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Posted: 18 years ago
ok thanks aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa lot for ur comments...luved them... 😃 ....heas the enxt part...

Kashish hs been looking at all this....she sees krippa jump on Angad and hitting him kiddishly..and Angad reacting in the saame way...bachon ki tarah larr rahay tahy...
Kashis: ohhh....my....God.....
She rushes out of the cafe..at the same tie Sujal runs from teh otehr side....he had also seen everyfink...
Kashish: Angggadddd.....(holds him form the bacl....)...choro ussayyy.....
Sujal: krippppppppppppppaaaaa...yeh kia kar rahi ho...choro ussay...
krippa: nahi bhai....iss ko to main nahi chorungi...(claws at him)...
Sujal holds her around her waist...and holds her off the ground...she is strangling hr legs and arms...shouting...Sujal carries her back while Kshish strugggles to keep Angad aside...hehehehe.....
After they are almost 2 feet apart...Sujal Krippa ko neeche utarta hai jo dubara se leap ekrne lagti hai Angad ki taraf per Sujal ussay rok deta hai...
Sujal: krrrippaa...yhe kia ho agay ahi tumhain...pagal ho gai ho?
Krippa: Bhai....iss...isss idiot ne...
Angad: ay hello....(struggles too get free from Kashish) mind ur language....
Krippa: kiaaa.....Bhai deka apne yeh kiss tarah baat ker raha hai mujhse....
Angad: ab tum mujhe batao gi main baat kaisay karun...
Krippa: dekho mere samne ziada zubaan na chalao...
Angad: mind ur own business....
Sujal and Kashish: CHUPPPPPP!!!!!!
Donon aik dum chup ker jatay hain....
Kashish looks at Sujal....trying to control her laughter....
They both bring Angad and Krippa closer...
Kashish: dekho...humain pata to nahi hai ke tum donon larr kyun rahay ho..lekin plz yahan tamasha na lagao....sab log dekh rahay hain...
Krippa: dekhte hain to dekhne do Di...main iss ko.....(points at him)
Angad: wait a sec....tum meri Di ko DI kyun keh rahi ho????
Krippa: Excuusseee meee...TUMHARi Di....shakal dekhi hai apni...
Sujal looks at her surprised....Kashish starts laughing...
Angad: kyun...kia hai meri shakal ko...atleast tumse to behtar hai....
Krippa: wattttt...how dare u....
Sujal: guys guys guys...hold on a second....larna band kero...andar cafe main chal ekr araam se baat kerte hain....
Krippa: mujhe iss ke saath koi baat nahi kerni...
Sujal: Kripppaaa.....(raises his eyebrows)
Krippa heaves a sigh....
Krippa: Chalo....

They all are sitting in the cafe....
Kashish: haan to Angad....lets solve it out...jo kuch hua uss bhul jao tum donon aur aik anyi shuruwat kero...
Angad: kaisi shuruwat???
Kashish: arey...dosti ki....Angad...this is Krippa...Sujal ki behen....humare neighbours....
Angad: main janta hun Sujal ko....(smiles at him)
Kashish: acha woh kaisay...?? (surprised)
Angad: woh ap inhain Airport per chor ayi thi na...issi liye...mien inhain ghar le ker gaya tha...
Kashish: OOhhh...(raises her eyebrowws)
Krippa: wat i dont understand is.....yeh Angad apka sagga bhai...shakal se to adopted lagta hai.. (innocntly)
Sujal and Kashish burst out laughing....
Angad: kyyun bhai...meri shakal per likha hua hai keh main adopted hun....
Voice: shakal per to bhut kuch likha hua hai....
Angad: ay kaun boliyaa.....
They all turn to see a girl standing there...weraing microoo---minisss...hehehhee....
She lightly taps Angad
Girl: how mean Angad....mujhe yahan bulla ker khud ghayab ho gaye.....
Angad stands up...and hugs the girl lightly...
Angad: oh baby i am sooo sorry...i totally forgot....
Girl: naturally....(looks at all of them)
Kashish: aheeeemmmmm....(clears her throat) Angaaaddd....intorduce nahi kerwwao gay....
Angad: haan woh Di...woh...
Girl: Di???? Angad tumhari behen bhi hai....
Kashish: aik nahi doo....
Angad: haan owh...nahi...
Girl: how cheap Angad....tumne mujhse kaha ke tum lawaris ho....aur tum asal main.....u r such a big liar...i ahte u!!!
She hits him witha purse....Kashish is looking at this open mouhed....Sujal adn Krippa are laughing....
Angad: oh ley...itni mushkil naal kurri phassi si...(he turns to look at all three of them) Di ap bhi na....
Kashish: main bhi na nahi tum bhi na Angad.....itna beyhuda jhoot koi bolta hai..keh tum LAWARIS ho...God....
Angad: woh asal main Di woh koi bahana to banana tha na larki phasanay ke liye...
Krippa: tum hamesha iss qism ke na...nnaaaa...(trying to remember a word) najayz kaam kyun karte h...
Sujal and Kashish look at ecah other....and laughed like anything at the word she had used....
Angad is shocked....embarassed...hehehhe...
Angad: najayaazz...aur main.....nahi to....
Sujal: Krippa....lafaz na-qabile-qabool hota hai najayz nahi...
Krippa: lekin bhai iss ki harkatain najayz hainnnnn.....(trying to proe)
Akshat and Charu come from behin...with Anjali....
Akshat: haain...yeh main kia sun raha hun...aj takk to mein najayaz kaha jata tha...yahan per aur kaun...(sits down)
Charru: God...Di hum log to ap sba ko dhund dhund ke pagal ho gaye.....
Anjali: sach main....baad main yahan se guzar rhaya thay to dekha keh poori paltan yahan bethi hai...
Akshat: by the way Sujalll...yeh tum aur Kashish kahanr eh gaye thay???
Sujal and Kashish look at each other...Kashish is embarassed at waht had happende and looked down...
Sujal: woh hum....ummm...woh.......hum log...ummm.....
Akshat: yeh ummmm woh hummm kia laga rkahi hai....kahan gaye tay....
Sujal: hum...hum....kahan gaye thay Kashish???
Kashish looks up at once...
Kashish: hum...??? hum kahan gaye thay....kahiin bhi to nahin...
Anjali: to kia bahir ka pehra de rahay thay....
Sujal: nahi woh....Kashish ka paon slip ho gaya tha...to moch agai thi....iss liye thori der ke liye rest ker rahy thi....
Akshat: aur ap kia marham patti ker rahay thay saath...
Sujal: uffo...main ussay akela kaisay chor deta.....(says it hurriedly)....
Kashish looks at him.....
Sujal: i mean....bechari ko moch ai thi andar kaisay ati...
Krippa: kyun...Bhai apne godd main utha ker lana tha kia....(veyr innocently)
Everyone starts laughing...
Sujal: (murmurs to herself) aissa mauqa hi kahan milaa...
Kashish looks at him as if she had heard....but then she smiles...and he knows nahi sunna....
Kashish: tum log bhi naa...baat ko kahan se kahaan se ley jatay ho...kuch order kerein???
Angad: Di...idhar siwaye coffee ke aur kuch nahi milta....coffee anyone???

Shopping kerne ke baad sab log wapis ajatay hain....Sujal drops Kashish Charru and Angad home aur phir baqi apne ghar chalay jatay hain....
Shaam ka waqt hota hai...u remember Sujal logon ka dinner hota hai Kashish logon ke haan....so lets look wats happening...
Kashish is standing in the kitchen sahi ghussay main...Kumkum enters
Kumkum: arey Kashish...kia baat ahi....itna ghussa kiss baat ka????
Kashish: kuch nahi Bhabhi.....kuch logon ke liye chicken manchuuuurriaaan bana rhai hun...
Kumkum laughs
Kumkum: ohhh....to ghussa iss baat hai keh kitchen main kaam kerna parr raha hai....
Kashish: maine aj takk apne liye cooking nahi ki...uss Mr. Sujal Garewal ke liye 2 ghanton se kitchen mein kharri hun...
Kumkum: ohhhooo....aissa kya ho gaya....after all shadi ke baad bhit o tumhain kaam kerna hi hoga na
Kashish: kia Bhabhi ap bhi Mumma ki tarah shadi shadi...mujeh nahi karni shadi wadi....
Kumkum: haan lekin ajb tera Mr.Right ajaye ga na to tab yeh sab nahi bol payegi.....arey Mumma bula rhai hain main ati hun
She leaves the kitchen...Kashish puts in the chicken pieces in the pan....
Kashish: (imitates Sujal) dinner per to zarur ayen gay Aunty..lekin aik shart keh chicken manchurian Kashish banaye gi......my foott.....
She is cooking...cursing Sujal...when an idea comes to her mind
Kashish: (to herself with a wicked smile) hmmmmm........ab maza ayega na...aissa chicken manchurian banaun gi keh puri zindgai yaad rakhega.....

At Garewals Mansion.....everyone is ready...to go...for the dinner...
Akshat goes to Sujal's room to call Sujal...he knocks on the door....
Sujal: kaun haaiii.....
Akshat: oyeee...darwaza khol...
Sujal: Akshaat...mujeh tayar honay de....
Akshat: tu ne kisi beauty contest main nahi jana....dafa ho bahir....
Sujal: bass 5 minute...
Akshat: neeche Kashish ayi hui hai bulanay...
Sujal aik dumm darwaza kholta hai....weariing black trousers....blak polo neck..looking hot...hair gelled back.....
Sujal: kahan hai Kashish??? (excited)
Akshat starts laughing...
Akshat: beta sahi phansa hai tu...koi ayi nahi woh...woh to maine tujhe bahir nikalnay ke liye bola tha...
Sujal: Akshat....tu bhi na...
Akshat holds Sujal's cheeks...and says mischeivously
Akshat: lagta hai tujhe pyaar ho gaya hai...mr.romeo....
Sujal: chal oye...chor mujhe...(Akshat ka haath nneeche kerta hai)...ab chal na....der nahi ho rahi....
Akshat: ap hi ko jaldi parri hai...un ka deedar kerne ki....(smiles stupidly)
Sujal: shut up....
They go downstairs and then all leave for the dinner...
At the door...Tulsi and Mihir are waiting to welcome them...
Tulsi: bohat acha hua tum log agaye...aur itni der kyun laga di..
Veena: bass wohh....tayar honay main bachon ko thora time lag gaya...
Mihir: Bhabhi....Cg nahi aya???
Veena: nahi woh...(looks at Sujal) kisi kaam se Mumbai gaye hain...
Mihir: acha acha...aiye na bethiye....
They all sit down...Akshat and Sujal are sititng together...Sujal continuosly looks towards the stairs every 2 mins...
Akshat: tu kia harr do minute baad seerhion ko dekh raha hai...(whispers to him)
Sujal: kuch nahi...baqwas band ker ke beth...
Akshat: hmmmm bachu sab pata hai mujhe...
Sujal: kk...kiiaaa...kia pata hai tujhe...
Akshat: yehi keh tu harr do minute baad seerhion ki taraf kyun dekh raha hai...
Sujal: kyun...kyun dekh raha hun....??? (trying to act innocent)
Akshat: woh jab neeche aye gi to nazar ajaye gi....samjhay...
Sujal: yeh sab baatain tujhe pata kaisay chal jati hai...
Akshat: actually....kyunki main bhi harr do second baad wahan dekh raha hun...
Sujal: oye...baaz aja...Bhabhi hai teri....(thinking he is talking abt Kashish)
Akshat: main apni nahi teri Bhabhi ki baat ker raha hun....
Sujal: woh kaun??? (conphooosed)
Akshat: lo agai...hum donon ki Bhabhian....
Sujal looks upstairs to see Kashish and Charru coming downstairs....Kashish is looking gorgeous in a lime coloured dress.....ussay to Kashish ke siwa koi dikhta nahi....hehehe...
They both come dwnstairs...talking to each other....then they come and meet Veena....
Kashish is going towards the kitchen....she turns to smile at everyone....Sujal is sitting at a corner...he raises a hand and waves at her....Kashish smiles and goes....
Akshat: kitni khubsurat lag rhai hai na...
Sujal: Akshat maine tujhe kaha hai na uss per nazar na rakh Bhabhi hai teri...
Akshat: oye khotay...main Charru ki baat ker raha hun...
Sujal: oye ab tujhe Charru pasand agayi hai...
Akshat: haan yaar...bhut sweet hai...bhtu cute bhi hai...
Sujal: hmmm...to tu apni sweet n cute Charru se baatain ker...main ata hun...
Akshat: abay kahan ja raha hai....
Sujal: araha hun na....
He gets up...and starts andering behind the sofa....Tulsi turns to look at him...
Tulsi: beta kuch chahiye tah???
Sujal: jee Aunty...woh pani....gallay main ajeeb si kharash hai...(touching his thorat)
Tulsi: acha main latti hun...
Sujal: nahi nahi Aunty ap bethain main le leta hun...kitchen iss taraf hai na..
Tulsi: haan...Kashish udhar hi hai...uss se khena woh dey dygi...
Sujal smiles and goes towards the kitchen....

Kashish is giving final touches to the food...and putitng them in the vessels...when Sujal walks in...
She looks at Sujal walking in.....
Kashish: ap yahan bhi???
Sujal: haan..nahi...woh actually...main....pani chahiye tha....
Kashish: pani???
Sujal nods...Kashish gives him a glass of water....he drinks it...
Sujal: kuchh....help chahiye????
Kashish: ap help kerein gay???
Sujal: bilkul...kyun main nahi ker sakta...
Kashish: hum log ghar aye mehmaanon se kaam nahi kerwatay...
Sujal: doston se maddad to li ja sakti hai...
Kashish: dossstt....???? humari yeh so-called dosti kab hui....???
Sujal: mujhe lagaa....
Kashish: jee nahi...ghalat laga apko....dost to kia...abhi to hum aik dusre ko sahi tarah se jantay bhi nahi....dosti to door ki baat hai...
Sujal: aahaaan....well...tum mujhse dosti aj nahi kerna chahti...lekin kal ko khud meri dost banana chaho gi yeh mera vaada hai...lekin tab shayed main dosti ke mood main na hun??? keep that in mind...(he smiles....winks at her and leaves)
Kashish keeps looking back even when he is gone....

When dinner is served.....they all are sitting on the dining table....Sujal, Akshat,Anjali and Krippa are sititng on one side...Kumkum, Summit and Angad are sitting on the other.....Veena, Mihir and Tulsi are adjusted on the two head-of-the-table wali sides...ab sirf Angad ke saath wali jagah bachti hai...obviously Kashish ke lie...Sujal ke samne...
They all are eating other food when Kashish comes from the kitchen....carrying the bowl of chicken manchurian...
Veena: Kashish beta...kehna parray ga...khanna bhut acha banati ho...
Kashish: arey nahi Aunty...yeh sab to Bhabhi aur Mumma ne banaya hai...maine to bas..yeh chicken manchurian banyaa hai...
She comes and sits at her place....in front of Sujal..who looks up at her...
Kashish: arey Sujal...tumne manchurian nahi lia...maine itniiii mehnat ker ke banaya hai...sirf tumhari request per.....(sweetly)
Sujal: haan..leta hun....(smiles at her)
Sujal puts a small amount in his plate...
Sujal: (thinks) Sujal beta....yeh kuch ziada hi sweet ho rahi ahi...zaruuurrr kuch garbar hai...
Kashish: Sujal..itna kamm kyun le rahay ho...meine tumhare liye banaya hai...aur lo na...
Akshat: haan haan Sujal aur lo na...(naughtily)
Sujal: leta hu na....(looks snobbishly at Akshat)
Akshat: tu nahi ley ga....chal main daal deta hun...
He takes the bowl from Sujal and puts a lottt of rice and manchurian on it....
Kashish: arey ab khaa ker batao to sahi kaisa bana hai....
The elders are busy in their talk...and otehrs are also not looking their way...busy talking to each other...only Kashish, Akshat aur Sujal talking 2gether....
Sujal takes a spoonful of the rice and manchurian...he chews into the food aur do second baad ruk jata hai...he cant chew anymore
Akshat: arey ruk kyu gaya....bata na kaisa bana hai...
Sujal is still holding the spoon...he looks up from his plate at Kashish...who has a hand clamped under her chin and trying to suppress her laughter...
Akshat: abay kia hau....
Sujal keeps on looking at Kashish..then sits straight and starts chewing again...Kashish is surprised....
Asal main Kashish ne manchurian main bohaaaaaaaaaaaaaat ziada mirchain daal di thi....takkay Sujal ko mirchi lagay....
Akshat: acha bana hai????
Sujal gulps down the food....and breathes out...uss ke kaan se to jaisay dhuye nikal rahay thay llolzz....but he would rather die than accept it....
Sujal: haan bohaat acha bana hai...
Kashish looks at him...and at once starts regretting what she did....
Akshat: la phir mujhe bhi de main bhi khata hun...
He take sthe bowl...and strats eating...pehli hi bite main becharay ki pack ho jati hai...
Akshat: oh terriii...iss main to sakht kism ki mirchain hain....Sujal tu khaa kaisay raha hai...(he looks at Sujal who keeps on eating)...oh panni do.....
He gulps down the water.....
Sujal: jab koi kisi ke liye kuch banata hai...apne haathon se......to ussay waisay hi khaa lena chahiye...yeh nahi dekhna chahiye khe acha bana hai ya bura...(staring at her)
Kashish looks at him and gives a small smile...
Kashish: (thinks) tujhe aissa nahi kerna chahiye tha Kashish....uss ne to mazak kia tha....aur tune uss ke saath acha nahi kia...
She gets up from her chair towards the kitchen.....not able to face Sujal after what she did...she is feeling sooooo bad keh uss ki ankhon main guilt ke marray ansoo ajatay hain...(sounds familiar...kyun farah...ahahahahhahahahaha...lolz)
After a few minutes....she hears some footsteps behind her...she turns to see Sujal standing ther.e...
He looks at her....intently...she wipes her tears...
Sujal: tummm....ro rahi thi???
Kashish: nahi to...(in a small voice)
Sujal: are u sure....(sincerely)
Kashish nods....
Sujal: tumne kuch khaya bhi nahi aur uth ker challi ayi...
Kashish: bhook nahi hai...
Sujal: hmmmm....waisay manchurian bhut acha bana tha....
Kashish looks up at him...at hearing this....she could see a smaaaallll smile on his face...tehy both look at each other...and burst out laughing.....
They keep on laughing for a longgg timee....tehn control themselves....
Kashish: i ammm sorrrryyyy...mujhe aisa nahi karna chahye tha....lekin mein kia karti...tum mujhe subbah se itna irritate ker rahay thay...
Sujal: (smiles)....koi baat nahi...waisay irritate kerna meri bachpan ki aadat hai...
Kashish: oh by the way...tum yahan kyun aye thay??? (again snobbish)
Sujal: woh...umm...actually......mirchi bhut lag rahi hai....kuch meetha millay ga...
They both again look at ecah other and again burst out laughing....

After dinner....the bacha party..that is Sujal, Kashish, Krippa, Angad, Akshat, Charru and Anjali are sitting outside in the garden...playing silly games....and talking....
Angad and Krippa are as usual fighting....and everyone is having small talks...Sujal, obviously, is sitting next to Kashish...whose talking to Anjali on her side...and Akshat is sitting on the otehr side of Sujal...
Charru: Dii.....aj coffee ka koi plan hai keh nahi????
Kashish: oh haan mein le ker ati hun...
She gets up and ges inside...Veena had gone home aur bachon ne baad main jana tha...After some time Kashish returns with mugs of coffee on a tray and some snacks...
She puts the tray down and sits down again....with Sujal...Everyone takes a mug of coffee...
Sujal takes a sip....and looks at Kashish...
Kashish: kaisi bani hai....(Sujal se kehti hai)
Sujal: achi hai.....
Kashish: main waisay bhi sab kuch acha banati hun....(arrogantly)
Sujal: acha bhayi theek hai...tum to harr baat ko katnay k dorti ho...
Kashish: main bass aisi hi hun...tumhain pasand hai to theek hai...nahi to ur bad choice...
She turns towards Anjali..>Sujal smirks....
Sujal: (murmurs to himself) Teekhi mirchi....
Kashsih at once turns...
Kahsish: kiaa...kia kaha tum ne....
Sujal points at himself
Sujal: aaappp....mujhse baat ker rahi hain?????
Kashish raises her eyebrows....
Sujal: woh...ummm..mein keh raha tha keh...manchurian main bhut mirchi thi..
Kashish: hmm...(turns again)
Sujal smiles...: (thinks) sach main teekhi mirch hi hai...lekin jaisi bhi hai....meri hai......!!!!!

do commentttt...love kiran!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
😆 dassssh..idhar kaun si wali gali do hahahaha...guilt se ansoo kaise ate hain...how would i know hahahahahahahahahahaha.... 👏

excelllent part...waise abhi last two parein hain hehe par i sure zaida miss nahi huwa 😆 😆 ..ek to saal mein do dafa ake story likhti ho....dangz 😆 😆
i loourrvee angad's punjabi hehehe kasam se tumhara style hai bolne ka ahahahahahahaha...aur akshat ka dailogue...dafa ho bahir..seriously hahaha aisa laga tum bol rahi ho.....and u know i am fida on ur vocab hahahahha 😆 😆 😆
but very sweet part..espically..woh manchurian wala..awwwww..bechara sujal.....waise itne logon mein ...do pyaar karne wael ek dum akele kaise ho jate hain?? ghehehehehe..... 😆 😆 ...continue soon....great going...... 😉 ...personal request hehehe...haru aur akshat ka bhi koi ala kisam ka scene ho jaye 😉 😉 😆
luv ya ...continue sooon...best of luck for the paper tomorrow 😳 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
amazing part 👏 ...and long too
sujal aur kashish...hai kitne cute hain...aur angad aur kripa...childish fights...so cuteeeeeee
cha gaye tusi...
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Posted: 18 years ago
kiran yaar awesoem part very nice superb 👏 kafi funny aur mazedar 👏 continue soon and best of luck 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
ohh jee kiroo aapne thoo jaakas part diya hai ree...
👏 👏 👏 ur too much yaar ab tho mera mann kar raha hai to become ur fan.. 😆 😆 😆

wah mann too goodd...excellent part...mind blowing..awesum yaar...totally rocking yaaar.. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
heres the next part...


The next two days pass...Sujal and Akshat are busy in their pundifying heheheh....and Krippa has enrolled at a college....
Sujal and Akshat are also busy in carrying out the basic paperwork for their Garewal Industries in India...

One day....Sujal and Akshat are sitting in the office...doing some work.....they take a coffee break....
The attendant brings in the coffee and leaves....
Akshat: aaaahhhh....(sighs after takinga sip)
Sujal: tu kyun thandi ahaain bhar raha hai....
Akshat: tujhe nahi lagta aj kuch ziada kama ho gaya....
Sujal: jinhain kaam kerne ki aadat na ho unhain aissa hi lagta hai.....yeh to kuch bhi nahi hai...
Akshat: ziada over honay ki zarurat nahi hai...(puts his cup down) tujhe kia lagta hai keh mere beghair tera koi bhi kaam ho sakta hai....?
Sujal:ummmmm......(pretending to think)
Akshat:tu soch kia raha hai...seedha seedha bol na haan Akshat....mera koi bhi kaam tere beghair pura nahi ho sakta....(grinning0
Sujal: nahin waisya bhut se aissay kaam hai jo mein tumhare beghair ker skata hun....( leaning back)
Akshat: jaisay ke.....???
Sujal: jaisay ke......Kashish se dosti ekrna.....
Akshat: huh!!! beta yeh kaam to ap bilkul bhi mere beghair nahi ker sakte...
Sujal: wrong....tum dekh lena aik haftey ke andar andar woh meri dost hogi...
Akshat: dun bet on that...(smirking)
Sujal: well....lets just bet on this one....mein Kashish ko apna dost banata hun aur tu mujhe Charru ko patta ke dikha de....
Akshat: yeh to mere baayen haath ka khel hai....chutkian bajanay main woh mere saath hogi...
Sujal: ahaan...chalo dekhte hain....kaun kamiyaab hota hai....
Akshat: lekin mujhe abhi takk yeh smajah nahi ayi....tujhe aik yeh hi larki kyun chahiye...
Sujal: kyunki woh sabse alag hai!!!! (smiles)....ab kaam karain????
Akshat: aaaggghhh!!!!
Sujal is laughing when his cell rings...
Sujal: aik minute ruk....hhello...
Anjali: haan....Sujal bhaiya...
Sujal: haan Anjali bolo kia baat hai....
Anjali: Bhai woh....ap jaldi se ghar ajayen....
Sujal: tum ini ghabrayi hui kyun ho.....sab theek hai na...
Anjali: haan...bass ap ajaiye....
Sujal: theek hai main ata hun.....
He gets up from the chair...
Akshat: kia hua??? tu kahan ja raha hai....(looks up at him)
Sujal: pata nahi...gahr per kuch ho gaya hai...Anjali bula rahi thi....ghabrayi hui thi...main chalta hu....
Akshat: main bhi ata hun...
Sujal: nahi nahi Akshat...tum yahiin ruko...bhut kaam parra hai....aur aj 5 bajjay site manager ke satah emeting hai...tum sambhal lena...
Akshat: theek hai...tum jao...aur agar ziada problem to bata dena...
Sujal takes leave....

Akshat betah boring files parh raha hota hai...
Akshat: kidhar reh gaya yeh site manager...kia naam tha uss ka....haan...Phogaliya....yeh pata nahi kiss kism ke naam rakh lete hai....bolte huay lagta hai khansi ker raha hun...
(he is talking to himself)
Ussi waqt uss ka cell phone bajta hai...
Akshat: helllooo......Akshat here...
Krippa: janti hun....
Akshat: Krippa tum...
Krippa: jee main...Akshat Bhaiya....mujhe apse aik kaam tha....
Akshat: jee bolain...(very sweetly)
Krippa: woh....Sujal Bhaiya apke paas haain???
Akshat: nahi...woh to ghar chala gaya hai....kyun koi problem hai???
Krippa: haan...woh...aj college mein koi problem ho gaya hai..to chuti pehle ho gai hai...Sujal Bhaiya to fone nahi utha rahay ap mujhe lene asakte hain???
Akshat: kia masla ho gaya....tum theek ho na...
Krippa: jee....bass main hun aur meri aik friend...ussay gahr drop kerna hai...plz jaldi se ajayen....
Akshat: theek hai...tum ghabrao mat....main 5 minute main pohanchta tha....
Akshat takes the car and rushes to the college...jahan puraaaa college khalli hota hai....bahir koi bhi nahi hota...woh garri se utarta hai....
Akshat: yeh Krippa kahan chali gai....(wonders)
He calls her number per not responding...he goes inside the college
Garden main bhi koi nahi hota aur na hi canteen mein....woh ahista se andar college mein jata hai...
Lights off hoti hain...he is whistling a tone...woh are re areyy wlai tone hehehe....
Akshat: uff...ab yeh larki kahan chali gai....Krippppaaa!!! (he calls but there is no response)
Woh harr classroom check ekr rhaa hota hai per koi nahi hota.....
Phir woh aik corridor mian murta hai jahan door ussay aik larki nazar ati hai...
He goes silently towards her...uss larki ki back us ski taaf hoti hai....
Akshat ja ker uss larki ke shoulder per haath rakhta hai...thinking she is Krippa....
The girls yells out loud...aur murti hai...aur uss ki cheekh sun ker bechara Akshat bhi darr jata hai aur cheekh marta hai....
Phir woh dekhta hai keh woh larki aur koi nai Charru hai...
Akshat: Tummmm,.....
Charru: TUM!!!!!
Akshat: oh my God...tum pagal ho kia...tum cheekhi kyun thi....
Charru: sunsaan corridor main aker mere knadhay per haath rakho gay to darrun gi to sahi na.....by the way...TUm kyun cheekhay thay...
Akshat: ummm...woh....main....main tumhari cheekh sun ker darr gaya tha...mujhe laga pata nahi kooi churail vurail na ho...
Charru: whaat!!! tumne mujeh churail kaha....(in anger)
Akshat: maine tumhain kab kaha...maine to kaha mujhe LAGA ke koi churail hai...
Charru: ab yeh LAGA ka kia matlab hota hai?? (with her hands on her hips)
Akshat: lagnay ka matlab hota hai......jaisay tum...mujhe bhuuutttt zor se lagti ho...(winks at her)
Charru: ab iss ka kia matlab???
Akshat: yaar tumne mujhe Oxford Dictionary samajh rakha hai....harr baat ka matlabb....kuch baatain samjhi jti hain un ka matlab samjhanay ki zarurat nahi perti....
Charru: achaaa....aissi kaun si baatain ap kerte hain jo mein khud bakhud samajh jaun???
Akshat: ab tum yeh bhi nahi samajh payi to iss baat ko kia samjhun gi...khair choro...
Charru: maine pakra kab tha??? (grinning)
Akshat: yeh to meri line honi chhaiye...lekin kehti ho to pakar leta hun....(smiling)
Charru: shut upp!!!!!
Akshat: yaar yeh tumhare purey khandaan ko shut up kehne ki bemari hai..pehle Kashish ab tum...
Charru: izzat se naam lo meri Di ka...
Akshat: Di tumhari hai....to izzat main kyun keroon...mere liye to woh meri Bhabh...(chup ker jata hai)
Charru: kiaaaa...kia kaha tumne???
Akshat: kuch nahi...meine kaha mere liye to woh meri behen jaisi hai...
Charru: kal takk to flirt ker rahay thay...
Akshat: kkkaaaauuuun??? maaaaiiin.....aur flirttt......mujhse ziada shareef larka to tumhain dhundhne se bhi nahi mille ga....
Charru: hai na...tumse ziada acha bhi aur shareef bhi...jisse mein janti hun...
Akshat: kaun kaun kaun...
Charru: Sujal Bhaiya....
AKshat bursts out laughing....
Charru: hans kyun rahay ho???
Akshat: Sujjjaaall...aur shareeeefff??? Hahahahhahaha......
Charru: Ha-Ha-Ha!!! Very funny....lekin yeh sach hei keh un ki ankhon mein aik sachayi nazar ati hai....
Akshat: uss ki ankhon mein sachayi nazar ati hai...aur meri ankhon mein chupa pyaar nahi dikhta tumhain??? (being cheap romantic)
Charru: shut up....
Akshat: oh btw...mein tumse puchna bhul gaya...tum iss sunsan corridor main kia kar rahi ho....
Charru: main aur Krippa tumhara hi intezar ker rahay thay....
Akshat: hmmm...aur yeh Krippa kahan hai...
Aik darwazay se awaz ati hai...
Krippa: Main yahan hoon.....
She come sout under a pile of bbooks
Akshat: tum itni der se andar kia kar rahi thi...(suspiciously)
Krippa: dont worry...maine kuccccccccccccccch nahi sunna....(grrining)
Akshat: acha....woh...ab...baatain band kero...aur chalo....(behenon ke samne pakre jannay main bhuttt embarassment hoti hai heheheh)
Charru: haan chalo...

They all leave for theeirrr destination....
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👏 yaar the best part hehehe...u know i love those kinda lines..me ki fav hoti hain hehehehe.....excellent super..ab agaye likho hehehe
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kiran dear awesome part tooooo gooooood continue soon
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😆 fankkksss for tha comments ehehhe!!!

Wahan Sujal phanchata hai ghar.....
He is very worried ke pata nahi kia baat ho gai keh Anjali ne usay ghar bulaya.....
Woh ghar mein enter hota hai....yo dekhta hai ke Veena sofay per bethi ro rahi hai..aur Anjali uss ke pass bethi hai...ussay console ekr rahi hai aur khud bhi ro rahi hai...
Sujal: Anjali.....
Anjali looks up at him...and then rushes to him..crying...and hugs him...Sujal uss ke sarr per haath rakhta hai..
Sujal: kia baat hai Anjali....
Anjali duznt speak....just keeps on crying..Sujal leaves her and goes towards Veena....He kneals down in front of her and looks up at her..
Sujal: kia baat hai Mumma...ap kiyun ro rahey ho....
Veena just keeps on crying.
Sujal: bataiye na kia baat hai.....
Veena puts a hand on his head and keeps on crying....Sujal stands up and sits on the side of the sofa....Veena puts he rhead on his shoulder.....
Veena: Sujjaaalll.....
Sujal: Mummmaa...bataiye na...kyun ro rahi hain;....kia ho gaya...
Just then a voice comes...
Voice: woh nahi boley gi Sujal...main hi bata deti hun....
Sujal looks up...to see a woman standing on the stairs..shes none other than his father's second wife....Reva Garewal
Sujal is shocked out of his wits....He stands up....
Sujal: Aaaappp....???
Reva: haan Sujal....main....(steps down fron the stairs) kia socha tha tum ne...keh tum log iss ghar per kabza ker jao gay...mere pati ko mujhse cheen lo gay....mere bete se uss ka baap cheen lo gay..aur hum chup chaap bethe rahain gay.....
Sujal looks at her with ghusssaaaa...hehe....
Sujal: ap logon ka un per haq ho ga lekin iss ghar main reh ker umare parivaar ko dukh pohachanay ka koi haq nahi hai...
Reva: humne yeh haq manga nahi...hmain to yeh haq dia hai.khud tumhare baap ne....
Just then Reva's son comes down....duznt knw wats happening..
Swayem: Momm......abhi takk luggage nahi aya....
Reva: dekho na Swayem...tumse milne tumhara BHAI aya hai....
Sujal looks at her and Swayem...angry...Swayem looks at him and a wicked smile comes on his face....
Swayem: ooohhh....mein bhi kahun yeh ghar mein shor kaisa hai....kaisay ho Sujal?
Sujal ignores his comments.
Sujal: tum logon ko iss ghar main rehne ki ijazat main kabhi bhi nahi dunga....iss liye jitna jaldi ho sakta hai apna samaan uthao aur niklo yahan se...
Swayem: huh...tumahri ijazat ki zarurat nahi hai humain...iss gahr per jitna haq tumhara hai utna hi mera hai...samjahy....
Sujal walks over to him....with a small smile on his lips....the sarcastic one...and puts a hand on his shoulder...
Sujal: lagta hai tumhain meir baat samajh nahi ayegi..to phir aissa kerte hain...keh mein tumse tumhari bhasha main baat kerta hun..
Swayem looks at him...
Sujal: yeh haq-haq wala game baad main kheley gay...ok Swayem...filhaal tum yahan se bahir niklo iss se pehle ke main tumhain iss ghar se dhakkay maar ke bahir nikaluun....
Swayem: SUJAL.....
Sujal: tututut......apne bhai ka naam iss tarah chilla ke nahi lete...umar mein to ziada farq nahi hhai hum main..(they are both the same age approx.)...lekin phir bhi izzzat se naam lena chahiye kisi ka...itna bhi nahi sikhaya tumhari maa ne....
Swayem: maa takk matt pohanchu Sujal...
Sujal: kyun...meri Maa ko takleef pohanchatay huay....ussay harr tarah se dukh dete waqt tumhain khyal nahi ata...keh woh bhi kisi ki maa hai....
Swayem: tumhari maa per jitni museebatain hain aur meri maa ko jitni takleef pohanhi hai...uss sab ka zimadar humara hi baap hai...
Sujal: janta hun main....un se hissaab to main pura ker lunga..lkein iss waqt...tum logon ka iss ghar main hona main bardasht nahi ker raha...iss liye seedha seedha keh raha hun keh iss ghar se nikal jo..woh raha darwaaza...chalo...(ankhon se ishara kerta hai ke out)
Uss waqt takk CG,Bauji aur Dida bhi achukay hoty ain...Bauji aur Dida bahir se attay hain...they had not knwn keh Reva n Swayem had returned...
CG: Sujallll......yeh sab kia ho rha hai...
Sujal turns to see CG....
Sujal: Oohhh...to akhir kaar Mr.Chetan Garewal ko khyal ahi gaya keh iss ghar main koi qayamat barpa ho rahi hai...aiye..apka hi intezar tha....
CG: yeh tum mujhse kiss tarah baat ker rahay ho....
Sujal: apse hi seekha hai sab kuch.....
Swayem: Daad....Dad....(goes over to Cg) yeh Sujal...yeh humain iss ghar se...humare ghar se....bahir nikalana chahta hai...
Sujal: Swayem....mujhe to hairaangi ho rhai hai...jo insaan abhi takk baap ki ungli pakar ker chalta hai woh maa ko kia sahara de sakta hai...
Swayem: shut up Sujal....
CG: Sujal....Swayem aur Reva iss ghar mein rahain gay....yeh mera faisla hai aur issay koi nahi badal sakta....
By this time...Dida is consoling Veena who is continuosly crying...
Sujal: theek hai...phir faisla aj hi lein lay...maine apke samne shart rakhi thi keh India ane ke baad humara in logon se koi contact nahi hoga....lekin hamesha ki tarah apne apna waada torr dia....
CG: kaisa faisla kerna chahte ho tum...
Sujal: agar ye log yahaan rahaiin gay...to hum log nahi rahain gay...
CG: yeh tum kia keh rahay ho...
Sujal: wohi jo ap sun rahay hain...agar Swayem aur Reva Garewal iss ghar main aye to hum log iss ghar main nahi rahain gay.....donon parivaar aik saath nahi rkah sakte ap Dad...
CG: aissa harr giz nahi hoga...
Sujal: kyun...apne faisle khud le sakte hain to dusron ke faislon ko bhi manna parray ga....
CG: tum abhi itne barray nahi huey ke iss ghar ke faislay lo....
Bauji: oh chup kerooo...
Everyone turns to look at him...
Bauji: barra to tu bhi itna nahi hua Chetan keh iss kaar ke faislay kere...mere hotay huay Reva aur Swayem iss gahr main kabhi nahi reh saktay....humare ghar ki aik hi bahu hai woh hai Veena aur aik hi pota hai woh hai Sujal....uss ke aggay koi bhi in ki jagah nahi le sakta...
CG: yeh ap kia keh rahay hain Bauji...
Bauji: sahi keh raha hun.....humare liye to tu ussi din marr gaya tha jab tu ne Veena ko chor ker iss aurat se shadi ki.....
Dida: haan Chetan....yeh to Veena ki himmat hai keh tere saath abhi takk guzara ker rai hai...ab iss se pehle keh hum sab ka sabar tootay tu in ko ley ja aur dafa ho ja yahan se....
CG: Maa jee....
Dida: matt bula mujhe Maa.....bharosa tora hai tune mera....ab tu aur yeh log yahan nai reh sakte...aj takk tere saath sab rishte thay sirf Veena aur Sujal ki wajah se....aj se tu humara kuch nahi...dkeh apne bete ko...dekh uss Sujal ko jiss ki zindagi main jitni bhi mushkilaat hain teri wajah se hain....
CG: main ne kisi ke liye koi museebat nahu kharri ki...
Bauji: iss se pehle ke meri bardasht khatam ho....tu dafa hoja yahan se .....NIKAL JAA YAHAN SE!!!
Reva goes over to Cg
Reva: chalo CG....hum yahan se chalte hain...dkeha tumne...itne saal in logon ke saath rehne ke bawajood bhi yeh tumhare na ho sakay...chalo....
CG looks at everyone....and is abt to go over to Veena...
Sujal steps in btw....
Sujal: no Dad....dun even think about that...bhut saal pehle bhi apne Mumma ka sahara le ker humare parivaar se rishta jorri rakha...ab nahi...
CG: woh meri patni hai.....
Sujal: woh apki patni THI...ab nahi...ap ja sakte hain....
By now everyone is in tears..except Reva and Swayem hehehe....
Veena is crying uncontrollably.....
CG goes in his room with Reva....after 5 mins they come out with a bag....hehehe...
CG: main ja raha hun.....apna khyal rakhiye ga....aur haan Veena...aj main tumhain chor ekr apni marzi se nahi ja raha....tumhara beta hi tumhai tabahi ki wajah hai....
Veena stand up
Veena: BASSSSSSSSS!!!!!! Ab aik aur lafaz na kehna emre Sujal ke khilaaf....
CG is shockeedd....Veena had never shouted at him
Veena: meri zindaggi ki tabahi TUMHARI WAJAH SE HAI MR.CHETAN GAREWAL......agar meri zindagi ka koi sahara hai to sirf SUJAL....aur mujhe kisi aur ki zarurat bhi nahi....mere bachay mere saath hain...aur mere maa baap (looks at Dida anad Bauji) bhi....ab to sirf tum akele ho....aur hamesha raho gay....
CG is very angry.....he goes over to Veena and is about to slap her...jab Sujal uss ka haath pakr leta hai...
Sujal: DDDDDDDAAAAAAAAAAAAADDD!!!!!
Cg is shocked keh Sujal ne uss ka haath pakra....
Sujal: Dun u daree.e......dun u dare raise ur hand on her......(points his finger at him)ab yeh apki kuch nahi lagti....koi haq nahi apka in per....jaiye yahanse.....
Cg leaves him and in a state of shock.....goes near the door...ab Swayem ko ghussa ata hai...he goes over to Sujal....
Swayem: tumne mere baap ke saath itni badtamizi ki......(in anger)
Sujal: iss se pehle ke tumhara bhut barra hashar ho...get out....
Reva: chalo Swayem.....
CG who is standing near the door...returns and tries to take ashirwaad of Dida n Bauji who turn away...woh Anjali ki taraf murta hai uss ke sarr per haath rakhne lagta hai jab Anjali apna sarr peeche ker leti hi.....darwazay per ab dekhte hain keh Akshat aur Krippa bhi kharray hain...they had seen the whole seen....Krippa is crying uncontrollably...Akshat ki ankhon main ansoo hotay hain....
Cg then goes to Krippa aur uss ko hug kerne ke lie haath aggay kerta hai....jab Krippa uss ke haath side per jhatak ker Sujal ki taraf bhagti hai...Akshat also gooes over to Veena...CG turns to see his own previous khandaaan standing on the other sode...looking at him with contempt and hatred....while he left with Reva and Swayem....

After he left....Krippa and Anjali run to Sujal and hug him...both are crying a lott.....Sujal holds his ars around both of them tightly....kisses their foreheads....
Sujal: shush shussh.....rotay nahi.....hum reh lein gay un ke beghair...ab humain Mumma ki taqat banana hai....huh....???
They both nod....Sujal leaves them...clears their tears....then looks at Akshat....Anjali has controlled himself but Krippa is still crying a lot....Sujal looks at Akshat and nods...who comes over...and both Akshat and Anjali hold Krippa and console her....make her stp crying...
Sujal then goes oveer to Veena......holds her.....
They both do not say anything....Veena just looks up at him vrying....aur Sujal apne ap ko control nahi ker pata...he hugs her and both start crying...Sujal ki ankhon se ansoo girte hain.....he hholds Veena tightly...making her understand that he will always be there for her....
Then he leaves Veena...clears his own and then Veena's tears....makes her sit down
Sujal: ab ap nahi royen gi Mumma....ab hum apko ronnay nahi deinge....hum sab hain na apke saath....
Veena nods...
Sujal: phir to darnee ki koi baat hi nhai.....humain ab un ki zarurat nahi...apko mujh per to bharosa hai na....
Veena nods again...
Sujal: bass phir ap dekhna...iss ghar main ab khushiyan i hongi....kyun Bauji???
He looks at Bauji and Dida....who nod and smile between their tears...
Sujal stands up...
Sujal: bass ab iss gahr mein koi nai rroye gaq...hum khushi khsuhi rahain gay...jo khushiyan humare naseeb main hain un ko manaye hain aur jo dukh hain un ko akhatay kheley gain.....
Akshat: bilkul sahi kaha tumne Sujal......balke main to kehta hun Mumma....keh ab waqt agaya hai Sujal ke haath peele kerne ke....
Everyone smiles...laughs out....
Veena: haan...mujhe bhi lagta hai...
Akshat: bass phir....masla kia hai...ap aur Dida lag jaye BAHU SeARCH per.....koi na koi to mill hi jayegi....
Sujal: arey yeh kia...shadi meri hai to larki to main dhundhun ga na......(smiles)
Krippa: haan Mumma...hum apne Bhai ki pyaaari si biwi layenge...
Akshat: haan hann PYARRRI si dulhannn...kyun Sujal??? (winks)
Dida holds her ears...
Dida: waisay umar to teri bhi ho gai hai shadi ki....
Krippa: aur inhon ne to larki bhi dhundh l....(jaldi main bolti hai)
Akshat: KRIPPPAA!!!!!
Krippa: mujhe kia pata tah keh kisi ko nahi batana khe ap ko Charru pasand hai....(then bites her tongue)
Akshat apne sar per haath rkah leta hai
Akshat: marr gaya!
Sujal: kia Akshat...tumne bataya nahi yaar...(acting fake)
Anjali: CHaarrruuu???? waisay larki to achi hai....kyun Mumma...
Veena nods.....
Sujal: beta...aur kera mere haath peele...
Everyone laughs...then suddenly everyone remembers kia hua tha...sab ki ankhon mein phir se ansoo ajatay hain....
Sujal: Anjali...tum...Mumma ko kamray main le ker jao...main ata hun....
Anjali nods...actually tehy all are trying their best to control themselves aur mahol sahi kerne ke liye....

Sujal ghar ke darwazay se bahir nikalta hai...side per dekhta hai keh darwzay ke bahir walay corridor main Kashish kharri hai.....uss ki ankhon main ansoo hotay hain aur honton per smile.....woh Sujal ko dekh ker ghabra jati hai...
Sujal: tum...yahan????
Kashish: haan....woh.....main....Anjali se baat kerne...(in a small voice)
Sujal nods....
Kashish: tum kahiin ja rahya ho???
Sujal: nahi aissay hi.....walk per...
Kashish: do u mind....agar mein saath chalun to.....
Sujal smiles...
Sujal: not at all....aoo...

They both are in the nearby park....both are walking...its cold outside....btoh are very quiet....lost in their thoughts.....
Sujal: (thinks) kahiin Kashish ne sab sun to nahi lia....
Kashish: (thinks) ab main Sujal ko kaisay bataun keh maine sab sun liya hai....
Kashish: Aheeemmm....(clears her throat)
Sujal: haan..kuch kaha tumne...???
Kashish: nahi...actually mujhe to hairangi ho rahi hai...
Sujal: hairangi...woh kyun????
Kashish: aj pehli baar tum itne chup chup ho...
Sujal smiles....both sit on a bench....
Kashish: Sujal....mujhe tumse kuch kehna tha....
Sujal: haan bolo...
Kashish: woh...actually....mein Anjali se baat kerne ayi tho..lekin tum logon ke ghar pe...i mean...jo kuch hua.....maine sun lia....main sunna nahi chahti thi..lekin...
Sujal: i can understand...its ok....(clapms his hands together)
Kashish: Sujal...main nahi janti thi keh...i mean...tum logon ke ghar mein itni problems hain...i am sorry..!!!
Sujal: dont be....yeh to qismat ki baat hai....
Kashish aur Sujal 2 min ke liye chup rehte hain...
Sujal: janti ho Kashish.....koi bhi humare parivaar ko door se dkehta hai to ussaay aik hansta khelta khsuh pairvvar nazar ata hai....lekin jitna humare qareeb aogey utni hi mushkilaat utni hi takleef utni hi durian nazar ayengi.....
Kashish chup rehti hai....
Sujal: main kabhi nahi chahta tha keh yeh sba ho......lekin haalllat ne mujhe yeh sab kerne per majbur ker dia....
Kashish: waisay...hua kia tha.....i mean...yeh Swayem aur Reva kaun hain....
Sujal looks at her...then slowly narrated the whole tale to her....when he had not even been born....CG came upto Veena, his first wife, and told her that he had remarried....and had a son named Swayem...veena had been broken from insdie that day...but culdnt do anyfink cuz she was alone...no parents and her first child was to be born....after a year CG had come and told her that he had left reva forever...Veena had been very happy....and some time later Anjali was born...then they had shifted to Delhi from Simla....remained there for 4-5 years...when Krippa was born....his dad returned to Simla for business.....Veena took care of the children alone...then they returned to London...when Sujal had been 19 years old....CG had gone to India and dint return for 2 years...then Veena had told him abt CG n reva,...he had started hating his dad......then he came to knw thru business contacts in India (he had recently started work in Garewal Industries after his MBA) that his dad was living with another family...he had never told veena this but had turned against his dad forver.....and then coming back to India and today's episode....

Jab Sujal bolna band kerta hai...to donon ki ankon main ansoo hotay hain....kuch der ke liye khamoshi rehit hai....
Sujal: main nahi janta Kashish...keh mein yeh sab tumhain kyun bata raha hun....yeh baat maine aj takk kisi ko nahi batayi...apni feelings apne ehsaasat kabhi kisi se share nahi kiye...even Akshat se bhi nahi...lekin mujhe lga keh tumhain bataunga to i will feel better...
Kashish smiles...
Kashish: hotay hain kuch aisay rishtey Sujal...jin ka koi naam to nahi hota lekin ehsaasat sabse ziada hotay hain.....
Sujal: sahi keh rahi ho tum.....
They both smle....then Sujal looks at her...and she sees tears in his eyes....and then her tears also drp along with his....
Sujal: Kashish...tum ro kyun rahi ho...(concerned)
Kashish: tum kyun ro rahay ho???? (wiping her tears)
Sujal: tum MERE liye ro rahi ho....
Kashish: haan...nahi...matlab pata nahi...bass rona agaya.....Aunty theek hain???
Sujal nods then says...
Sujal: i hope Mumma will cope with all this.....woh iss sadmey ko bardasht ker jayen to meri sabse barri pareshani khatam ho jayegi....
Kashish: dun worry Sujal.....tum ho na un ke saath...to phir woh kaisay tutay gi....
She puts a hand on his hand.....the first time she had ever touched him....he looked up at her...he felt a sense of security andd peace arnd her...
Sujal: thanks....
Kashish: kiss liye???
Sujal: meri baat sunanay ke liye.....aur listen...yeh baat tumne kisi ko batai na to i will kill u...(ppoints at her and smiles)
Kashish tries to control her smile and nods....
Kashish: tumhain bharosa to hai na mujh per......
Sujal: itna bharosa to aj takk khud pr bhi nahi kia...
Kashish: phir tumhain darne ki zarurat nahi...
Sujal smiles....his hand is still in Kashish's
Kashish: tum achay ho Sujal....
Sujal: shukar hai tumhain realize to hua...(laughs)
Kashish: haan.....mujhe lagta hai ke hum achay dost bann sakte hain...
Sujal raises his eyebrows
Kashish: i knw....maine hi pehle dosti nahi ki thi...par ab main tumse dosti kerna chahti hun...
Sujal: kyun...
Kashish: kyunki tum baqi larkon ki tarah nahi....alag ho...haan albata ho utnay hi stupid aur irritating ho..lekin dil ke achay bhi ho aur sachay bhi....
Sujal smiles....
Sujal: itna sab kuch jaan gai mere barray main woh bhi itni jaldi....
Kashish: chehra parhna jo janti hun...
Sujal: wow.w.....u r a facereader.....
Kashish: haan thora bhut...aur palmistry bhi janti hun....
Sujal: ahaaan...thats great...mera haath dekh ker batao...(apna haath agga kerta hai)
Kashish: iss ki do shartain hain....
Sujal: kia?
Kashish: aik to yeh keh tum kisi ko nai batao gay keh mujhe haath parhna ata hai...yeh baat to mere bhai behen ko bhi nahi pata...
Sujal: lekin iss main chupanay wlai kia bat hai?
Kashish: baat chupanay wlai nahi hai....baat bharosay ki hai....aur mujhe tum per bhut bharosa hai....
Sujal: aur dusri shart???
Kashish: tumhain mujhse dosti kerni parray gi....
Sujal: AHaaan...(raises his eyebrows)
Kashish: waisay main dost bhut kamm banati hun...lekin jin se dosti kerti hun sarri umar dosti nibhati hun...
Sujal: theek hai...mein tumse dosti kerta hun....lekin iss main meri bhi aik shart hai....(ballon main haath pherta hai_
Kashish: ab tumhari kia shart hai...(frowns)
Sujal: pehle bolo....manzur hai...
Kashish: tum bolo to sahi....
Sujal: u promise u wont fall in love with me....(confidently)
Kashish: welll.....i think i will just have to pass on that one...
Both laugh out loud....
Sujal: nahi...i was just kiding....mujhe pata hai i am very irresistible...(winks at her)
Kashish: watever...laughs
Sujal: achaa....to chalo dekh lete hein....whether u find me irresistible or not...
he gets up and starts walking away...Kashish smiles and keeps looking at him....walking away...woh uss se bhut door ja chuka hota hai...harr taraf andhera hota hai...
Kashish is not able to control herself...
Kashish: SUJALLL...
Sujal turns....Kashish runs up to him....and stops....they both are extremely close...
Sujal is grinning...
Sujal: maine kaha tha na.....smiles
Kashish: hanso matt...mujhe...woh...umm...mujhe thand lag rahi hai....coffee piye???
Sujal: i have heard....even coffee is irresistible....like me!! (smiles and winks)
Kashish: shut upp!!!! ab chalain....(hits him lightly)
They both start walking towards the near by coffee shop.....talking and bickering...

Do commentofy hehehe
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Posted: 18 years ago
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bare senti dailgoues hehehe..very well written./..loved every bit of it....aur last part k kya kehne hhehe..sujal shooda hehehe....well he is irresistable 😳 ..continue soon 😉

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