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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: prohelika

Hello everyone!!!!!
Happy 1st Anniversary of ARJUN 🥳

Friends... i am here to tell u people that, i couldn't post the next part in this week. It's all because of my Eid vacation...!!! I am not able to write a single word right now. but i promise , i'll be back after this week with an update for sure...
Till then good bye Arjunians!!!!😊



Hi i am back my eid vacation's please you back soon dear
i am waiting for update
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hello everyone!! Congratulation to all of u€€ €œArjun€ successfully complete 100 episode today!!!👏

& I am here with another part of €œAn Odyssey of Love€. Hope u can enjoy it. Sorry in advance if I make any mistake. Also thank you all for showing the great support towards the story.

PART€"28b

[Ariya house]

Now arjun understand the feelings whichwas roaming around in the air from evening, that€™s all because of this! There is something big gonna happen.Phone line dead,Ayesha€™s message €€ now all start to show their meaning. Suddenly Arjun start to tense about riya€™s safety.Rathore will come in 2hrs. The night is about to clean.the sky start to clear the darkness of it€™s own.Till then, he have to wait & arrange the protection of riya. He rushed to the window & close all of them. Turned of every light. Check every door then come to their bedroom. He takes his & riya€™s gun. He didn€™t have extra bullet in home. So he get only 24 bullet including riya€™s. he make himself clam€ & tell ownself to use everything very carefully. Suddenly he sees sleeping riya. The roadside light post light coming through the glass of window & by these the room is pretty clear to see everthing. Arjun start to feel guilty . for him€ his loveone always have to suffer. He sits beside riya,hold her hand softly & just looking at her. Suddenly riya€™s sleep break without any reason & she open her eyes. & 1st things she sees€Arjun who is sitting beside her holding her hand.

Riya: U?? why u r sitting like that??!!!

Arjun: just break my sleep€

Riya(with smile): this kind of lie never suit u, sir!! U didn€™t sleep, right??

Arjun: hmm€ statistically speaking, it€™s tough for any husband to sleep when his wife looking too beautiful in sleep!

Riya(smilingly ): really??!!!

Arjun: yes. Anyway€ early good morning!! Now get up & be ready quickly. Rathore may be on his way.

Riya: isn€™t it too early??!!!

Arjun: no€ cause u guys have to leave early.

Riya: dada called u?? he is just too much!! Why we have to leave to early??!! 1st he suddenly transfer me€ now also want my quick leaving from my home!! Not fair..

While leaving bed for washroom,riya sees guns on arjun€™s hand.

Riya( worried & surprised looking at arjun in sharp look): is it gun?? what€™s going on this house??? What the hell matter€ why u carrying guns!!!!????!!!

Arjun: riya just be ready quickly,ok??

Riya(in hurt voice): what u guys think of me??? I am a baby??? Who can€™t understand anything???

Arjun; it€™s not like that€ riya.

Riya(angrily) : oh no.. mr.ACP arjun..it€™s exactly like that!!!

Arjun; why u r geeting mad?? Just calm down & be ready for leave.

Riya: I won€™t until u tell me the truth!

After 5 min argument, arjun tell the truth about sikander€™s return & everything. Now riya get why his brother & husband were behaving like that. They just want her safety!! Just throughing her out of their life!! But it€™s never possible for riya to run away from everything when she knows that her whole family in danger.

Arjun: now I tell u everything€ so u start preparation for leave.

But arjun get shocked after seeing riya€™s face€ he can easily read her face€€

Arjun( shockingly look at riya) : u r not going€isn€™t it.

Riya: how dare u to think that ACP arjun€™s wife will run away for that coward worthless crab €œ sikandar€????

Arjun; it€™s not about u anymore€

Riya: of course my decision about myself is the final things.

Arjun; no, it€™s not. It€™s about me€ today it€™s all about me. U can€™t be with me riya.. I can€™t afford ur presence around me€ please try to understand.

Riya: but I can€™t leave u here.

Arjun goes to riya & hug tightly. Riya also hug him back.

Arjun; riya u have to€

Arjun can€™t finish his word. There was a sound of breaking glass in the hall. Arjun break the hug. & goes to the bedroom door to see what happen. Someone shooting at the glass to break it & it€™s almost done. Riya also stand beside arjun. Before arjun takes any action€ all of sudden something droop in the hallroom. & the whole house just fill with smoke. Arjun & riya start to cough. Arjun pulled riya towards their bedroom lock the door. Even try to cover the doors gap with the floor by cloths. It€™s to difficult to riya to breath. Arjun gives her water. The room isn€™t too smoky yet. But it€™s very bad that they have to stay in this room. Cause by this, they(the goons) can easily reached them.

Arjun: riya€ listen to me very carefully. No matter what happen.. u€™ll stay here.I€™ll be back in 5min. u locked the door perfectly. Ok???

Arjun kissed riya€™s face & start to go from there. Riya hold his hand.

Riya: give me my gun€ I m coming with u.

Arjun: for god sake.. don€™t argue this time riya!! U can€™t breath in the smoke!! The smoke is dangerous for ur health,& u know that, right?? Plz.. just give me 5 damn minute baba, I€™ll be back!!! I promise I€™ll get u no matter what. Trust me.

Riya: I trust u arjun€but..

Arjun; end of discussion then!!

Arjun leaves the room & riya closed the door.

Arjun enter the hall after tieing a cloth around his nose. He goes to the window & take a quick look. There are 6 mans in the view of this window. They all pointing gun at the house which also has silencer to avoid the noise.

Arjun( in his mind): they r just using smoke??that means€ they don€™t have permission to direct kill us!! They r just trying to get us out from the house€well then it€™s a good sign.

Arjun rushed to their small balcony which also fill with many kind of plants. He sit at the ground,& point the gun at one man. He has limited bullet. So he can€™t waste even 1. He pulled the tiger. It€™s hit direct the point blank, in the head. Arjun didn€™t use silencer. So after hearing this & saw their man in the ground, all start to shoot at the balcony. Arjun moves from there & goes to the window.& take another perfect shoot to kill another one. Like this, arjun just moving his position & killing the goons. They also start to shoot madly to save their life forgetting their boss order.

Riya isn€™t the girl to sit in a room! She take a deep breath & come out from the room. 1st she open some window that could possible in the mass so that the smoke can decrease. Fortunately there are wind at outside. She goes to the kitchen to grab knife. They may not be too sharp to kill a person. But helpful at this moment. Suddenly arjun notice that riya also came out. He stare at her with anger.

Riya: what??!! I should starte at u cause ur 5 min over long before!!

Riya start to cough again.

Arjun; I told u not to come!!

Just then a bullet passed near riya. Arjun pulled her down to the ground.

Arjun: why didn€™t u listen to me???

Riya: look€ I preety bored at those kids play.

Arjun( with smile): yeah€me too. Then€ let€™s play big.

Riya; how many bullets do u have left??

Arjun: hmm€5 from 24!!

Riya(jokingly): oh no!! u r such a waster!!only 5??

Arjun: hey!! Every bullet do their work properly!!

Riya: so that means€ ur sikandar send planty of people to kill next to unarmed 2 people??!! Such a coward player!!

Arjun: they are not here to kill us. They will just want to crack us.

Riya: & how did u know??

Arjun; it€™s simple!! If they want to kill us they could just blow up the house by now with fire or boom.

Riya; hmm.. u r right. So they r so many people around our house. & I hav an exit point to go out from the house.

Arjun: really?? Where??

Riya: through the kitchen. I already checked it. No one can possible to be there. U just hav to break the back door of the kitchen which is jammed. Then we just through the rope at the big tree in right position. Then we can cressed the path. We€™ll be in the highway in 2 min walks!!

Arjun: good plan! Good job riya.

Riya: really??!! Thank u sir..(with smile)

Arjun; now allow me to do this. U sit here & cover me. Take the gun€ but don€™t waste bullet.ok??

Riya: I don€™t need the gun! I have knife.

Arjun leaves for kitchen.

Riya sit there. Take as a big broken glass as she can, & used it to see the outside. The sky is clear enough to see them. She take a knife & through it towards the nearest person. It hits at his eyes!! Riya will sure feel sorry if it€™s not today when she & her husband in danger.

In kitchen, arjun open the jammed back door. Tie a rope by the nearest big tree by trying to throughing it several times. He check it if it can carry their load. Then call riya. Riya also come in the kitchen. Arjun tie some cloths around riya€™s hand so that riya couln€™t get hurt in the process of rope riding.

Arjun: ok.. lets go. U 1st.

Riya slide down in the rope by holding it. She take a jump to touch the ground. But arjun was still standing there.

She angrily stare at him for standing there. Arjun gives her a sign that he is coming. Just then he disappear from the door. & riya get tensed. She think arjun gonna stay there. She is about to go back again just then arjun come & join riya.

Riya: what were u doing??

Arjun; just preparing to say goodbye them.

Arjun take out his gun & place it to the back door of kitchen.{ arjun keep open the gas cylinder } he finished the whole bullet by shooting there. Then€ the blast. Riya huged arjun on the blast time.

They are just now watching their once home from over the road of back side of the house.

Riya: aunty will be mad!!!!

Arjun: don€™t worry€ we€™ll re built it€ I promise.

[in the ETF car]

It€™s early morning.

Rathore is going to ariya house to pick riya. Chotu & shree also with him to say good bye to riya. Ayesha was countinuesly calling rathore. Rathore finally take it with irritation.

Rathore: what is it Ayesha??

Chotu & shree shocked to hear his tone towards Ayesha. Rathore notice that. & control his attitude.

Rathore: any problem, Ayesha??

Ayesha: why didn€™t u pick ur phone sameer??

Rathore: I was busy.

Ayesha: it€™s urgent sameer. Riya & arjun sir in danger.

Rathore: what??

Then Ayesha tell him everything. Rathore start to drive fast after cuts the call.

Rathore: shree.. call the local police station to reach arjun€™s house immideately. Fast shree.. chotu try arjun€™s phone.

Chotu: not reachable sir!

Rathore: damn it!!

Shree: sir I call the local police. They r on their way.

Rathore: shree.. call commissioner sir.

Shree: ok sir.

Shree try it but can€™t get the line. Cause they already enter the zone from where sikandars men blocked the line.

Then the three see the fire & smoke which is coming from Ariya€™s house!

Rathore: oh no€€it can€™t be!!

####

Arjun & riya walk together to highway.

Arjun: now our 1st work to go to the ETF office.

Riya: yes€

Then riya see two taxi just little far from them.

Riya: look€ we can use a ride.

Arjun also look at there & start to go there to ask texi driver for a lift. But he feels strange that why 2 texi just staying at this side of road in this early morning?? He hold riya€™s hand more tightly.

& knock at the texi window€

Just then everything happen in some second. Someone hit arjun€™s head too hardly that make him fall in unconsciousness. The last thing arjun remember is someone try to removes his hand from riya€™s. he want to hold her hand tightly but can€™t. a persons voice enter his ear€€

€œACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte€ never heard about the back up plan???

But, don€™t worry€ I€™ll be waiting for u before ending u once again. Find me€& this time u€™ll.it€™s my guarantee.i€™ll play fair until u come to me. Till then€ good bye tragic hero.€

After arjun€™s passout€ the person stay there for awhile. & talking to his one of man. €œ u know he is very intelligent guy.thats why I always love to play with his life. Isn€™t it great to play with ur own level guy??? He is just in the wrong side€otherwise we could love each other in the place of hate.€

€œ now finished the full work. Take our ACP to his house!! & finished those stupid one by one if they r still survive after our ACP€™s €œdhamakadar performance€ back in the house. May be they didn€™t hear what I told them before sending there. & I don€™t have time in the up bringing of stupid, handicap !!€

1 texi carried arjun & left him in front of the house. A person come out from the texi & kill everyone(goons) who left wounded after the explosion.

[to be continue]

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Posted: 12 years ago
Res/unres
awesome update...
brilliant part...
arjun get to know the attack...
arjun said beautiful wife...so nice...
finally ria came to all thing...
there plan to escape from the house was nice...
finally sik entry...
god arjun went unconscious...
wt happened to ria???????????/
waiting for next part...
u stopped at peak point...
whole part was very well written...👏.👏.👏.
cont soon dr...
thanks for PM dr...
Edited by anu91 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update dear.
Continue soon.
And thanx for pm.
Edited by ll_megha_ll - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey dear fantastic update
thnx 4 pm and a wounderful part
arjun is very much alert
arjun said the truth to riya
respect riya's decesion a lot
poor dont have much bullet
arjun riya convo at starting was awesome
so ariya r being attacked
smoke bomb in their house
poor ariya felt suffocated
loved the way arjun handeled stubborn riya
hahaha riya came to hall after 5 min
the explaination riya gave to arjun on coming to hall was cute and love
taking knife was great option
poor guy got hurt woith knife in eyes ab riya ke arjun se fight karega to riya chup to nai baithegi na
sam also came to know about attack on ariya
riya's knows the secret exited which even arjun dont know
the blast idea of arjun was great
poor ariya separated
arjun got hurt
continue soon dear
thnx once again
will be waiting 4 next update eagerly dear
Edited by sharmaayushi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
arjun got hurt and unconscious
waiting eagerly for next part
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update yar...!!
so arjun told everything about sik and her safety to riya...!!!
loved her determination... so she's gonna stay and help them out in catching sik...!!!
shit ab ye log kaha se aagye?
ariya fought them bravely...!!!!
finally sik entered the picture...!!!
ohh no arjun hurt and fainted...!!!
hope riya is safe...!!!
continue soon...


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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part
love how Arjun safe her love
Riya is so intellegent
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Super duper awesome update dr.

Fantastically written.

U described Arjuns POV vry well.

Loved Arjuns sweet talks to divert her mind.

Waaooo Riya got that somethings wrong.

Atlast Arjun had to give up n told her everything coz of her stubbornness.

Wow Riya was adamant that shes not going to leave.

OMG goons attacked their house.

Loved the way Arjun single-handedly finished most of thm.

Wow she hit at the eye of the goon. Nice shot gal.

Yayyy thy escaped frm there coz of Riyas plan n even blasted the house.

OMG that b*****d Sik attacked Arjun frm behind.

Omg this means that Riya is with him.

I hope eveything will be fine n that Sik get his much-awaited punishment.

Thanks for the pm dr.

Continue soon.

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