Kuch Pal Zindagi Ke...UPDATED pg47 - Page 17

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Posted: 18 years ago
tooo late but its okay par please continue soon plezzz plzzz 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
kiran where r u ??????????????????
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Posted: 18 years ago
where is the part?? 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
kiran yaar abi tak continue nahin kiya?? 😭 please jaldi conitnue karo
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome continue soon! 😳 😳 😃
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Sujal and Akshat are waiting in the car...they had decided to go with the girls for shopping...
Sujal: yaar yeh kitni der leyngi.....15 minute se hum wait ker rahay hain...
Akshat: oho ajati hain tujhe kia maut parri hai...
Sujal: yaar late ho rahay hain....(looks at his watch)
Aksat: kyun....tujhey Prime Minister ke saath meeting per jana hai....
Sujal: aisi baat nahi hai...Akshat..
Akshat: phir kia baat hai...
Sujal: Dad aj Swayem logon ko nleney gaye hain....Goa se....aur main nahi chahta keh woh log yahan ayen....(serious)
Akshat: oh...ab tu kia karay ga???
Sujal: karna kia hai....kal un logon ne wapis ana hai...tabb takk wait kerein gay....uss ke baad hi...
Akshat: dekh Sujal...main tujhe achi tarah se janta hun...bass yeh kehna chhata hun keh jo bhi kerna soch samajh ker kerna....jald baazi main nahi....aur haan...mere tere saath hun...
Sujal: main janta hun...tujhe kehne ki zarurat nahi hai....(smiles)
Akshat looks out of the window...
Akshat: lo agai.....
Sujal looks up from the steering wheel and....whooossshhh......Krippa,Anjali,Charru and Kashish are cuming.....his eyes are all set on Kashish who is wearing jeans and a white top and a denim to go with it.....and a pee-cap with it....
They all cum and sit in the car....
Krippa: Bhai....yeh Charru hai......Charru yeh mere bhai hain Sujal Bhaiya aur Akshat Bhaiya....
Charru looks at Sujal and smiles....
Sujal: oh my God...yeh woh choooootttiii si Charru hai jo harr waqt larkon ke saath cricket khelti thi...
Charru: bingo!! u r rite....lekin woh chootti si hatta dijiye...kyunki ab to main bhut brri ho gayi hun....
Akshat: aur khubsurat bhi...(with dazed eyes)
Charru looks at him for the first time
Charru: ap ki tareef.....???
Akshat: tareeef to mujhe apki kerni chhaiye...
Sujal: AHemmememmem--aheemm!!!!!!! haan to...are we ready....
Anjali: jee Bhai....rasta apko Kashish bata deygi....
Sujal: ok then lets leave.....
He starts the car....and looks at Akshat....
Charru settles in her seat...beside Kashish...
Charru:(whispers to Kashish) Di.....yeh Akshat kaun hai???
Kashish: yeh Sujal ka best friend....aur in ke ghar ka dusra beta....
Charru: oh....lekin kuch weird nahi hai....
Kashish: (laughs) nahi nahi...woh sab larkion ke saath aissay hi baat kerta hai....
Charru: hhmmmm....
After some time tey reach the shopping mall....Krippa,Akshat,Charru and Anjali rush out...Sujal thinks that he is alone in the car as he is parking....he parks the car and whistles a tune...then gets off the car when he sees that Kashish is still siting in the car....he opens her door....
Sujal: ap nahi arahI????
Kahsish: nahi...woh....(points to something)
Actually Kashish ka dupatta seat belt band kerte huay uss main phans gaya hota hai...she is trying to open the seat belt lekin na to belt khulti hai na uss ke dupatta nikalta hai....
Sujal: oh....main kuch help ker doon???
Kashish: nahi mein ker loongi...
Sujal looks at her and smiles....standing and looking at her as she struggles to open the seat belt...then she give sup and looks up at Sujal exasperated...
Sujal: (smiles) main hi ker deta hoon....
Kashish seat ke saath take laga ker peeche ho jati hai...Sujal leans into the car and leans over her as the seat belt is over the other side...he is practically leaning over her aur un donon ke beech main koi 2 inch ka distance hota hai....woh to seat belt kholne main magan hota hai but Kashish looks at him and takes a deep breath....Sujal at once looks at her......donon aik dusre ko dekhte hain and are lost in ther own thoughts...in their ownn world...
Peeche se aik garri ka horn bajta hai to both come out of their thoughts.....Sujal opens the seat belt and Kashish's dupatta comes free...woh garri se nikaltay hain aur grri lock ker ke mmurtay hain...
In front of the shoppinbg mall is a green hill descending downwards.....aur Sujal ne garri bilkul hill ke side per park ki hoti hai....bhut rugged ya neeche nahi hota hill par thora sa neeche hota hai....
They both are looking at the garden below the hill....Kashish thora sa aggay ho ker dekhti hai to uss ka paon aik pathar se takrata hai....She is about ot fall backwards jab Sujal uss ka haath pakar leta hai....par Kashish ka balance loose ho jata hai seh falls aur apne saath saath Sujal ko bhi le girti hai....to donon hill ke neeche ja rahay hotay hain...rolling polling ove each other....and then....

to be continued....
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow kiran glad u continued awesome part yaar i loved it 👏 charu and akshat scene was funny 😆 sujal aur kashish as usual awesome romanti8c scenes 😳 i'll be waiting continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
kiran me soo glad you continue..... 😃 and now the part was just too wonderful....kiran just awesome.... it was amazing..... itna cute , sweet , aur itna romantic.... loved it completely... sujal , kashish ke beech ke scene was just toooooooooooooooo awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
unka scene padke tho mujhko sharam aa rahi thi... the way sujal , kashish went down the hill rolling & poling over each other... just tooo fantastic..... 👏
👏 ab please jaldi se continue karna... me waiting for the next part very damn eagerly.... 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
kiran yaar jaldi se continue karo me waiting 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
😆 thanks for ur comments...

After some time tey reach the shopping mall....Krippa,Akshat,Charru and Anjali rush out...Sujal thinks that he is alone in the car as he is parking....he parks the car and whistles a tune...then gets off the car when he sees that Kashish is still siting in the car....he opens her door....
Sujal: ap nahi arahI????
Kahsish: nahi...woh....(points to something)
Actually Kashish ka dupatta (she is wearing a small muffler to go with her dress) seat belt band kerte huay uss main phans gaya hota hai...she is trying to open the seat belt lekin na to belt khulti hai na uss ke dupatta nikalta hai....
Sujal: oh....main kuch help ker doon???
Kashish: nahi mein ker loongi...
Sujal looks at her and smiles....standing and looking at her as she struggles to open the seat belt...then she give sup and looks up at Sujal exasperated...
Sujal: (smiles) main hi ker deta hoon....
Kashish seat ke saath take laga ker peeche ho jati hai...Sujal leans into the car and leans over her as the seat belt is over the other side...he is practically leaning over her aur un donon ke beech main koi 2 inch ka distance hota hai....woh to seat belt kholne main magan hota hai but Kashish looks at him and takes a deep breath....Sujal at once looks at her......donon aik dusre ko dekhte hain and are lost in ther own thoughts...in their ownn world...
Peeche se aik garri ka horn bajta hai to both come out of their thoughts.....Sujal opens the seat belt and Kashish's dupatta comes free...woh garri se nikaltay hain aur grri lock ker ke mmurtay hain...
In front of the shoppinbg mall is a green hill descending downwards.....aur Sujal ne garri bilkul hill ke side per park ki hoti hai....bhut rugged ya neeche nahi hota hill par thora sa neeche hota hai....
They both are looking at the garden below the hill....Kashish thora sa aggay ho ker dekhti hai to uss ka paon aik pathar se takrata hai....She is about ot fall backwards jab Sujal uss ka haath pakar leta hai....par Kashish ka balance loose ho jata hai seh falls aur apne saath saath Sujal ko bhi le girti hai....to donon hill ke neeche ja rahay hotay hain...rolling polling ove each other....and then....
They end at a desolate landing...its a plain area...jahan koi bhi nahi hota.....Kashish neeche girti hai and Sujal falls on top of her...
Kashish: oooowww.....
Sujal: tum theek to ho???
Kashish: haan.....
Kashish is waiting for him to get up..but he is lost in looking at her....
Kashish: ap uthain gayyy????
Sujal: oh..haan...
He gets up and then looks down at Kashish....smiles....and extends his hand...Kashish looks at him and hold shis hand...they bot get up...
Kashish dusts off the dust off her clothes....Sujal puts is hands in the pockets of his jeans and both strat walking upwards towards te mall....
Kashish: i am sorry woh...main slip ho gai thi...
Sujal: (smiles) no problem maine bilkul mind nahi kia...
Kashish looks at him liek excuse me??
Sujal: i mean...isss baar to theek hai lekin agli baar sambhal ke...after all ap ko bachanay ke liye main hamesha thora na hoon ga....
Kashish looks at him and smiles....
AFter walking upwards...for 5 mins...Kashish stops panting...
Kashish: main aur ziada nahi chal sakti...
Sujal: kehti ho to godd main utha leta hun..(naughtily)
Kashish: no thanks...(snubbily)
Sujal: i was just kidding...bass thori der aur....pohanchnay walay hain...
Kashish: hum rest nahi ker sakte???
Sujal:Kashish sirf chaar qadam to reh gaye hain...do tum chalna do main chal lunga...fasla katt jayega...
Kashish: filmi dialouge bolna band kero aur chalo...
Sujal: tahts the spirit..!!!chaloo...
They both reach the mall..tehy are about to enter..Sujal aggay hota hai jab Kashish peeche se awaz deti hai
Kashish: Sujaall....
Sujal: haan...(murta hai)
Kashish: woh...(points at his coat)
Sujal: kia??? (looks down...duznt see anything)
She comes forward and soves her coat...and near his collar jharti hai coat ko...
Sujal: kia hua????
Kashish: woh....matti lagi hui thi...
Sujal: thankss....
Kashish: its ok....
They both enter the mall...but cant see anyone around
Kashish: yeh sab kahan chalay gaye?
Sujal: obviously humarey liye phoolon ki malla ke ker sawafat kerne ke liye to nahi kharray hotay....
Kashish: hmmmm....chalo dhoondhte hain....
Sujal: oye pagal ho kia....jitni der main hum unhain dhundhay gay tab taklk woh shopping ker chukay hongay...
Kashish: to hum akele kia karain gay????
Sujal: kar to bhut kuch sakte hain(winks at her and laughs)
Kashish: kia matlab????
Sujal: matlab jo bhi hai usse choro.....filhaal to shopping kerte hain....
Kashish: tumhare saaathhh.....tum to mujhe pagal ker do gay...
Sujal: pagal unhain kia jata hai jo pehle se pagal nahi hotay...lekin afsos ap iss qualification per poori nahi utarti...
Kashish: watever...main ja rahi hun....
She tries to wlak away lekin Sujal holds her hand
Sujal: kahan ja rahi ho????
Kashish: cricket khelneee.....(sarcastically)
Sujal: wow...tumhain cricket khelna bhi ata hai...mujhe to laga tha tum baqi larkion ki tarah pura waqt sarray huay novels parhti hogi aur 4 ghantay ki Indian movies dekh ker roti hogi...
Kashish: jee nahi...main aam larkion jaisi nahin hun....
SUjal: acha...woh kaisay????
Kashish: mujh mein woh sab nahi jo baaqi larkion main hota hai...
Sujal:(with wide eyes) phir tum larki kaisay ho????
Kashish: (stares at him) shut up.....
Sujal: i mean...prove kero ke tum baqi larkion jaisi nahi
Kahsish: karoon gi...aik din sab prove keroon gi....tum dekte jao...
Sujal: tumhain to hamesha dekhne ko tayar rehta hun...tum hi mujhse bhagti ho..(winks)
Kashish: ufff....u r impossibleee.....
Sujal: thanks for teh compliment....
Kashish starts wlakinga way....
Sujal: arey ab kahan ja ehai ho????
Kashish: mujhe laga tha hum sjhopping kerne ja rahya hain...(not looking back...)
SHe again starts wlking...Sujal smiles...
Sujal: GOD i love her attitude....
Then he also runs behind her...btoh start shopping while talking to each other...

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