Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it Right#2-note, pg143

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Ananya

@Anarocksick

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Posted: 12 years ago

#841

Edited my comments for chapter 11 (page 108) and 12 (Page 122)

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nazca

@nazca

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Posted: 12 years ago

#842

Awesome writing girls, my respect increase by every update towards you all and towards your beautiful friendship.

Just a doubt you all knew each other before or you just found your friends here through forum?

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applesauce.

@applesauce.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#843

Thats SO hilarious and nice update..😆thoroughly enjoyed reading it.😆😆

When misunderstanding of ladkewale was cleared by Garima,I was SO relieved.😆Khushi was at her best of Sanka ness🤣cute !Her innocence in her feelings towards Lard Governor..😳

Of al..we have Kokila🤣 and ahem..ji mom🤣🤣OMG!cant stop laughing!So true to the character ..

Than the dramatic twist part,Kokila asking for Khushi hand in marriage ..😒..I knew Garima wudnt reject the proposal,!

But the next move,by Payal surprised me,amaze at her courage,the way she went and confessed to Akash..who was SO lost in hs pehla nasha land😆HAHAHA..he amuses me!

And the end..So both,Arnav n Khushi will see them..and I feel like in show,they might join hands to unite lovebirds..ths going to be fun!

😃Nice Work!

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anumadduri

@anumadduri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#844

NB that was great !!!! The reference to SNS and " Ji Mom " was too hilarious 🤣 . Even I was thinking that the rishta was for Payal and our Khushi being the Sanka Devi must have misunderstood buaji :) But the Jigar - Khushi alliance was something which I saw coming , when he accompanied them to the gupta house . I knew this topiic will rise up :)

Hahha also Harry Potter and Hogwarts was superb especially from Payal 😆 Did not think of her a harry potter fan 😊 . Now the end was very interesting with Khushi's " Hey Devi Mayya " and apna Arnav's standard " What The " . This is gonna be interesting 😉

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rrd29

@rrd29

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Posted: 12 years ago

#845

lovely update
Please include me in the PM list for all future updates

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neha

@arshiipkkndluv

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Posted: 12 years ago

#846

awesome nd hilarious update..loved it..

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#847

Fantastic and superb addition to the amazing collaboration, the update was brilliant. Poor khushi thought that the rishta was coming for her, that was so funny. Comparing akash to harry potter is spot on, amazing. I cant believe kokila bhen came for the rishta and ahem's one classic line, love it. Loved payals confession and she actually snogged akash, absolutely brilliant. This collaboration is just getting outstanding by each update xx

Edited by P4rveen12 - 12 years ago

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sher_lock

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Posted: 12 years ago

#848

damn good..!! OH.MY.GOD. never expected. really...wonderful update.
haha... khushi was...worried...happy...gobsmacked..nicely done..!!
what will happen NOW... "Devi Mayya" 😉