i receive reading your updates... it was brilliant and loved it to core... thanks for giving me an oppurtunity to read such a beautiful piece of writing... you are brilliant writer. it gives me immensense pleasure to see your pm in my inbox. The entire dhruv coming back to family was so great every update so up to mark the pain of two brothers, khushi's contribution and support of family it is beyond words... well the ending dhruv's love for his bhabhi is ultimate salute from a dewar to his bhabhi for giving happiness and tension free life... loved it... arnav was great as always and our dear khushi madam no words to define her.. she is ultimate.. once again thanks a ton dear and will be waiting to read more from your side... HAPPY WRITING always 😊

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shafqee80

@shafqee80

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#565

really enjoyed reading it ...very beautifully written...not for a second i imagined dat im reading it ...all d tym barun sanaya aka arnav khushi were infront of my eyes ...and for dhruv i could easily imagine d boy who was suppose to make an entry according to d spoilers ...thoroughly loved it

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#566

wow..awesome..automatically brought a smile in my face..
I'm attending world's most boring medicine class and smiling..my partner is looking as if I've lost my mind..

thanks for pm.

Edited by nishu_shorna - 12 years ago

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Hriju321

@Hriju321

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#567

Aparna,

That was emotional.

Now I want a FF on Arnav and Khushi as would be parents and how birth of a child enriches their relationship...please please pretty please😃

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ranogill

@ranogill

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#568

Thank you for vignettes ...a beautiful story...neither too long nor too short..love it...I am hopeful that you will we will see mew ss very soon ...keep writing