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pravallika

@prava55663

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

loved Anji and Arjun...she kept her head on his lap and was not ready to wake...

that was so sweet...

it was really cute ..

kunchu and choti..awesome work guyz..

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Safina

@miss_choxz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

amazing i love this well done and congratulations to the pair of u...

its lovely to have it just like the movies... arjun's family before the marriage,,,,,,,,, his relationship with everyone...

cant wait for ur next update... please soon

and thanx a million for ur pm

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Nida

@Gurmeet4Drashti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Hey ...

Fab start :)

Loved the whole Raute family ... They are so adorable ( especially Arjun ;) )

Loved the bond shared by everyone ... :D

I've got a silly doubt ... Plz tell me is this gonna be an Ariya one or an Arni one ????

But whatever ... Loved the start :)

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573339

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

awesome start :) loved it

arjun's family is so adorable 😊

arjun and anji's bonding is superb :)

loved arjun and anji's conversation

looking forward to read more

update soon

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diva

@rockz.diva

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

WoOoW sweet family 😳😳
nice start with wonderful Aaryi song i have a special bond with diz Aarti *Om jai jagadish hare*
awww Arjun mama ne pakad liya
ACP ho ya PM mama k samne sab h chuhe 😆😆😆 juz loved it wen mom holds hiz ears 😛
arjun k papa ji awww 😛 Arjun m proud of uuu yay accha kiya jo dialouge pe 3-4 or diye...juz loved ittt
uff hiz chotiii 😛 bro-sis aww lovely bond..
kya arjun itna accha sapna bigad diya 🤣
i wish i too had a bro 😉
anji n arjun loved em :)
n dat gudmrng awww datz relly so sweet 😊
it was superb updateee yaar loved it to bits...lovly family n m also waitng for Roshni bhabi 😛
plzzz update sooon
*claps*👏👏👏

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Purva

@Tani2804

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Hey both d dearries...amazing chapter doston

d first page waali poetry amazing...u people wrote dat ??

den d chapter...👏

i liked arjun's bonding wid his parents n sis

waiting for more parts

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kunchu

@kunchu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: tani23
Hey both d dearries...amazing chapter doston

d first page waali poetry amazing...u people wrote dat ??

den d chapter...👏

i liked arjun's bonding wid his parents n sis

waiting for more parts

the poems are by Payal

ideas by us... and writing by me,,, so combined effort...

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Few lines dedicated to my helna aka kunchu di hope u lyk di -
zindagi ek safar h...
aisa safar jaha loge aate jate rhte h..
kuch achi yaadein lejate h...
kuch achi yaadein de jate h..
kuch seekh jate h..
kuch seekha jaate h..
di u r more dan a frnd like a elder sis for me..
thank u di fr all ur support n care fr me...
u r inspiration fr me to write dis lil bit..
NOTE FOR D READERS
thank u all our buddies for liking n commenting on our work...
we r overwhelmed by d responses...
we decided to convert dis ss into ff...
well d question abt its abt arni or ariya we shouldnt decided it yet...
u knw abt its ariya or arni as d story moves..
till den enjoy!!
tc..
keep showering ur support by hit like or leaving honest feedbacks..
it really meant a lot for us...
if u hv any suggestion den pls pm me or kunchu di...
thanks again all d readers who coment like or all who r silent readers too...
thank u guys..
keep comenting!!
hope we dnt dissapoint u all..!!

Edited by Payal_156 - 12 years ago

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kunchu

@kunchu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: Payal_156
Few lines dedicated to my helna aka kunchu di hope u lyk di -
zindagi ek safar h...
aisa safar jaha loge aate jate rhte h..
kuch achi yaadein lejate h...
kuch achi yaadein de jate h..
kuch seekh jate h..
kuch seekha jaate h..
di u r more dan a frnd like a elder sis for me..
thank u di fr all ur support n care fr me...
u r inspiration fr me to write dis lil bit..

kya yaar choti.. tu tho ek dum senti banaya mujhe...

love u lot... and lets rock this SS urf FF..