ARIYA:An Odyssey of love[part-30(last part)page-132;NOTE-140page] - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amaizing update..
Arjun caring Husband...
ETF always rocks yrrr...
so Update it soon dear...
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Edited by Moumimon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
wow.. have read all parts.. gr8 work... it was amazing.. continue soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oo ma! Bangla pore onek valo laglo. Nice update!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey ...
That was really good :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely update... Arjun jiju lol... he s so caring... so v vl soonn be knwing wat happened on her wedding... update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing update...!!!!😊
lvd it..!!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi again!Here's go another part. I try to establish a logic behind ariya marriage … I don't hav any intention to hurt anyone& if someone thinks that it's a lame logic then just don't read it…coz I just can write, can't satisfied everyone… even I can't satisfied myself also!!!

So sorry if anyone get upset by these word.

Flashback consists 4 part[3a,3b,3c,3d],it's the 2nd.hope u'll enjoy it.

PART—3B

All etf member start to ready for dinner.

Shree:yar,chotu.ri is acting different.she try to show everyone that she is too happy….

Chotu:what do u mean by it?try to show happy?!but I think she is happy.

Shree:I wish from heart for it too…

Rathore:what r u two analyzing?in case time,u two just gossip, & now u r talking with a dull face when it's ur frnds weeding!!come on guys!

Shree:no sir, we just…[chotu sign him not to tell ]sir!!dinner!chotu is very hungry.so,should we go?

Rathore:hmm… where is rawte?

Chotu:abhi to tha…

Rathore pick his phone & dial arjun's number.

Rathore:rawte?where r u?... ok we'll b there in a min.

Lets go,he already in the hall.

Riya is just running here & there like a baby girl. Arjun just look at her on distance.she seems happy.rathore ,shree & chotu also join arjun.riya see the whole team at last!she rush to them.why r u waiting?dinner is ready.they all join mukharjee family.everybody start to eat except riya.

Shree:ri,what's the matter?eat.

Mrs.mukharjee:don't worry shree.mam will eat when her ma feed her like always!

Chotu:oh!grow up ri!who will feed u in future?aunty won't be there!

Mrs.mukharjee:I also say this to her.

Shree:don't worry,aunty.our riya is so sweet that her hubby can't hurt herself,never ever!

Riya start to blushing & arjun feel angry …….he even don't know why!

A servant try to serve some 'rosh malai' to arjun & riya,chotu,shree say in a row,'don't do it,sir didn't like sweet''

The servant jusy taken aback by their loud voice.then ask,'why?sir hav diabetics???'oh god,then u've to tell me earlier riya baby.i'll make some savory food specially for sir….''

The three just exchange a quick glance& start to laugh silently.

Riya:forget it,kaki.

Then she rise a glass&hit it with a spoon.

Riya: attention everybody. All u hav to do many work.1st ly,I hate the whole dacuration.sorry ma,honestly speaking, ur weeding planer can't make up with my dream weeding.so….. anyway as for my team,guys I need all of ur help.coz, I hav build up a habit to work with u.so plz help me on this mission.short time,long work only etf can do their best work in these situation.so rathore sir shree chotu & arjun sir, don't dare to act as a guest here,plz.shree u'll check music section…. Need some awsm song,ok?

Shree:okay!boss.

Riya:rathore sir,u'll handal 'mandap'decoration plz??my all cousine will help u.

Shree:[in low voice]yar,u giv a romantic work to world best unromantic person???!!!!god knows what'll happen

Riya giv a hard glance to shree.

Riya:chotu u'll arrange lighting effect yar.whole night the light will be on…..& arjun sir u…….she stop.

Mr.mukharjee:he'll be assist me in the food sector.

Arjun:ok,uncle

Chotu:shree, riya ka dream weeding dead weeding turn karne wali hey…..

Shree:ha,yar!now I am so worried.we should save our food for weeding.don't know arjun sir's choice!

They all get busy on their respective work.& riya get busy to decorate herself.her 'haldi' held at morning.noe she is preparing for marriage.her 'lagno'[specific time to marry] sat 11.35 pm.it's almost evening.she hav to keep a fast till all ritual end.the groom family come around at 8.30pm.1st time arjun meet indranil.riya isn't good for indranil,he thought.coz,she is the best.this guy….. his thought take a full stop when rathore ask him about his work.

Rathore:what do u think rawte,riya will like the mandap decoration?it's my 1st time on this field,u know.

[rathore makes all decoration with red & white rose.there r so many decorated pot around the mandap.all decoration in a red & white combination]

Rawte:why she won't like it?!it's beautiful. Just then arjun remember roshni's talk about their weeding…. Red & white rose…..

Rathore:u know, I always miss a sibling.now god gift me the cute experience to arrange a sister's weeding… I am so happy.

Shree over hear their word.

Shree[in mind]: hah!great.rathore sir be ready for my weeding! I'll revenge for every threat that u giv whenever I demand a lie detector. Lot's of work hav to done on ur little bro's weeding sir!!!it's a promise to my lie detector which never can be mine.

Arjun look at rathore…he is really very happy.actially he loves his team very much…just more than a team.he cares for them.although arjun & his bond isn't too good,but arjun knows he'll always hope best for him.

There is a shortage in food ingredient.so arjun rush to the store room with a servant to giv him that ingredient.when he about to cross a room his eyes just stop on a beautiful angel in red attire.riya looks awsm in red share.her simple handmade decorated vail plus another personality on her bridal image.he just can't take off his eyes from this angelic beauty.

Riya also see arjun's reflection on her mirror.there is no one in the room…. Only riya & arjun.

Riya:sir,u?

Arjun:hmm…

Riya:how m I looking?good/horrible?

Arjun:both negative.

Riya:what? Now what will I do….i told them not put this kind of make up…but they…

Arjun:shs! Riya.calm down.i don't mean it that way.u look freaking angelic on this.

Ok?now.bye .all r waiting for u in downstair.

A small girl come in the room.

Girl:didi,when will ur round round start?mom says,I hav to wait for that,then she'll giv me ice cream.not now!

Arjun:really,don't worry.i'll giv it to u.lets go.

When arjun & the little girl leave the room & start to walk for ice cream…arjun heard some noise from riya's room.he rush there with that girl.

Riya is lying on the ground unconsciously.arjun go there & put her on the couch.he start to call her repeatlly.

Girl:didi,what'll happen now?she fall sick.who'll take the round round now.

Arjun:don't worry.she'll be ok.may be she didn't eat anything for over tension.silly girl.

Girl:yes,she last eat in the very early morning.

Arjun[to the girl]:plz grab some food quickly.just tell shree/chotu,they'll giv it to u.ok?

Girl:ok.

Then she left the room & enter quickly with a plate of food.arjun 1st drink riya some water…& after that when she come in some consciousness he feed her by his own hand.after sometimes riya feels better…..but then a middle age lady come here & start to shout on riya for taking food before weeding..it's indranil's mother…… riya's would be mother-in-law!!!!🤢

[to be continue]

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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
Res!

Rathore arranging red and white roses. And painted pots. The image is hilarious! Hahaha... God.
And Shree-Chotu conversation at dinner was good too.

But the best part was Riya oring everyone around. And it's beautiful how they're like a family of sorts. ..
Edited by Arya1991 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
Hey ...
That was really cute :)
Omg I love shree ... Poor rathod ;)
But love the way everyone is helping Riya out for the preparations :)
Awww Ariya's scene was so cute :D

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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
Lovely update... So Riya's would be MIL created issue for a small thing... its really nice to see Riya giving orders to ETF team abt decorations nd Shree's nd Chotu's tweet bits... Rathore s sweet... update soon...

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