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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Jyo.

It is a crime to be so
perfect!

I don't care if you read what I wrote but you better have noticed the mota sa word that reads"perfect"

Because that is exactly how you write. There has not been a day till date when I would be reading and reviewing Ricochet and I would have found a mistake. I'll be honest. At this precise moment, Twinno, I am at a loss of words because I don't know if I can come up with something new to write in this comment. It all may sound repetitive to you because, hello, everyone would tell you this time and again: You compel the readers with your words, and they are pulled into the world of Ricochet, making us live the characters that you sketch out. It's like being in a movie, or just being there in that situation, watching it play out. I was on the bus this morning, reading the three new chapters you had sent me and dude, I was so involved I almost missed my bus stop. I would have been late to work because of you but then I wasn't so me no angry. But getting back to the topic now, you are brilliant! I don't know how many times I probably let out a small chuckle or my eyes stung with tears because of the sheer precision you write with, which made me feel the emotions of Riddhima and Armaan and Muskaan and Rahul. Books do not make me cry, so there is an accomplishment for you. You also managed to do something that no one has been able to since the past few months: motivate me to write. Now I feel like a dumb ass for not opening that PM sooner and reading it. My brain is out of it's freeze, haha :D Thanks <3 And now I really am running out of words to say. Ricochet is a piece of gold, diamond, every jewel combined in the world. It is precision and perfection and anyone who doesn't read it, they are missing out. Give it a shot and I swear to God you will not ever regret opening this link :) I hope you write a book one day Twinno. First copy mere naam okay? Actually no, first copy tere naam, then mummy daddy and THEN ME! :D ILY SO MUCH :* OH oops, almost forgot about this


AWWW YAYYY! :D Special mention for me in the intro. Me feels special 😳 I honestly feel so honoured to be able to R&R this FF by this brilliant writer named Aanya who is also meri Twinno and has a VERY special place in my heart, no kidding <3 Thank you bb :*
I just log into IF to read your FF and today, I am sleeping late just so I can give you this comment. Feel special yet? ;)


Asdaskdhfjsdfkj thank you so much Twinno 🤗

Meri itni taareef 😳 I don't know what to say reply mein but thank you a million times over and like I said, I'm honored if I made you write thoda sa bhi and omg you cried! Yay :D

LOL I don't think I'll ever write books (but who knows?) but this FF is tere naam haha :D

Pssh I feel special...unicorn jaisa ;)

ILY you will never know how muchhh


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Posted: 12 years ago
Don't kill me, but i need to catch up on the last 2 chapters :( Gonna read and comment soon :) <3
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Posted: 12 years ago

The most catchy things about your parts is the TITLE ! I mean you use such unique and amazing words. I sware when i need a username i will take your help🤣 And YAYYY It was from Armaan's POV. Gosh i this Armaan so much. I can so imagine KSG giving th facial expression. And the chat between Abhi and Armaan was just hilarious 🤣Ok i did not know that he was actually dating i mean was cho conphussed 😕😆 And when i read the chat between Armaan and Britney i remembered KSG's words i mean once he said if the relationship is not working out just step out of it. It was something like this i guess🤔. This is my fav line

"Sooner or later though, the ice starts melting away, bit by bit until it's one with the water and you can't tell the difference between them anymore, and you realize, you had let go without noticing and the ache that you felt, that little spasm of pain every time you thought about her, has gone and everything you once had is nothing but an after taste that lingers for a short time, before it too, fades away."
I mean this is so trueee . We dont realise and the pain goes awayy.
And yahh he kinda-a-bit attracted to her.
You wrote the part very well and i had a smile playing on my face while reading it^^ 😊 YOU CHANGED YOUR DABBA🤣😲
Edited by Salwa_Mehrin - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
i absolutely loved your update..
firstly i am telling you this before hand..i copied these lines from you..
"And now it felt different, weird. Like the kind of feeling you get when someone throws away this really old t-shirt of yours that you found so comfortable. It leaves you hollow, fills you with an ache that hurts every now and then with a painful twinge. So you try and hold on to whatever you had when everything around you is screaming let go but you don't because letting go would mean throwing away something that was safe, comfortable, home and you're lost without it.

Sooner or later though, the ice starts melting away, bit by bit until it's one with the water and you can't tell the difference between them anymore, and you realize, you had let go without noticing and the ache that you felt, that little spasm of pain every time you thought about her, has gone and everything you once had is nothing but an after taste that lingers for a short time, before it too, fades away."

i copied these lines not to post it somewhere else or to plagarise it...its just that a friend of mine has gone through a really nasty breakup...so i thought these would give her some strength...these lines do match perfectly wit her situation..and in a way i am greatful to you to write these beautuful lines so that through them i can convey to her some of what i want to tell her..now coming to the update...it touched me deeply...somewhere this story feels like its really happening around me and its not just fiction...okay now i sound really dramatic...so i am going to shut up...but just wanted to tell you that i really think you are an amazing writer...
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Posted: 12 years ago
will read the part tonight :)

song recs, are good, but not new to me :).. coldplay one is evergreen :) my fav song of them is for sure "Paradise". I can see on my ipod how many times i heard a song, and Paradise is the song that has the highest number :D..

and now seriously, i never tought you would know the cabs :) my bro is a big fan of them, and i hear their songs too :)

i always thought, I hear unknown and random songs, but yeah you too :D


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Posted: 12 years ago
i loved it...

so armaan is attracted...

way to go...

stry start hone se pehle saare villains hata do...

no tesion at all... 😎

great update...

especially armaan abhi talks...
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Posted: 12 years ago
he isn't love with her yet
bus thora attraction h...:p
toh karao yaar u have the power to make his destiny
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: .Dulcet

will read the part tonight :)


song recs, are good, but not new to me :).. coldplay one is evergreen :) my fav song of them is for sure "Paradise". I can see on my ipod how many times i heard a song, and Paradise is the song that has the highest number :D..

and now seriously, i never tought you would know the cabs :) my bro is a big fan of them, and i hear their songs too :)

i always thought, I hear unknown and random songs, but yeah you too :D



Duuudeee you are my music soulmate it's official. Feel free to randomly drop in and suggest songs to me kabhi bhi :P

Waise Living Louder is the only song I've heard by The Cab, what others are good? :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely part.
Thanx for the pm.
Take care.
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Posted: 12 years ago
A.M.A.Z.I.N.G...!
i know that its what every other person tells u... but just to feed ur ego... m sayin it again... 😉 the way U portray armaan is absolutely awsum... Its lyk ur words automatically weave the personality of d character in my mind and its nt just armaan... but Every other person from ridzi to Tracy... There seems to b a connection with every1... Like I'm actually watching the scene play out in front of my eyes...
And yeah for d record... The extent of connection that I feel with ur words ..i have felt with only J.k Rowling n Nora Roberts ... My fav. Authors... N I wudnt b surprised if U join into that list too... 👏
"Like the kind of feeling you get when someone throws away this really old t-shirt of yours that you found so comfortable. It leaves you hollow, fills you with an ache that hurts every now and then with a painful twinge. So you try and hold on to whatever you had when everything around you is screaming let go but you don't because letting go would mean throwing away something that was safe, comfortable, home and you're lost without it."
I actually know that feeling of losing that comfy t-shirt... I was so angry on my mum... 😆
But other than that... I can totally relate with what U wanna convey... In a diff context bt yeah d urge to hold on to whatever is left .. To not let go... Is totally there...!
I hoped U could write a bit more..😉 Bt then again I wud feel so even if U write double d content... N I knw u've gt xamz too...
So no worries... (but still cnt stop wishing to read some more)
Btw... I was gonna remind u on commenting on my drabble .. D one that I pmd... But reading d update... I dnt think U shud... ( m green with envy n red with embarrassment... Wondering what colour my face looks like aren't U.. ;) ..)
How do U write sooo well yaar...!!
Doesn't mean though I wouldn't b jumping with joy ( not literally... My house wud come down ) if U did comment...!!
Neways waiting for ur next update n yeah ur reply bfor dat...!!

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