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Moner_Radio

@Moner_Radio

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

kunchu :

of course you will continue yaar, arjun's family is so adorable and Anji, his sis, awww😳 ! and he's already engaged to roshni😊..and the way he was telling his parents with his fight with the goons..

Arjun: then what? Uss dialog keliye mien 3-4 aur diya. Bas!!

jaise kisi macchar ko mara ho, it's so simple and casual😆 ! update soon.😊

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DivineDarkness

@DivineDarkness

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Cute Lovely chapter... Arjun's bonding with his family s sumthn which s still nt explored track nd u guys hv done a wonderful job... cool family... update soon...

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ValleryRose

@ValleryRose

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Beautiful introduction dear!!!! Loved it to bits! ❤️

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shruti

@shrutisweety

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

wow
loved the bonding between
bro and sis
continue soon

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ValleryRose

@ValleryRose

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

A totally different setup for Arjun.. It is so beautiful!

I mean, I can actually visualise Arjun like this.

Thanks to the little tit bits that the CVs show in Arjun's past.

I actually feel Arjun might have been very close to what you have depicted through your SS.

It is really really good.

Looking forward to reading more..

Update soon.. 😊

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Pihu Sharma

@pihu_angad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

awesome hai yaar..

loved the bonding b/w arjun & anji

conti. soon

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844858

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Wow...super sweet!!!
Loved the family bondin and of course DIYE EK DO!!!:D

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Amazing start!

i loved starting lines...

then the mother-son-father combo too much...nice one!

then of course, bhai behen affection was really sweet!!! and a real treat!

cont soon!

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

hands oof u both ,
i lv starting poem,
wao hole karan johar film ,
opha not like that,
i meen its more than,
to gud start,
i lv arjun family,
per para nahi mujhe kyun der lag raha hai,
i meen jo tumhari story ki theame hai,
according to this somthing is gona wrong with ,
arjun family,
i lv brother sister part,
n dont u dare to ask again,
is i conti or not,
ur storry is always awesome,
u should conti dr,
n dont forget to pm n pz conti soon,

Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago