Joint FF: Tum Bin...epilogue: page 97

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yas23

@yas23

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#661

thanks for pm
supeeb update
chap21
loved arni and sam muskan scene
oh shaleen got hurt hope he is fine
chap22
the case was very interesting
hate this shekher
loved riya nd shaleen scene
chap23
loved it very much
glad that shaleen is fine
loved arni nd sam muskan phone convo
epilogue
that was a beautiful ending
loved it
loved the twins nd sam muskaan's daughter
sam muskaan nd arni scene
awww riya nd shaleen got married nd shree choti got engaged nd chotu got married
lovely ending

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Shreya

@shreya09

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#662

just finished reading this ff
its beautiful
excellent writing... beautiful character portrayal ... excellent starting... a beautifully progressed storyline... & a perfect ending
thanks a lot for giving us "Tum Bin"

this is for both of you..
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BitterBerry

@BitterBerry

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#663

Wow didu

pg 1 lines are the best lines ever
and very true about life..
Jut loved it.

Next mission page 2...
He he

thanks divi for the link..
And kunchu di awesome..

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BitterBerry

@BitterBerry

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#664

Awesome cs
arjun ki fiance hai rosh..wow.
And then arjun ki family bi..

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BitterBerry

@BitterBerry

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#665

Part1 is awesome..arrjun and his mother scene is cute.. Then his dad.. Hillaroius. Pehele ek do diya..phir teen char. Ab wo hosp mai..he he he..
And the anji..
She is a cool sisy.. And her dreams..
Her sleeping style..lol
and arjun bhi jayega uske dream mai alarm pakad ke..he he he he he

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BitterBerry

@BitterBerry

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#666

It is amazing chap 2
all are teasing him.. And ye anji kuch jada hii..
Rosh and arjun 1st meet..lolchai mai zehar..
Shadi se pehele hi phas gaya yaar..
They are lovely couple..
Then now in present arni is cool..
Its a diff story..
Abhi bahaut padhna baki hai..

Didu aapke line s in red are touching..just loved them.

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Bhavna Antriwale-Gargate

@bgargate

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#667

hey... I read this story long back... but didn't comment then...

But this story is one of the inspiring ones for me...😊

Absolutely loved this story... a different concept... beautifully written...😊

And definitely Epilogue was the best part ... Ek Rawte ke saath do Rawte free 😉 ...😆😆😆

Poor Roshni... 😳

Sam's part too was adorable...😛

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-Carrie-

@-Carrie-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#668

For Prologue Chp 1,2,3

What beautiful lines made up the introduction.So true.Life turns on its head in a moment & we never expect it.It leaves us shocked & dazed, scrambling for

answers.👍🏼👏

Le! 😆Ek aur Rajshri production Hum Sath Saath Hai family.But very sweet. 😳

Arjun ko chai peeke Roshni se pyar ho gaya!😲😆 Vadiya! Aww... such traditional arranged marriage set up after a long time

Nai toh yaha pyar ho gaya waha pyar ho gaya! Jo ke real life mein possible hi nai hai!Very well written! Hats off Kunchu & Payal!👏👏👏

And Payal itne thoughtful lines kaise likhti ho? My eyes have filled with tears yaar!😭 You are really an awesome writer!

Will come back soon!

Edited by -Carrie- - 12 years ago