ARIYA:An Odyssey of love[part-30(last part)page-132;NOTE-140page]

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Hi everyone!A concept just hit on my mind,so I try
to make a new story.this is my 2nd effort to write something.This story just about ARIYA.no case detail.hope u'll
enjoy it..&sorry if I make any mistake.


AN ODYSSEY OF LOVE







It has been raining cats & dogs.Rathore is
driving&arjun sat beside him as usual.chotu&shree in the back seat.everything
is the same'yet something missing.there are no dumb joke between
shree&chotu,no argument between arjun&rathore'..just silence introduce
itself in that running car.

A beautiful girl sit beside shree&chotu in a
bridal costume'her head rested on the window glass of the car.looks like,she is
very tired& in a dejected mood.but,these can't take her angelic beauty as a
newly weeded bride.

As rathore try to cross a road,she speaks out,stop
the car on left side.rathore stop the car&look at the girl with a question
mark on face,then look beside him as same face.but didn't get his ans from both
side.the girl already start to leave the car in the rain.shree want to stop her
but rathore ask him not to do it silently.he start the car after give a hard
glance to arjun.arjun was in deep thought so can't see rathore's expression.

In a wet cloth,the girl stand in front of a
door&looking at it's name plate-Riya Mukharjee.


[should i continue???]


INDEX


Prologue----page1 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3366541/ariya-an-odyssey-of-love-part-30-last-part-page-132-note-140page

part 1 -----page 2 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3366541/ariya-an-odyssey-of-love-part-30-last-part-page-132-note-140page?pn=2

part 2a -----page6 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3366541/ariya-an-odyssey-of-love-part-30-last-part-page-132-note-140page?pn=6

part 2b ------page8 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3366541/ariya-an-odyssey-of-love-part-30-last-part-page-132-note-140page?pn=8

part 3a-------page11https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3366541/ariya-an-odyssey-of-love-part-30-last-part-page-132-note-140page?pn=11

part3b-------page13 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3366541/ariya-an-odyssey-of-love-part-30-last-part-page-132-note-140page?pn=13

part3c---------page15 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3366541/ariya-an-odyssey-of-love-part-30-last-part-page-132-note-140page?pn=15

part3d--------page18 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3366541/ariya-an-odyssey-of-love-part-30-last-part-page-132-note-140page?pn=18

part4----------page20https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3366541/ariya-an-odyssey-of-love-part-30-last-part-page-132-note-140page?pn=20

part5----------page23 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3366541/ariya-an-odyssey-of-love-part-30-last-part-page-132-note-140page?pn=23

part6----------page26 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3366541/ariya-an-odyssey-of-love-part-30-last-part-page-132-note-140page?pn=26

part7----------page30 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3366541/ariya-an-odyssey-of-love-part-30-last-part-page-132-note-140page?pn=30

part8-----------page34 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3366541/ariya-an-odyssey-of-love-part-30-last-part-page-132-note-140page?pn=34

part9-----------page39 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3366541/ariya-an-odyssey-of-love-part-30-last-part-page-132-note-140page?pn=39

part10---------page41 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3366541/ariya-an-odyssey-of-love-part-30-last-part-page-132-note-140page?pn=41

part11----------page45 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3366541/ariya-an-odyssey-of-love-part-30-last-part-page-132-note-140page?pn=45

part12a--------page49 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3366541/ariya-an-odyssey-of-love-part-30-last-part-page-132-note-140page?pn=49

part12b--------page52 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3366541/ariya-an-odyssey-of-love-part-30-last-part-page-132-note-140page?pn=52
part13a---- page54
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3366541/ariya-an-odyssey-of-love-part-30-last-part-page-132-note-140page?pn=54

part13b-----page56 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3366541/ariya-an-odyssey-of-love-part-30-last-part-page-132-note-140page?pn=56

part13c-----page 59 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3366541/ariya-an-odyssey-of-love-part-30-last-part-page-132-note-140page?pn=59

part14------page61 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3366541/ariya-an-odyssey-of-love-part-30-last-part-page-132-note-140page?pn=61

part15------page65 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3366541/ariya-an-odyssey-of-love-part-30-last-part-page-132-note-140page?pn=65

part16------page67 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3366541/ariya-an-odyssey-of-love-part-30-last-part-page-132-note-140page?pn=67

part17------page70https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3366541/ariya-an-odyssey-of-love-part-30-last-part-page-132-note-140page?pn=70

part18------page76 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3366541/ariya-an-odyssey-of-love-part-30-last-part-page-132-note-140page

part 19 -------- page 80https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3366541/ariya-an-odyssey-of-love-part-30-last-part-page-132-note-140page

part 20 -------- page 83 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3366541/ariya-an-odyssey-of-love-part-30-last-part-page-132-note-140page

part- 21 -------- page87 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3366541/ariya-an-odyssey-of-love-part-30-last-part-page-132-note-140page

part-22----------page 89 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3366541/ariya-an-odyssey-of-love-part-30-last-part-page-132-note-140page

part-23 --------- page 92 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3366541/ariya-an-odyssey-of-love-part-30-last-part-page-132-note-140page

part-24--------- page94 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3366541/ariya-an-odyssey-of-love-part-30-last-part-page-132-note-140page

part-25 ---------page96 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3366541/ariya-an-odyssey-of-love-part-30-last-part-page-132-note-140page

part-26 ---------page99 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3366541/ariya-an-odyssey-of-love-part-30-last-part-page-132-note-140page

part-27 ---------page102 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3366541/ariya-an-odyssey-of-love-part-30-last-part-page-132-note-140page

part-28a --------page105 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3366541/ariya-an-odyssey-of-love-part-30-last-part-page-132-note-140page

part-28b ------------page110 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3366541/ariya-an-odyssey-of-love-part-30-last-part-page-132-note-140page

part-29a ---------page114 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3366541/ariya-an-odyssey-of-love-part-30-last-part-page-132-note-140page

part-29b-----------page118 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3366541/ariya-an-odyssey-of-love-part-30-last-part-page-132-note-140page

part-29c-----------page121 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3366541/ariya-an-odyssey-of-love-part-30-last-part-page-132-note-140page

part-29d------------page-127https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/93998511

part-30 ---------------page-132


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DivineDarkness thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Riya n bridal costume nd Rathore shooting draggers at Arjun... wat has he done nw???? intresting start... do continue...update soon...
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Do continue and plz pm me the updates :)
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Hey ...
That sounds really interesting ...
Plz continue soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb start :) loved it
riya in bridal costume 😲
do continue :)
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Arjun and riya going to get married... Surely u have to cont dr..
Edited by anu91 - 12 years ago
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So nice dear continue soon
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god wat did arjun do now can't wait
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riya in bridal dress?? serious atmosphere?? rathore glaring at arjun? chakkar kya hai?? shaadi todkaar aayi hai ya shaadi karke aayi hai??

please do continue!!
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Hi! here goes 1st part.hope u'll like it,perhaps'..

Part'1

Riya quickly try to find her key to open the door.but can't find it in the purse.in the meantime a middle age lady just crossing her,but stop.

Mrs.bhat:hey riya!u?here?i was thinking u'll be in ur law at this time!but..

[Riya find the key&open the door quickly.close it without any delay.she can't talk with any1&there is no question to talk with this bbc aunty of her building.too much irritating.always make up atomic bomb type story.she needs a long space'need to think what'll do next']

Mrs.bhat:what?!she close the door!not even ans my question!something fishy.why a girl'll come back alone just after her weeding!her family member is so irresponsible!wait,may be she leave from weeding?!but her forehead was full of Sindur!!oh!i've to investigate it.today's breaking news'.hav to tell others.

[inside riya's flat]

Everything was perfectly in place like always.riya can't walk'seems her legs too tired to make it to the bedroom.she sit on the ground beside the couch.rain water drops from her hair&cloth.but she ignore it.just sit there like a statue.after sometimes she burst into tears'

Her mobile is ringing.it's from her home.perhaps it's her father/mother'..but she don't want to talk with her mother or any1 from her home.she through away her phone& also disconnect her land phone line.it has been still raining both outside&inside this flat.

[rathore's home]

Rathore just come his room&sit on his favourite rocking chair.he can't understand any things.don't even know what to do next..& rawte'can't even say a word!always do what he likes,but what happen in riya's home,he just can't stay mum like this.just then his phone ring,it's shree.

Rathore:hello shree'.what now?

Shree:sir Ri's phone switch off,land linine too unreachable'..

Rathore:what?![but then control his panic voice]oh!don't worry shree,just give her some space

Shree:but sir what if'.

Rathore:no shree.riya is very strong girl&knows everything.she'll never do anything stupid.

Shree:but sir I m too worried'what happen in her house..now how she'

Rathore:past is past shree'get some sleep.&if u want then check on her in the morning.ok?bye.

Rathore disconnect the call'he told shree not to worry but can't even believe on his word.just god need to settle down everything'&1st thing in the morning'.meeting with rawte.

[In the morning;Riya's flat]

Sun ray's make appearance in the whole room.riya just woke up by it&see herself in the couch.she can't remember when her eyes closed.she goes to her room&suddenly look herself in the mirror.her face is covered with red&black colour.eyeliner spilt for crying&her sindur spilt for rain water'.she goes to washroom,take a bath.she come out with a white shirt&blue jeans wearing.&try to get ready for office.she makes her hair&saw the sing of sindur lightly appear itself.she touched it'&feel the moment when he was applying it.his one warm hand hold her veil&another was busy to apply sindur'she was just staring at him with a tearful face.she control herself&apply sindur gently,in a low amount.then cover it by hair&make sure that can't see.she also wear the weeding chain&hide it cearfully.just then her doorbell start to ring repeatedly.

Riya:who at this hour?

She open the door&it's shree!

Shree:why r u late to open the door yar?god I just'.

Riya:[with a dry smile]try to break my door hah?

Shree knows,riya try to act as normal.so he also start cheer her up.

Shree:yeah,but this is not my type work-breaking'.already eyesight defective'if any bones add on the list then I hav to be a bachelor!

Riya's smile vanished&shree felt so bad.that was too dumb joke.

Shree:r u ok ri?yar,sorry'.i shouldn't

Riya:it's ok yar'just don't know what to do

Then she giv a tight friendly hug to shree&start to cry again.

Riya:yar,I don't want to lose him just because the burden of relaition.he did it just for saving me&my family.u also know he can't love me&act normaly as my husband.&I also don't want this'I just need him like old time.i respect him,like him'may be also love him..i don't know for sure,but can't cause his trouble'.

Shree;I know ri'plz yar don't cry.

Riya control herself.

Riya:but shree,u hav to promise me u'll be act normaly.ok?&if I fail to do it then just remind me'.everything hav to be like previous.

Shree:ok,boss!now smile plz mrs.riya suryakant rawte'.this face doesn't suit u'.

For the first time some1 called her in her new identy.it's touched her heart'with a great fulfillment.but there was a fear also'the fear to lose arjun as her friend,mentor'in a new entry of relaition;husband&wife.

[ps.arjun&riya's weeding plot will come in a flashback after sometimes]

Edited by prohelika - 12 years ago

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