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Posted: 12 years ago

#141

hey nice work..!!

Liked the story a lot..!

It was so touching,,!!

Truly beautiful!!

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sashashyam

@sashashyam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#142

Dear Kunchu and Payal,

Very nicely done; the internal support system within the family has been described warmly and convincingly. The sensitivity displayed by Arjun when he coaxes first Anjali and then Roshni back to near normalcy is as admirable as it is unexpected in such a no nonsense tough guy. It is the best proof of true caring, not to let your own fears and worries cloud a loved one's outlook.

The conversation between Arjun and his father is pure wisdom from the latter's side, for courage is not the absence of fear, but the ability to overcome fear and move on. And the world might be a good bit better if men were not brainwashed into believing that a real man should not cry, and that any display of emotionalism is sissy.

So Pathan is coming back to centre stage. Not Sikandar too, I hope, for I would like to read at least one FF with Roshni that does not involve her being murdered.

Lastly, Payal, the songs are beautiful, as always.

Shyamala Aunty

Originally posted by: kunchu
hey everyone...next part!!!
NB: please do read the note just posted before...

CHAPTER 6:

Edited by sashashyam - 12 years ago

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Sreeparna

@Mellifluous

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

great going guys.
the perfect family.
everyone is to support each other.
the bond between Arjun & his dad is so beautuful.
The way Arjun has supported Roshni is wonderful.
love the dosti between sam & Arjun.
waiting to know why choti dont want to go.
awesome poems misti & heli.
love it & love you my buddies.

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573339

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Posted: 12 years ago

#144

fantastic update :) loved it

love how everyone was supporting each other in this difficult time :)

payal's verses were awesome :) very well written

loved arjun and his dad's conversation... his dad understands him so well...

arjun and roshni were awesome as always :) love the way arjun was handling roshni and choti...

choti going to delhi nice...

continue soon

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#145

heyy thx fr d pm..!!

superb update as usual..!!!

lvd it..!!!

bonding between each family member ws awsum..!!

arni r too cute..!!!

cant wait fr d nxt part..!!

continue soon..!!!

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yas23

@yas23

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#146

awesome update
glad roshni is better nw...everyone was there to help her
so pathan is bck
continue soon

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ALEKHYA VENDRA

@alee001

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#147

awsomeee!!!

things are back to normal!!!!

update soon!!!

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isha

@naughtykittyyy

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#148

hey rd da whl story in1 go n jst now cmplt it...

thnx 4 it ...dis s da 1st evr sooo long arni story i hv rd😃😃😃

normaly maine jaha vi arni ke bare mein fictions pare hay kahi vi roshni ke upar itna spce nahi hai

1st tm u gv me ds n i lv it i dn know how u wl trt ds story in cmng days bt until ds parts its nice vryy nice...

lv ds family man arjun , sameer ,roshni, anjali,der parents all chrctrs

da way u potrt da relatnshp of brothr n sistr in arjun n anjali,den sameer n arjun n anjali r soo cute...den arjun n roshni sooo lvlyy(age story mein jo vi ho bt 4 now thora kuch hot rmnc vi dal sakti ho😉)

now how wrt da bad face of der life s tooo fearyy ...poor roshni fas gayii bechari...n dat cop who introgt hr arjun shld gv him sm super punchs on full forc😡...than gd wo roshni ke pass jaldi agaya...n now bechari anjali ...kuch kiya vi nahi bt bura hua...

ab arjun inn sako samhal raha hay

such a prfct family prsn❤️

cnt soon dr...wtng 4 ud's