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shewolf.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#181

you know..i know I haven't edited any of my posts yet and soo today I decided to comment without reserving 😆 and i caught up with all the chapters and i was all 'i-am-going-to-write-a-long-comment' but dude after reading all of your updates i honestly have no words to write cause im speechless 😳 and i blame you for that :P like seriously..

But im going to try to write something because kaun jaane when ill be free next.

soo I love the recent chapter more. Somehow you've written Armaan's pov better :) or was it idk what.. And lawl that part where he calls up Brittany when he's drunk and she doesn't pic up lmao idk I loved that part 😆 don't ask me why, maybe it's the way you've written it or lol b/c I have a thing for when people are drunk 😆 and I probably sound drunk too.. 😆and I love your Armaan more than Ridz 😳 I usually go for the females but for the first or maybe second I actually like a male character ;P esp the way you write from his pov. 😳 its a huge thing because im way too picky :P

and idk what more to ramble b/c I still dunn have words to explain how amazing you are with your words 😳 it makes me wanna go and drown in chullu bhar paani :| and I hate you for that 😳

And aah best of luck for boards again and I might just write you a better comment when im in my senses, maybe laters 😆

Take care 🤗

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sh.

@.Dulcet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: Aanya.

Duuudeee you are my music soulmate it's official. Feel free to randomly drop in and suggest songs to me kabhi bhi :P

Waise Living Louder is the only song I've heard by The Cab, what others are good? :)

hahahaha 😆.. same here, never met a person, who has exactly actually the same taste like me, my brother has also almost the same taste, but he hears also techno and i hate techno 🤢

ofcourse :) i am sure you know the songs, but phir bhi :D.. i am a big linkin park fan, but only the old songs :D.. for example "in the end" and "numb", they are evergreen like hell!. i could hear them always

and the songs from greenday some are also awsome, like "Boulevourd of Broken Dreams" and "21 Guns", i hear this songs, a lot :)

my fav is also living louder, but i dont hear them a lot, but my bro does, but the song "bad", i like too :) its good :) but yeah they are ok :DD..

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doublep

@doublep

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Posted: 12 years ago

#183

The update was good as usual, what do you expect? ... and since you mentioned rishta.com i'd start off with that - aren't u a lil late buddy?😆 that show aired like almost 2 years ago if i'm correct. But it was one of the finest and no nonsense indian drama ever aired. I got hooked with the first few episodes on TV. Then the timings changed and I couln't follow it but I straightaway jumped to the last episode on youtube just to check if Isha and Rohan got together haha. I am yet to catch up on the ones in between.

The best part about your writing is that everything is so tight knit. You do not leave loose ends in your story and take care of the nitty gritties of stuffs like the part when Tracy was reading out the schedule or when Armaan was talking about the contract to Riddhima. I'd still say my favorite part thus far is the very 1st chapter. The break up reminded me of Arnav- Lavanya's break up cos I think that's the only clean, well handled break up I've seen in dramas. It'd be interesting to see how the good Brittany copes up with Armaan's attraction to Riddhima in the coming parts.

Also as every body said the part where you mentioned about letting go was bang on.

Will look forward to the coming updates

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-AK-

@-AK-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#184

Awesome update loved it his thoughts on the breakup were very nice loved those lines :)

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hosanna..

@hosanna..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#185

I'm loving it Aanya. Armaan is attracted to Riddhima. I thought neither of them would feel any type of feelings for each other for a while. I like how you are showing both POVs.

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Aanya

@Aanya.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: .Dulcet
hahahaha 😆.. same here, never met a person, who has exactly actually the same taste like me, my brother has also almost the same taste, but he hears also techno and i hate techno 🤢

ofcourse :) i am sure you know the songs, but phir bhi :D.. i am a big linkin park fan, but only the old songs :D.. for example "in the end" and "numb", they are evergreen like hell!. i could hear them always
and the songs from greenday some are also awsome, like "Boulevourd of Broken Dreams" and "21 Guns", i hear this songs, a lot :)

my fav is also living louder, but i dont hear them a lot, but my bro does, but the song "bad", i like too :) its good :) but yeah they are ok :DD..

LOL heard all of those...I'll check Bad out :D

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Aanya

@Aanya.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: Vins.ICT
A.M.A.Z.I.N.G...!
i know that its what every other person tells u... but just to feed ur ego... m sayin it again... 😉 the way U portray armaan is absolutely awsum... Its lyk ur words automatically weave the personality of d character in my mind and its nt just armaan... but Every other person from ridzi to Tracy... There seems to b a connection with every1... Like I'm actually watching the scene play out in front of my eyes...
And yeah for d record... The extent of connection that I feel with ur words ..i have felt with only J.k Rowling n Nora Roberts ... My fav. Authors... N I wudnt b surprised if U join into that list too... 👏

"Like the kind of feeling you get when someone throws away this really old t-shirt of yours that you found so comfortable. It leaves you hollow, fills you with an ache that hurts every now and then with a painful twinge. So you try and hold on to whatever you had when everything around you is screaming let go but you don't because letting go would mean throwing away something that was safe, comfortable, home and you're lost without it."
I actually know that feeling of losing that comfy t-shirt... I was so angry on my mum... 😆
But other than that... I can totally relate with what U wanna convey... In a diff context bt yeah d urge to hold on to whatever is left .. To not let go... Is totally there...!
I hoped U could write a bit more..😉 Bt then again I wud feel so even if U write double d content... N I knw u've gt xamz too...
So no worries... (but still cnt stop wishing to read some more)

Btw... I was gonna remind u on commenting on my drabble .. D one that I pmd... But reading d update... I dnt think U shud... ( m green with envy n red with embarrassment... Wondering what colour my face looks like aren't U.. ;) ..)
How do U write sooo well yaar...!!
Doesn't mean though I wouldn't b jumping with joy ( not literally... My house wud come down ) if U did comment...!!
Neways waiting for ur next update n yeah ur reply bfor dat...!!

Aasjkdahshfdhkj Thank youuu 😳

I'm honored that you think I'm so good!!

I will comment on your drabble anyway (one of these days) because even I didn't start off writing like this! Granted, I've always had a flair but I was never this good and constructive criticism is every author's bff so yep I'm gonna comment.

Thanks again <3

xoxo

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Aanya

@Aanya.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: Munchkin.
Don't kill me, but i need to catch up on the last 2 chapters :( Gonna read and comment soon :) <3

No worries babe <3

Originally posted by: muzic_lyf
i absolutely loved your update..
firstly i am telling you this before hand..i copied these lines from you..

"And now it felt different, weird. Like the kind of feeling you get when someone throws away this really old t-shirt of yours that you found so comfortable. It leaves you hollow, fills you with an ache that hurts every now and then with a painful twinge. So you try and hold on to whatever you had when everything around you is screaming let go but you don't because letting go would mean throwing away something that was safe, comfortable, home and you're lost without it.
Sooner or later though, the ice starts melting away, bit by bit until it's one with the water and you can't tell the difference between them anymore, and you realize, you had let go without noticing and the ache that you felt, that little spasm of pain every time you thought about her, has gone and everything you once had is nothing but an after taste that lingers for a short time, before it too, fades away."
i copied these lines not to post it somewhere else or to plagarise it...its just that a friend of mine has gone through a really nasty breakup...so i thought these would give her some strength...these lines do match perfectly wit her situation..and in a way i am greatful to you to write these beautuful lines so that through them i can convey to her some of what i want to tell her..now coming to the update...it touched me deeply...somewhere this story feels like its really happening around me and its not just fiction...okay now i sound really dramatic...so i am going to shut up...but just wanted to tell you that i really think you are an amazing writer...

Oh my! I'm absolutely flattered that you'd think my writing wold actually help someone for real 😳

Thank you so much, love!

It's not dramatic at all, I know what you mean :D

Thanks again! <3

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Rhea

@Rhea.KaJen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#189

Aanya! :D
You are just an amazing writer.. I love the way you portray each and every character.. I mean it!
Armaan!
I'm falling in love with him already! :P
But wait!
He's attracted towards Riddhima :(
Haha!!
I can't wait to read more! :)
Sorry for the short comments..
Practicals from tomorrow and i'm freaking out!! :(
Update soon!
Love,
Rhea

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Aanya

@Aanya.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#190

Originally posted by: ..SheWolf..
you know..i know I haven't edited any of my posts yet and soo today I decided to comment without reserving 😆 and i caught up with all the chapters and i was all 'i-am-going-to-write-a-long-comment' but dude after reading all of your updates i honestly have no words to write cause im speechless 😳 and i blame you for that :P like seriously..

But im going to try to write something because kaun jaane when ill be free next.

soo I love the recent chapter more. Somehow you've written Armaan's pov better :) or was it idk what.. And lawl that part where he calls up Brittany when he's drunk and she doesn't pic up lmao idk I loved that part 😆 don't ask me why, maybe it's the way you've written it or lol b/c I have a thing for when people are drunk 😆 and I probably sound drunk too.. 😆and I love your Armaan more than Ridz 😳 I usually go for the females but for the first or maybe second I actually like a male character ;P esp the way you write from his pov. 😳 its a huge thing because im way too picky :P

and idk what more to ramble b/c I still dunn have words to explain how amazing you are with your words 😳 it makes me wanna go and drown in chullu bhar paani :| and I hate you for that 😳

And aah best of luck for boards again and I might just write you a better comment when im in my senses, maybe laters 😆

Take care 🤗

Thank you meri jaan ;) <33

I know you're busy all of us 12thies are, which is why I wasn't pestering for a comment 😆

LOL thanks for pointing out your favs! Also, thank you, that you think I did justice to Armaan 😳 Most people prefer Riddhima in my FF, mera Armaan has found his first fan 😆

Thank you so much again 🤗

All the Best to you too <33

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