Kuch Pal Zindagi Ke...UPDATED pg47 - Page 18

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Posted: 18 years ago
great part kiran awesome 👏 continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
😆 ok heas the next part....

Sujal and Kashish are busy in doing their shopping...they are inside a men's wear shop...
Kashish: Sujal...tum pichlay adhay ghantay se iss dukaan main ho...kuhc lena hai to lo warna niklo...
Sujal: arey....dkehne to do,...kuch pasand ayega to lunga na....(looking at a shirt)
Kashish: (folds her arms) mere khyal main.....HUM log shopping per aye thay...
Sujal: haan to....
Kashish: HUM ka matlab hota hai donon..lekin yahan to tum khud ki shopping kiye ja rahay ho...
Sujal: arey pehle main kuch le leta hun..phir tum le lena...ok?? (smiles at her)
Kashish shrugs her shoulders...she looks around....she looks at a jacket...
Kashish: Sujal...yeh dekho...yeh jacket acha hai....
Sujal: (looks at it) haan acha to hai...i mean...achi hai....tumhain to hindi bhi nahi ati...jacket achi hoti hai....ACHA nahi hota.....
Kashish: (jorofies her hands) mujhse bhut barri ghalti ho gai....plzzz mujhe mauf ker do...(sarcastically)
Sujal: haan haan mauf kia...(laughing)
Kashish: get lost...tumse to baat kerna hi fazool hai...aik simple sa sawaal kia tha...mujeh laga tha tumper yeh jacket achi lagey gi...
Sujal: awww...tum to naraaz ho gai...main mazak akr raha tha...yeh jacket saccchhh main bohaaaat ACHA Hai...(cracks up laughing)....
Kashish glares at him and makes a face...
Kashish: theek hai...phir tum akele shopping kero...main ja rahi hun...BYeee....
She leaves the shop...
Sujal: arey baap re...yeh to naarazz ho gai....abhi manana parray ga...
He pays for the jacket and leaves the shop in search of Kashish....

Kashish neeche cafe main ja ker bethti hai...takes a double espresso......she looks at someone walking past the cafe....
Kashish: (thinks) yeh Angad yahan kia kar raha hai...

Angad aya hota hai kyunki charru ne ussay call ki thi....ussay Angad ko gift le ekr dena tha jo ke kareeb thi aur she wanted Angad to choose wateva he wanted...so he ahd come...meanwhile he is looking for Charru....He is driking coffee in a disposable cup....Chalte chalte uss ki coffee khatam ho jati hai
Angad: oh teri...yeh to khatam ho gai....(he looks at the cup)
He throws the cup behind without looking....and keeps walking
Cup urta hua ja ker girta hai.......Krippa per....aur jo do teen drops cup mein reh gaye thay woh uss per girr jatay hain....
Krippa: oh my God...yeh kaun stupid hai jiss ne mujh per yeh cup phenka hai...(loudly)
Ird gird sab log dekhne lag jatay hain...
Angad turns...aur Krippa ko dekh ker uss ke dil main...ahem ahem...
Angad: oh teri.....yeh kaun hai....(murmurs)
Krippa: maine pucha yeh cup kiss ne phenka....
Angad: aheeeeemmm.....wohhh....(comes forward)
Krippa: AP....ap ne phenka hai....???
Angad: jee woh...cup khalli ho gay to meine socha phenk do...(smiles weirdly)
Krippa: inteha ka ghatya bahana tha...kheir main puchti hun apse....ap ko apne watan se pyaar hai ke nahi???
Angad: kiiiiiii????
Krippa: maien kaha apko apne wata se pyaar hai ke nahi...(hands on hips)
Angad: watan se....jee jee bhut pyaar hai...i love my country...mera BHARAT MAHAAN....
Krippa: aAHAha....mera bharat mahaan...to iss bharaat mahaan ko kuradaan kyun banana chahtay hain ap....
Angad: jee....
Krippa: i tell u....these ppl.(murmurs...then points at him)...u have no respect for ur country...and other people....iss tarah kaun phenkta hai cheezain public places mein...
Angad: aye heelllooo.....mind it madam...(points a her)
Krippa: how dare u point at me.....thirf class mentality...
Angad: teri to main....
Krippa: ayyy/....haath na lagana...tum....tum jnatay nahi ho....
Angad: kissay???
Krippa: mere bhai ko....
Angad: ahahahhahaha.......bhut dekhein hai tum jaisay aur tumharay bhai jaisay....
Krippa: mere bhai ko lkuch na kehna...warna...
Angad: warna kia....???
Krippa: main..abhi...yahan...zorr se.....
Angad: thapar na marrin bhut bisti ho jayegi....(smiling)
Krippa: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! 9shouts)
Angad: oh teri ki......
Kashish hs been looking at all this....she sees krippa jump on Angad and hitting him kiddishly..and Angad reacting in the saame way...bachon ki tarah larr rahay tahy...
Kashis: ohhh....my....God.....
She rushes out of the cafe..at the same tie Sujal runs from teh otehr side....he had also seen everyfink...
Kashish: Angggadddd.....(holds him form the bacl....)...choro ussayyy.....
Sujal: krippppppppppppppaaaaa...yeh kia kar rahi ho...choro ussay...
krippa: nahi bhai....iss ko to main nahi chorungi...(claws at him)...
Sujal holds her around her waist...and holds her off the ground...she is strangling hr legs and arms...shouting...Sujal carries her back while Kshish strugggles to keep Angad aside...hehehehe/...

To be continued...do comment;;;
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow kiran awesoem part 👏 me loved it toooo gooood continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
wonderful part 👏 ...2 good. 👏 ..ak jus mind blowng...fightng lik kids.... 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
kiran yaar story bohat hi mast zabardast jaa rahi hain.. mujhe teri yeh story padkar bohat bohat bohat hi zyada mazaa aa raha hain... i'am really loving it.... too good.... very good going.... 👏 wah yaar kya baat hain sujal , kashish shopping kar rahe hain and kashish says ki yeh jacket sujal pe achcha lagega.. aur phir sujal usse chaidtha hain..hye... phir sujal ka usse manane ko jaana.. yeh rootna , manana tho pyaar ki ada hothi hain.... balle..balle.... yeh meeti si nok-jhonk hi tho unke pyaar ki shuruwaat hogi... and believe me loving it from the bottom of my heart.... 😳 ab angad and kripa keep fighting like chottu kids... ek taraf sujal , kashish ladthe hain , unka bachpana nahi gaya abhi thak aur dusari taraf angad , kripa bhi shuru ho gaye... wah.. chal another love story in the making... ladayi kab dosti mein badle , dosti kab pyaar mein patah hi nahi chaltha... aur woh log tho bachpan ke saathi hain.... tho no problem... 😆
ab please continue soon..me waiting for the next part eagerly... 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
nice parts....the last part reminded me of srk n kajol 4m kkhh......keep it up.....n luvly parts once again....tc....n update soon...thx...
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey..thanksss evryoneee...muaaah!!!! 😆 wont be able to update soon cuz exams hea...
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Posted: 18 years ago
kiran take your own time to post the part.... we all will wait.....& ALL THE BEST with your exams... i'll surely pray for you... 👍🏼
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Posted: 18 years ago
god ur fic is absolutely fabulous...just fell in luv wid it 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
kirooo ur just too good ree..lub you yaar.. 😳

ek dum jaakaas part tha...fulltoos jaakaas tere aur farah ki story ek dum jakass hai ree... 👏

i love you twoo.. 😳

it was gr888,awesum,wonderful part...now me waiting to see next part mann.. 😳 next part mai angad aur kripa kya karte hai..lolzz woh tere tarah lardte hai.. 😆

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