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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello everyone... 😊
1st accept my sincere apologized for not being able to present a new part of An Odyssey of Love.
& trust me, like u guys i also want to know what happen to ARIYA there... coz i didn't even write or plan it till now. For some personal reason & my on going exam exhausting schedule make a rift to my dedication towards the story. & i am really very sorry for that.
But i promise to u guys that i will back with updates at 10 oct.

THANK YOU ALL. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Its really ok,dearie.
Take ur time.
All the best for ur exams.
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Posted: 11 years ago
take your time dear.
exam comes first.
all the best for your exam
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take ur time dr...write ur exams well...best wishes...
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It's okzzz dr...take ur time...
ALL THE BEST FOR YOUR EXAMS...!!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hello everyone!!!! Here's another part of this story. I am so sorry for the delay. Although I can't write it as i imagine still Hope ,u can enjoy it,. & I am so sorry in advance for any kind of mistakes. Thank you all.

PART"29 d

Riya and Arjun stuck in the room. Rathore , Ayesha , Shree, Chotu on the door. The rooms turning into a cold place slowly.

Rathore: Arjun, what happen???

Arjun: the end of sikandar...

Rathore: I am not talking about this... why the door suddenly closed?? Just open it! & What about riya??? Is she alright??? Is she hurt??too serious??? Damn it! Arjun... tell me for God sake , is she okey??

Arjun( with smile) yeah sam.. riya is here & she...(in a strong voice) is with me.

Then arjun remove his ear piece & take out his mobile from pocket. & put it on the speaker.

Arjun: now talk to your riya... rathore!!

Riya gives a weak smile to arjun & start to talk to rathore.

Riya: hello... dada!!

Rathore, Ayesha, chotu, & shree shout at the same time... " riya"

Riya have to put the mobile away to save herself from this scream. Then start the Question flood... about her wellbeing. Riya is too happy to hear them again... same as them.

Riya: guys!!! Just calm down & talk slowly one by one!!! I am not gonna run away!!!

Rathore ( to the team): enough guys!! Silence!! I am the boss ... so I should talk 1st!!!

Arjun also interrupt them.

Arjun: 1st give a chance us to come out, then u debate who'll talk 1st.

Arjun goes to the door to open it. But he can't open it!

Now he get it why sikandar shoot the lock. It may be unbreakable. Arjun take a deep breath & start to see the room with clear mind. There should be a way out!!

Riya look at arjun & get that what is wrong!

Chotu: what happen sir???

Arjun: rathore... we can't open the door from inside. It's lock destroyed.

Shree: what?? Sir, let me try.

Then shree start to work on his laptop to find a solution. He tries to open the door from outside. But it's impossible. It only work from inside!

Every ETF member was looking at shree for a solution. But after seeing his face... rathore and others get the truth.

Meanwhile , arjun was busy to examine riya's wound. While checking on her... arjun get really furious after seeing her wound. He can't even look at her eyes by a big attack of guilt. He fist his hand very hardly seems that he is gonna crush his own hand. Riya sees all of this . so she takes his hand on her hand..

Riya( with care): it's alright... coz it's over!! U shouldn't so hard on u... please.

Arjun( without looking at her eyes): riya... I am really very..

Before he could tell sorry.. riya stop him by covering his mouth.

Riya: I don't wanna hear anything... ok??

Arjun look at her in teary eyes ... he cupped her face on his hand, their forehead touch one another... their nose hit each other...

Riya also in tears... they can't say anything for awhile. Just silent crying... finally arjun able to say a word.

Arjun: ok..

They come back in sense from silent crying after hearing a worried rathore voice...

Rathore: arjun riya... just give us somemore time. We'll find another way... shree can't open it. But I am sure there is another way.

Arjun: alright sam...

Rathore ordered local police who come here better late than never to arrange to break the wall. In the mean time Ayesha and chotu try to crush the wall by blow up formula. But nothing gonna work. & it's frustrating for every etf team.

Arjun try to keep himself calm & looking at the room for a way. Suddenly he see that riya's body colour faded away and she feeling cold. Arjun also feel the same but he tried to ignore the fact. Arjun goes to riya and torn his shirts part & start to cover riya's ear.

Arjun; we should keep ourselves warm till find a way of exit. & keep ur hand on ear . it'll help to keep ur body temperature inside. Ok??

Riya says very weakly: ok.

& it's scare arjun. He take the phone & start to talk to rathore by walking other corner of the room.

Arjun: sam... do something very quickly. Riya can't stay long here... she already...

Rathore( in teary eyes like a helpless guilty person) : I am trying arjun... just keep her awake...please. I am trying...

Rathore's effort to make a hole or break the wall isn't working.

Arjun goes to riya and sit beside her. He hold her very tightly too close to him. Riya is too weak to keep open her eyes. She start to close them

Arjun: hey... riya!!! Let's talk. U know shree, chotu, Ayesha r eagerly waiting to talk to u... isn't it guys???( indicating other etf member who also hearing every conversation)

Shree: yeah... ri. but I am mad at u. u know how much work I have to do for the decoration of ur birthday??? But, u just leave office without telling us!!! What was that yar!!??

Riya: sorry... yar. Really very sorry. Please forgive me for this time!

Shree: no way!!! U hav to pay for ur deed!! As punishment, u hav to always make coffee in the office!! Deal??

Riya( with a weak smile): just this small punishment?? Okey!! Deal.

Shree(in tears): yeah yar... I missed ur coffee so much... and our talk... and... u!!

Ayesha see that shree fall down in the ground and start to cry covering his device. Riya don't hear his cry but can easily guess it.

Then ayesha step into the conversation.

Ayesha: yar.. we r bored by chotu's worst coffee!!

Chotu: it's not that bad!!

Ayesha: it is..!!

Riya: guys... I missed u so much...!!

Ayesha: we too riya!

Arjun is checking riya's puls which is droping very quickly. It makes him nervous.

Arjun; rathore...

Rathore know that time is very short. The room is turning more and more cold. & the upper side space on the cilling about to close.

Riya(to arjun) : I am feeling too cold. Can u hold me more tightly. I want to sleep coz I am damn tired now.

Arjun; riya... please don't close ur eyes. Talk to me.

Chotu: ri... hay... don't fall asleep now. We hav so many talk. We hav so many work to do. U hav to plan a beautiful weeding for me and ur shopingmall bhabi... & we also have to find a perfect match for our mega bite - giga bite's grandfather!!( in an earlier part of the story, chotu and riya decide to name shree's grand children as mega bite- giga bite)

Riya gives a weak smile and a tear drop from her eyes... she also want to keep open her eyes but can't able to do it... they r turning too heavy.

A crying Ayesha look at rathore for asking help.

Rathore: arjun... is there anything inside noticeable???

Arjun look & think very deeply. & get a way.

Arjun: rathore... the cilling...!!! It's not close yet. It's closing very slowly. May be that's why the room isn't full cold. & I think it's just simple iron door. May be not that hard.

Rathore: but the cilling is too high from the ground...

Suddenly he sees the helicopter of the police whose pilot was shot and hav to land it. He goes there.

And here riya start to lose her grip on arjun.she already closed her eyes. Arjun see this.

Arjun(loudly): riya... what is this??!!! Didn't I tell u to keep ur eyes open???so why u r closing ur eyes???!!!why??!! that's why I always ask u to go back at research desk!! Why don't u go earlier??!!! If u were there,u never can come into my life... u never hav to gone through on this!!! Why don't u listen to me???!!!

Ayesha, chotu and shree start to cry .

Arjun(holding riya more tightly and crying): hey!!! U can't do this to me!! U can't give up on me!!! Please don't do this to me!! Talk to me... I hav to tell u many things... riya... just try for some more times to hold ur eyes open.

Arjun jerking riyas body but she didn't response.

Arjun: riya... don't do this to me. I am sorry for everything... just... u know... I love u..(loudly) I love u riya mukharjee...

Rathore comes to shree who is crying badly.

Rathore: shree...!!! (loudly) shree!!!

Shree look at him ...

Rathore(in teary eyes); I need ur help...please..!! I can't do this alone..

Rathore & shree come back to the helicopter . & rathore tell him the plan. Shree hav to fly the helicopter to reach the roof.

Shree: but sir... I don't know how to fly this things!!!

Rathore comes to shree and placed his hand on his shoulder...

Rathore: it's a machine ... and I am sure that my shree can do anything with any kind of machine. I believe on u. & u know we r out off option.

Shree enter the helicopter without any delay. With some help from an instruction on net, he able to fly it. Although very badly he is handaling it but it helps rathore to reach the top. Rathore cut the iron with cutter & goes inside the room with the help of a rope.he come out with arjun & riya. Whole etf team run towards them while arjun is holding riya & calling her. The medical team also reach there. They covered arjun and riya with blanket. And start riya's primary treatmeant.after 15min riya open her eyes vey slowly. Everyone become very happy and hug her tightly. At the medical van, Arjun is holding her hand.

Arjun(to riya); thank u... for not give up on me..

Riya(a tear drops from her eyes): how could I even give a thought to give up on u... Arjun!!!

Arjun kissed her hands in teary eyes & cares her hair which is falling on her face.

Shree and chotu r also come there. Rathore was talking with local police. After finishing his work with them he start to come back to the medical van. But Ayesha comes into his way. She is very happy yet crying. She just about to give rathore a hug in the excitement in front of others. But rathore stop her.

Rathore(in low voice): ash... no one know that we r seeing each other...so...

Ayesha gives him a smile & they come close to the medical van where arjun riya chotu shree are waiting.

Actually... shree , chotu & arjun notice his behave heard his talk to Ayesha although he try to told it in low voice!!! Arjun just give a smile after seeing rathore & look at riya. Shree & chotu also start to smiling.

Rathore: what???!!! Why u guys r smiling??!!

Chotu(with smile); nothing sir!!

Just then shree get a sweet plan. He do something with her leptop. Suddenly... this song start to play in rathores mobile phone..

"Congratulations... and celebrations

when I tell everyone that u r in love with me.

Congratulations.. and jubilations

I want the world to know I'm happy as can be!"

Rathore; what the hell...!!! Who is playing a song now!!???

Then he get that it's playing from his mobile & everyone already start to laugh at him!!

& he gets it that his deed is exposed...(sam-ash affair)

He also start to smile shyly... & says;" do u guys wanna go home or just sit here to laugh??!!"

The whole ETF team left the place...

[to be continue]

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Posted: 11 years ago
Fab beautyfull awesome super amez update
Loveit
Cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
finally sik is dead

ariya are safe


sam and ayeshas secret exposed :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
it was so scary& triling
finaly ariya is fine
loved team's effort to keep riya awake
loved arjun's concern for riya
loved the way he keptherso close to him
aww finally he confessed his love
ariya moments were fabulous
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh my god finally ariya safe,

now move to raisha and ariya's love nest

eagerly waiting for next update...

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