Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it Right#2-note, pg143

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barbiebala

@barbiebala

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#831

woo arnav and khushi is going to take the mission to pair akash and payal

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..Anita..

@..Anita..

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#832

I don't blame Khushi for being shocked at the end...heck I am shocked...

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emistry

@emistry

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#833

OMG that was brilliant! You had me laughing!!

The way you described the Sharma's!! The Gupta sisters are in trouble!!!

Love Payal in this!! Glad she went and got her Harry Potterji, and they seem to be enjoying Hogwarts perfectly!!!

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Mithila

@Mithikush

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#834

OMG!OMG!What an update

Too funny😆😆

pls update soon

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#835

lovely! nice to see the supposedly shy and obedient payal take matters into her own hands... first writing of her secret longings for 'harry potterrji' and then rushing off in the middle of the night to sheesh mahal... would someone please tell me how and when akaash became so important to payal? yes, she did meet him for the first time when she gatecrashed into sheesh mahal the day khushi was invited there but even then she behaved like she had a prior connection to akash! so what gives?! loved this feisty payal who declared her love to akash so unhesitatingly [imagine her having to live her life with that stone faced ahem who is a thorough mama's pet, and whose name sounds like someone clearing his throat!]... also loved this confident akash whose actions speak louder than words... loved how he shut payal up!

the scene between khushi and garima was HILARIOUS, with both speaking at cross purposes! devi maiyya seems to be having a gala time playing with khushi... first, letting her heave a sigh of relief on learning that the proposal is for payal and then getting a proposal when least expected! at least in all this khushi has finally accepted her feelings for arnav...

can imagine khushi's shock on the unexpected turn of events at sheesh mahal what a description of the interesting situation she found akash and payal in: Her shy sister who would struggle to even look at people's faces while talking now had her tongue inside another man's mouth, a man she had met not long ago... the exclamations from khushi's and arnav's mouths made me crack up! a thoroughly enjoyable update where nothing was as it seemed!

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nee

@march2011

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#836

She was shocked to find Payal and Akaash playing tonsil tennis with each other, thoroughly in the middle of the lawn.

loved this sentence...

ahemji??? laughing while reading...are u a sathiya fan

Edited by march2011 - 12 years ago

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badfaith4u

@badfaith4u

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#837

That was awesome
I hope they run away and get married
Thanks for the pm

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Polkadots78

@Polkadots78

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#838

This was hilarious!!!😆

No Arhi and no Arnav but was such a fun read...kokila and 2 'Ji Mom' sons...hey Bhagwan!! No no no definitely not for our khushi and payaliya..

Loved reading this update

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shanon

@shanon

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#839

Awesome update NB.

Harry potterji is an eye opener lol.
And now kokila and ahem. also.

Kushi's rishta pakka hogaya? Ab kya hoga?

What will arnav do after come to know about this? And he come to know about payash. That's good.

Waiting for the next update.

Thnx for the pm.