ARIYA:An Odyssey of love[part-30(last part)page-132;NOTE-140page] - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
Lovely update dr...
Poor riya but surely one day arjun will give all rights to riya as his wife...
Take care of ur health dr...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
great update :) loved it
loved rathore's concern for riya
hope arjun accepts her as his wife soon
can't wait to read more
continue soon
Edited by fatima15 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
arjun is right too but poor riya.. she will have to bear the society's taunts if he left her like this.. loved rathore's attitude.. n his convo... arjun really needs a reality check not rathore!!

update as soon as u can.. take ur time .. n get well soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
awesome update

do update soon dear and tell me when you update

liked it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
wow nice to see rathore's care for riya
hope arjun gives riya all rights as a wife
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36

Hi every1,thanks for liking this story till now.&big thanks to them who give their valuable comment'..

Here goes my 2nd[b] part,hope u'll like it?!?!...perhaps.so sorry if I make any mistake.

PART'2B

[ETF OFFICE]:

Rathore&arjun in the conference room.they just finished their breakfast.their junior didn't come yet. Meanwhile,chotu was waiting for riya&shree in the parking lot area.just then he see them.riya giv him a dry smile.

Riya:yar,why u here standing like this?rathore sir late,today?

Chotu:no yar,just waiting for u two.why u r late?

Shree:actually chotu,normal person need to eat timely,they all not like u that always save their energy in the body.did u see ur size?if u don't eat for month,nothing will happen'.

Chotu:shree'. Don't angry me!

Riya:stop it guys.let's go&see,any new case?

Chotu:don't think so.

Riya:thanks god!i hav to submit previous case story'.

Lot's of work pending.

Riya start to leave for office while chotu ask shree,

Chotu:all good?

Shree:keya good yar'

They r busy to show nothing happen!actually,no fault from riya's side.she try to make her hubby happy by ignoring this relaition!

But she loves him madly.

Chotu:yeah,but never will admit it to arjun sir.

Shree:oy!forgot the scene when riya was digging on sir's past?

Oh!god,I can't even think of it.

Chotu:arjun sir& his attitude! But I think he loves her too just can't accept it.actually,he loved his wife very much so'

Shree:sir may be shahruk's die hard fan' remember the dialogue from kuch kuch hota hey??

Chotu:sir or flim.impossible.

Shree:that's right.let's go now,we already late.

Riya enter the conference room.both arjun&rathore look at her.

Riya:good morning sir.

Rathore:good morning riya.

[he is little bit shock to see riya in old avater.that means she also doesn't want this relaition.god these two r too complicated.he just waste his time argue with arjun for her.& he promise to himself that he'll stay away from their personal life from now.they r leaving it,so why would he care?]

& arjun was happy to see his old riya.it's good for her he thought.

Riya:sir,I'll give u the report with in 1 hrs,I promise.

Rathore:don't worry riya,take ur time.

Riya leave for her work while another etf member r busy with some case file.

About 3 hrs later rathore gets a call from commissioner sir for a new case.an undercover agent dead body found in an old factory,so team etf leave for the crime scene.

Shree taking the picture of crime scene&rathore is talking with duty officer. Arjun,riya&chotu searching for clue.

In that time arjun go to the 2nd floor of the factory.riya was already there.the condition of the factory is too bad,anytime it'll crush on the ground.arjun see something on the corner of the balcony type area.so he goes there to check it.but sliped&about to fall.

Riya was there so she quickly give her left hand to arjun & with another hand she hold the railing to support the wait.but accidently cut her hand very badly.chotu come to help them&hold another hand of arjun,they pull him up.

Riya:u ok sir?[with a very panic voice]

Arjun:yes

Rathore&shree also come there.

Rathore:rawte,at least check the safety 1st.always careless.

Arjun:I thought'

Rathore:ok,but remember next time.don't work carelessly,ok?

The team leave the place& walked towards their car when arjun see some blood spot on his arm.he checked himself but he isn't wounded.so how it's come'..

He start to thinking the whole scene again&just then see that riya's right hand is bleeding! He runs toward her&start to shout at her.

Arjun:on which planate do u live,riya?can't u see ur hand is bleeding.stupid girl!now,let me see.

All etf member rush to her.

Shree:oh!no,it's badly wounded.need stitch urgently.

Arjun:yes,the wound is too deep

Riya:no way,no stitch.shree just give a bandage,it'll be good.

Shree;I don't think so ri,sir we need to take her to a doctor.

Arjun:yes,but 1st cover it,too much blood dropping.riya,u hav a handkerchief?

Riya:no[in a low voice]

Then arjun take his handkerchief & cover riya's hand

Arjun:rathore,u go to the office& I'll join u later,1st she need a doctor.

Rathore:ok,rawte.

Riya Arjun leave for hospital

Shree& chotu exchange a meaningful glance meanwhile rathore make a 'I knew it' face.

They really fall for each other''''''''''''..

[in the car]:

Riya;[try to avoid stitch making some lame excuse]sir,this areas hospital isn't good. i'll be fine'..there are also some fast aid in the car.i can manage.

Arjun:I know mam,u can!now just shut up.coz it's already a deep wound,if u not take care of it right now,then it'll be worst.

& beside,I don't care about ur wound!look it's already over bleeding & the handkerchief is already wet.it'll spoil the car.so,no argument,let me drive in peace.

Arjun start to drive with more speed to make it to the hospital quickly'''. Leaving a shocked riya behind.

[to be continue]

Edited by prohelika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
just read all your updates
lovely start
so Arjun married Riya because of some reason during her wedding day😊
Hmmm but he's yet to accept her, which is normal
enjoyed all your updates dear, please continue😉
Edited by haruhi26 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
wow!! poor rathod misunderstood riya.. n thought she dont want it... loved ariya's concern for each other!! update soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
oh god riya's hand is bleeding
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
loved Ariya's concern for eachother... i luvd arjun's dialogue that he wants her wound to b taken care of since it vl spoil the car... Rawte u shld learn to lie better... update soon...

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