Originally posted by: doublep
The update was good as usual, what do you expect? ... and since you mentioned rishta.com i'd start off with that - aren't u a lil late buddy?😆 that show aired like almost 2 years ago if i'm correct. But it was one of the finest and no nonsense indian drama ever aired. I got hooked with the first few episodes on TV. Then the timings changed and I couln't follow it but I straightaway jumped to the last episode on youtube just to check if Isha and Rohan got together haha. I am yet to catch up on the ones in between.
The best part about your writing is that everything is so tight knit. You do not leave loose ends in your story and take care of the nitty gritties of stuffs like the part when Tracy was reading out the schedule or when Armaan was talking about the contract to Riddhima. I'd still say my favorite part thus far is the very 1st chapter. The break up reminded me of Arnav- Lavanya's break up cos I think that's the only clean, well handled break up I've seen in dramas. It'd be interesting to see how the good Brittany copes up with Armaan's attraction to Riddhima in the coming parts.
Also as every body said the part where you mentioned about letting go was bang on.
Will look forward to the coming updates
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