ARIYA:An Odyssey of love[part-30(last part)page-132;NOTE-140page] - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
Lovely update...
Rathore misunderstood riya hope it will clear soon...
Arjun also feeling something for riya in his heart but he couldnt realise...
But short update...
Next time u have to give long update dr...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
prohelika:


read all the updates in one go, the story seems good.. so arjun married riya to save her and her family from humilation ( do give the details of the incident too ) ..i can understand arjun and riya's respective stands on this marriage, but rathore's frustration on arjun's actions is justified too ..after all, arjun needs to move on in life now and fulfill his responsibilities towards his newly wed wife, whether he likes it or not, but certainly cannot shrug off her or the relation just like that. and now that riya is injured, i'm waiting to see how this incident helps them bond.

update soon. and do maintain an index on the first page ..just the chapters and page numbers, it's easier to keep track of the story that way.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
amazing update :)
loved ariya's concern for each other
shree, chotu and riya's bonding is just superb
eagerly waiting for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Riya is bleeding! Arjun takes her to the hospital!
Hope he realizes his feelings for her soon! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
Very exceptional idea. Great start. Plz continue soon. I'm egerly waiting 4 that. Plzzz...update soon..
Plzzz...
Plzzz...
Plzzz...
Plzzz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46

A greate wow...
Awsome story😳...
Chotu was too good...
Shree Was too sweet yrr...
And Rathore he was just amaizing...
And ArIya was fabulous..Love them yrr...
Exited for next part..post it soon dear...waiting for it...

Edited by Moumimon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
Update kariye!
update kariye!!
update kariye!!!
update kariye!!!!
update kariye!!!!!
Plzzz...plzzz...plzzz...plzzz...plzzz...plzzz...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48

Hello everyone, I am back with a new update. Sorry for late update & thanks everyone for liking it till now' and huge thanks to them who press the like button, give their comment by wasting their valuable time. Really guys it's great feelings for me''

Hope u'll enjoy it'.So sorry if I make any mistake.

PART'3A

Arjun start to park the car in front of a hospital. After seeing the hospital riya again start past argument with a new excuse.

Riya:sir! I can't go to this hospital.

Arjun just give a angry glance to riya.

Riya:[in low voice]actually sir, here works one of my relative'. So I don't'I mean I know this hospitals isn't too good on hygienic issue'

Arjun: u don't here to sattle down here for good, remember? Just for stitch. & it's a great news that ur relative works here' she could take an extra care to u.

Then arjun go to riya's side door of the car, open it & carefully hold her hand & help her to out of it. He giv a glance to the wounded hand' his heart feels an unbearable pain

[in the hospital]

Arjun & riya go to a doctor'& fortunately/unfortunately it's riya's relative'.her cousin's sister-in-law dr.anvesha.

Dr.Anvesha : hi riya ,how r u?

Riya[with a dry& fake smile]: if I am well then I don't hav to come here,isn't it?

Dr.A:oh yeah!

Arjun:actually she cut herself by old iron..it's too deep wound'

Riya show her,why u r waiting?it's already bleeding awfully.

Dr.A:is it,riya?show me. Oh god, u need stitch.come sit on the bed.nurse ready everything.

Then she turn to arjun.

Dr.A: & who r u sir?

Arjun: I m acp arjun rawte.

Dr.A:oh god!u!jiju! that's why I wondering why u act like this!so caring hubby,hah?

Arjun & riya feel uncomfortable by anvesha's word.but when nurse come with stitch accessories riya start to protest again.

Anvesha try to clam her to do her work properly but riya' like a baby girl start crying.

Arjun just shocked by her this avater' etf officer riya acts like a 7 years old girl!

Arjun come & hold riya's spare hand, wipe her tears.

Arjun:ok don't worry.it won't hurt.u also hav to take stitch when u got shot,remember?

Riya:but I was unconscious sir so can't feel,today is different.

Arjun:enough! now listen to me. U r an etf officer,if u can't take a stitch leave ur job.

Riya's eye fill with tears. Arjun saw it but also ignore it.

Arjun;doctor do ur job.i'll handale her.[he hold her hand more hardly.]

Riya just watch arjun with anger & he look at her.their eyelock.riya's anger& pain just vanished.they come back on reality when anvesha giv a injection to riya for safety after finishing stitch.riya just put some pressure on arjun's hand to avoid her pain.arjun just giv her a small smile

Arjun:r we finish doc?

Dr.A:yes.

Arjun:thanks.riya , see u just scared for nothing.

He leaves her hand slowly.

Dr.A:here's the prescription jiju,she should take all medicine for better progress.& riya, plz don't get wet ur hand/put any stress on it at all,ok?

Arjun:she won't.plz,giv me the prescription. Riya u stay here for two min plz. Need to bring medicine.is it ok wit u dr?

Dr.A:of course.i also want to talk with her for sometimes!

Arjun left for medicine.

Dr.A:riya'. U r so lucky.arjun jiju just awsm match for u.

Riya just smile.

Dr.A: really riya' I m impressed.i can't attend ur weeding but hear everything.that coward indranil don't deserve u''. '

Riya's smile vanished by hearing two words..Weeding & Indranil.

Riya:sorry anvesha ,I've to go now.take care.bye.

Dr.A:but riya'

Riya already left the place .

Meanwhile arjun just about to return to riya,he see her.

Riya was too weak for losing blood,so when she try to walk fast she felt dizzy.& about to fall when arjun catch her in time.

Arjun:r u mad?why u r running?i told u to stay there.

Riya:I just want to go home sir.

Arjun can feel something wrong.but didn't ask about it.

Arjun:let's go.

He grab her shoulder by one hand & with others her left hand.she just get a shivering by his touch' close her eyes to feel it perfectly.

Arjun help her to sit properly, then they leave for riya's home.

[In the car]

Riya rested her head on window glass.she is smiling silently. So much care!really, arjun sir always care for me'just then she see a car in the road in front of a flower shop.they r decorating the car.may be it's for weeding'..she just step 1 week earlier atmoshphere.her weeding!!!

###########flashback##########

Everyone just busy on their work. A girl in a light yellow tops&sky blue skirt just giv instruction to everyone. Every small things hav to be perfect.she also watching her clock continuesly.

Riya:oh!god, they r too late. Why they r taking so much time.

Riya's mom, mrs. Ranjana mukharjee come's there.

Mrs.mukharjee:what r u doing here? we r here to take care everything.u just chill.

Riya:ma,how can i?the flower isn't suit.who chose this for dacuration?it's a weeding ma,not a drama stage.

So many work to do' & now another tension shree called me 1 hrs earlier from the bus station.they didn't show their face yet when my home just 35 min path from station!!!

Mrs.mukharjee:plz,don't take stress.

Dekh,ki obostha korechis nizer[look,what u hav done to u]'. Looking awful!

Tor bor to toor ai chehara dak palabe bia er din![ur groom will run away if he see u like that on the weeding day]

Pagli lagse dakhte'

Riya:wow, how creative! People used to see that a girl always run away!!1now they can see the other side.i won't mind.

In that time a servant come & told that etf member arrived.

Riya rush to them'

Rathore,arjun,chotu& shree r standing in the hall.

Riya feel so glad to see them'. Her family will be incomplete without them' the whole etf team.

Riya:hello everyone!

Rathore:hi riya.how r u?

Riya:too bad.is it the time to come?what r u thinking,u r the main guest??

Etf chief seem confused by riya's zigzac ans in that simple question.

Shree:actually ri'

Riya:leave it,shree.no axcused.all of u should say sorry to bride.coz,u all r late.& family never comes late.i was damn worried for u people!new area'

Rathore;so sorry riya.

Shree:yar,leave it.preparation progress'I mean u need any help?

Riya:any help?!no.. I need so many help.lot to do'plz come with me.

For the 1st time,riya lead full etf team & everyone obey her like a boss! Even rathore & arjun can't protest her.coz, their silly bubbly etf member going to be married in two days.

[Arjun.who hate take a part on any occasion, also agreed for riya's weeding.although he feels strange when riya told etf that she gonna marry. Indranil sengupto, a police officer & riya's childhood family frnd.the weeding finalished by two family, typical arrange marriage & riya take it easily.though she is not sure, is she really can fall in love with indranil?]

Riya introduce etf team with her family.then show their room.

Riya:ok guys, all of u should come quickly in the hall.we hav so many work after dinner.so,come fast,plz.

[to be continue]

Edited by prohelika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
amazing update...!!!!😊
lvd it..!!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
so flashback start!!

even i like arjun jiju!! hehehe.. he is so caring!!

update soon!!

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