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Posted: 12 years ago

Hello everyone!!!! Here's another part………

& this part is dedicated to the all of friends of the world!!

PART—28a

[Ariya's home]

Arjun is parking the car. The house seems too clam. Actually ganguly family go to see their son arnav & daughter-in-law pial. So the house r almost empty. Arjun feels guilty that he leaves riya here alone. Beside he feels restless by the over calmness of nature. He looks around to check that everything is fine or not. He still thinks that something is missing… something that he can't catch…

He put an end of his thought & goes inside the house. He open the door by his key. He just turning after closing the door. & riya run to him( she was sitting at the hall & crying) quickly . she gives a fast & tight hug to him. Arjun almost lose his balance so he have put his hand on the nearest table. Riya is still crying like a baby. She want to tell something to arjun but can't. every single word is coming out form of tears. Arjun try to sees riya's face which almost deep in his chest.

Arjun[trying to hold riya's face] : baba… what's the matter??? What happen??? Riya… riya??? Riya atleast look at me , baba.

Riya hugs him more closely. & at last she say something in between crying.

Riya: sss…oo..rry……!

Arjun now hold riya's face & makes her to look at him into eyes.

Arjun: hey.. why r u sorry!!!?? U don't have to be..ok??

Riya: I shouldn't say those things to u… I am just…

Arjun: it's ok baba.. I am telling u everything is fine.now stop crying or I am leaving!! Cause I can't see an ETF member crying like a baby girl!!

Riya[with a dry smile]: I m not an ETF member anymore, remember???

Arjun set riya's hair which was in the face. Then tell..

Arjun: no.. u always be an ETF. But u know why sam do this?? He loves u very much & he also trust u. it's not like that he doesn't trust anybody else in ETF. But u know… it's an urgent work & he believes that his chutki can do it perfectly. Just like he wants. Then u'll be back in the ETF team again.

Riya believes arjun.

Riya: it's ok… if u say so…

Arjun: then let's pack the bags together!!

Riya: what??? I have to pack it now???

Arjun: yes madam… cause ur dada will come in the very early morning to give u a lift to ur new office!!

Riya: that's not fair!! I need saome times to make some arrangement before I m leaving.

Arjun: didn't I say.. it's urgent baba!

Riya[ with a dry smile]: looks like all of u guys just praying my early leaves!!! Why??? R u guys hiding something???

Arjun's get tensed again. & riya sees it.

Riya: what's the matter??

Arjun[with a fake smile] : thinking that my wife is now doubting on me!! & also my whole team!!!

Riya: it's not like that…

Arjun: let's go & start packing.. it's already late night.

Arjun is leaving for bedroom from hall… riya tells him little loudly from the back ..

Riya: thank you!!

Arjun didn't get it why she thanked him.

Arjun: what?? Why??!!!

Riya: for all the decoration … for the cake… for everything!!

Now arjun remember about riya's birthday.. he looks at the clock.it's almost 12am… just left more than 2 minute.

Arjun; oh!! No… I am sorry… I just..

Riya: it's ok. It was my fault. U try ur best.i ruin it!.

Arjun quickly run to the kitchen & take the cake to hall…

Arjun forget to take knife.. he keeps the cake on the table & open it.he remember that he didn't take knife.

Arjun[in a hurry mood] : riya!!! Go & take the knife!!

Riya is little bit amuse by arjun's sudden hurriness.though she comes with the knife quickly.

Arjun[looking at riya]: ok…cut the cake!! [ arjun told this too quickly that riya can't understand]

Riya: what??

Arjun is on the groung in front of the center table & preparing the cake to cut it. He looks at the clock once again. & then pulled riya towards him by holding her hand. Riya just fall on to arjun. But arjun didn't care about it . he hold her knife holding hands & make her to cut the cake. These things was all of sudden!. After cutting the cake riya realize the whole thing Still arjun is holding riya's hand… riya start to laugh! Arjun also gives her a sweet smile.

Arjun: happy birthday… riya.

He looks at her with a deep love. & riya didn't miss it.

Riya[ teary eyes with a best smile]: thank you…

& just then the clocks bell ring to indicate that it's 12am..

[at shree's home]

It's almost 2am. But shree can't fall in sleep after talking to rathore. So he pick up his phone & call chotu.

Chotu was in deep sleep. But after shree's call he wake up quickly. He thought shree call him for any case.

Chotu[jokingly]; hello… shree!!! Tell me who's dead boby need a visit from ETF??

Shree: not for any case… I just call u like that.

Chotu[again jokingly]: why?? U want to hear my sweet voice at the middle of night??

But shree doesn't answer him back. Chotu get it something is wrong with his friends.

Chotu[worriedly]: what's the matter shree??? R u alright??

Shree: yeah… actually no.. yar!!

Then shree tell everything& also his doubt about that something wrong gonna happen.

Chotu: ok.. let's go to rathore sir house.

Shree: right now???

Chotu: so what??!! Seated like in a tensed mood… it's better to talk with him. U be ready. I m coming u to pick up.ok?? bye.

[ at ayesha's house]

Ayesha couldn't sleep after the encounter with sameer. She is spending sleepless night from then. & tonight another reason add for her sleeplessness. She brought some bag from a locker which his friend who died on the mission left for her specially. There were a chain with locket, a picture of their graduation in the box. She just keep looking these. Then she gets a call from an informer in her another mobile which she used in undercover mission. The person just can give her a message that sikkander come here today for a very privet work with a very special person like previous.

Ayesha didn't get the message at first. But after thinking a lot she realize that it may be connected to arjun sir.

So she pick up the & call rathore. Rathore see that Ayesha is calling him but didn't bother to pick it up. Cause Ayesha is calling her at day to night to say sorry. He didn't in the mood to talk with her now.

After not getting rathore in the phone Ayesha call arjun.

[ariya house]

After packing riya's bag arjun forced riya to take rest. Riya is sleeping by grabing arjun's arm. & he just sitting with her on the bed & looking at her.

When Ayesha call him he picks the phone after one ring. Cause he didn't want to wake her up.

Arjun; hello Ayesha…

Ayesha: sir I need to talk to u… I tried rathore sir but he didn't pick the call.

Arjun; ok.. u can tell me.

Ayesha tells him everything that the informer said.

After hearing this arjun's jaw turned hard & his fist grow harder.

Ayesha: sir?? Sir?? Can u hear me??

Arjun's come to the reality after hearing her voice.

Arjun: yes Ayesha..

Ayesha: be carefull sir..

Arjun: I'll… don't worry.

Ayesha is going to talk one more things but suddenly the line blocked & end the call. She try latter on both in cell & landline.. but can't get arjun.

Arjun also surprised by the sudden end of call. He also check his land line……… it's also dead!

[ at rathore's house]

Rathore feels restless. He is just sitting at his balcony. Then suddenly see that chotu's car stop at his house gate. He just surprised to see them. He open the door even before shree & chotu ring the door bell.

Rathore: what's the matter guys??? Is everything alright???

Shree & chotu enter the house without answering rathore.

Rathore: damn it !! guys.. why don't u answering my question?? What the hell u two r doing in my house at the middle of the night???

Shree: sir we come to see u…

Rathore[shockingly]: what??!!

Chotu: we know sir.. there is something that u r not telling us… & for that u transfer riya.

Rathore: & why u guys r thinking like a stupid about this in the middle of night???

Shree: cause.. we all know u loved riya very much among us. Like a sister u guide her. & now suddenly u throw her out of ETF to a small town whom u selected once?? It's not possible sir…

Chotu: we believe that something is bothering u… that's why we came at the middle of night…

Shree: sir… u always treat us like a kid brother. So why can't u share it to us??

Chotu: leave it shree. It's sir's wish. We should go. But sir… just one thing remember… we r always be with u, always be there for u when ever u need. Please just call once.. no matter in which corner of the world u r… we'll join u happily.

Then chotu & shree start to leave rathore's house.

Rathore was just speechless by his ream mate words… his all team mate … the little kid shree… when did he grow up rathore can't see it. & the big man chotu… when he notice everything apart from food.. rathore seriously don't know until today. He( rathore) just want to hug these stupid who didn't even care to come his home to check on him at very night……but can't!!

Although he is sure that they have the right to know everything now…

His non-blood related brothers have unconditional right on him.. that he forget earlier.

Rathore call them from back.

Rathore: shree… chotu?? Let's have coffee together ..

Then rathore & the two enter rathore's study room . & after having coffee.. rathore tells them everything in details…

[to be continue]

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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update...
Loved it a lot...
Ariya moments were beautiful and amazing...
ChoRee and Rathod moments' were good,as well.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fantastic update love it plz cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update.
love ariya moments.
continue soon.
and thanx for pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...!!
ariya moments were very sweet...!!
the way he made her understand...!! and the cake cutting part...!!!
choree and sameer scenes were lovely...!!!
love the bonding between the team...!!
ohh no ye call kyu cut ho gye??? hope kuch gadbad na ho
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update dear
thnx 4 the pm
loved the way arjun consoled and handled riya
the cake cutting sceen was really cute
happy 2 see arjun and riya cherishing riya's birthday so cutely
loved the bonding between etf team
loved the way aisha was concerned 4 the team and arjun
shree-chotu was really very concerned regarding riya...great
loved chotu's dialouge that they r alwayz there when rathore will need them
finally sam will say they truth to shree-chotu
hope this sik drama solves quickly
update soon
will be waiting.
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Posted: 12 years ago
It was awsome update... rathore sir goanna say the truth and arjun hurriness.. and loved it the abrupt cutting of phone something fishy hope everything will be alright...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lvly update dr..
lv ariya moments...
update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
yaarlike ka butten click kiya nahi hota but good job
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow..
great update...
hope everything goes ,well
cont soon..

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