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Posted: 12 years ago
hi sorry couldnt read yours for some reason my system does...Such a great update .the leap was too good ...Waiting excitedly...keep writing ...you write very well
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry I am late in replying ... But amazing update! Loved it!
Looks like shyam was Anjali's bf!
Hopefully this wont create problems btw Arshi!
Waiting for the next updtae!
Congrats for ur new thread!
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Posted: 12 years ago
excited for the update but please take care of yourself first
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey u should take care of ur health first. the rest can be handled after!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey!
How are you? Hope you are doing well ... 😊
Finally got a minute to take my time and comment on here. Just finished reading a few of the updates together, so this comment will be pretty long 😆
23A
Arnav clearly loves Khushi in red and is mesmerized by her anyhow, but in that particular colour he's left with his mouth wide open 😆 so flies can fly in 🤣
I'm glad that Khushi in this case, has got the idea that if he didn't comply with her ideas whilst they were out today, she wouldn't to his. That's fair, as long as they are comfortable with what they have set out to do that is.
Arnav saying
"At your service ma'am ... " Such a turn on! 😉
Actually I can just imagine him in uniform now. Woah! He's looking smoking hot. Well ... more than usual I'd say. Ahhh ... imagination ... it gets carried away at times ... what to do 😆😃 He appears to be quite the gent our Arnav does. Ummm hmmm ...
I really love the following parts. Extremely well-written. Probably one of my favourite parts in this update 😊
Its beautiful and wonderful how one minute you ask for something and it comes true. Other times it takes awhile, but the wait that you have whilst achieving what you asked for gives you great results.

"Please get Arnav here"

She opened her eyes and tilted her head slightly to the right to see Arnav standing there with his hands joined together. A bright smile immediately adorned her face as she turned to him completely. He opened his eyes and spoke "Don't be too happy. Let's go"

He had come for her happiness. He could pretend a little for her, no harm to him at least.

"Now where are we going?" he asked as he took the pooja thaal from her hands while they made their way down the steps.

23B
Awww ... Khushi wanted to buy clothes for Arnav. Adorable 😳😳
I understand Arnav's comment in regards with his clothes. I mean yes hw DOES own a fashion house, but for crying out loud ... the man doesn't have hardly any colour in his wardrobe and that is exactly where Khushi comes in 😆😉
They share good cameradie I'd say. Khushi told him to shutup and he didn't even shout at her ... woah! The guy has got it baddd! 😃😲
The part where they are on the beach with the chits ... a very nice touch. Unique even. I've not come across something like this on here before in a well-written story.
24A
Bless Arnav. He's ina veryyy good mood and we know why. I'm glad that the family didn't push this matter further even when Arnav himself had said that he hoped they didn't do anything to spoil that.
Wonderful gensture of Arnav wearing the shirt chosen by Khushi. Then after pissing him off a little by no fault of her own, bless her ... she places her hand over his on the steering wheel. Blushhh! Seems kinda intimate for Khushi to do that. I'm not complaining. Welcomed 😳😉

Arnav explaining to Khushi why he was a little off mood was a good thing on his part to do. Then and there. So there was no room for any misunderstanding to occur. He's being honest and so is Khushi. She thinks he's bored of her. How can he be? She's unique, quirky, beautiful both inside and out, caring, loving, fun to be around etc 😛 Him feeding her was flipping wonderful. This couldn't get any sweeter ... or could it?

Another line that I really loved!
" ... now stopping looking at me like that. Your wolf and vampire are here"
24B
Arnav told Khushi to try on the dresses that HE himself picked out. Right sizes. Beautiful. He really makes her feel special. Not because he bought her the dresses, though that is a lovely gesture if he bought them with good intentions. Anyway, so yes ... he says things that no on else has said to her making her feel slightly hot, look pink, flustered. Makes her feel happy. When he kisses her, like on the forhead or on the cheek ... she doesn't feel uncomfortable. She feels warm, safe ... protected whilst with him. He doesn't touch her forcibly nor does he act like a leech making her feel uncomfortable. He seems to respect her. A trait that not all men have. A trait to be looked on as a very good one to have.
Observant. Oh yes he is. A real gentleman. He had food ordered to where they now were. On top of that, he saw Khushi's itching her skin and so gave her a cream for this. Turned around for her on his own accord. Wow!
I couldn't have expected anything less from Khushi. Honesty. Even when she was embarrassed and shy of not knowing how to kiss, she trusted him enough to tell him this. Magical. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey!
Just read that you weren't too well. Hope you are better now ...
Arnav and Khushi seem so at home ... at peace with one another ... well until Arnav starts up his tender kisses and sensual touches on Khushi's skin. 😉😆
As for what happened to Anjali, it shouldn't have an impact on Payal and Akash. They've been engaged for long enough. Anjali really loved Shyam and he treated her like crap! WTH?!!! Left without an explanation ... ran away more like. Did he have a logical reason for this, even then a phone call wouldn't have harmed him would it?
I'm glad that Arnav didn't rush into, nor has he had sex/made love with Khushi yet. He seems to be protective over her and rightly so. Love them ❤️ When its the right time for both, they'll know 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 25 is superb, and mind blowing 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
loved it too too much 🤗 🤗 🤗
what is been 2 years and half from the day Arnav and Khushi started dating, wow so much time.
Anjali loved, and still love's Shyam, and she doesn't want to get marry. But her decision should have no effect on Aakash and Payal's marriage.
Thank's to Anjali finally those desperate of Aakash and Payal can get marry soon.
Loved to know that Arnav didn't crossed his limits with Khushi, because he love's her really to much to depend their relationship on physical needs.
So Shyam is Khushi's brother, wow in short everything happens in the family, don't need to look for people outside the two families 😆.

P.S. why I feel that Shyam still love's Anjali and he didn't dump her. I think there is more to know about this new chapter of the story.

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Posted: 12 years ago
How you feel better soon.
Take it easy and dont worry about updating until you are well.
We can and will wait for the update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
AWW !! Lazy, .The Story Has Cum So Far By Nw.. :)
Loving The Way Yu r Progressing The Story yarr .. Wid Arnav-Khushi's Cute Nok-Jhok's .. Anjali's Stubborn Behaviour Fr Tht Unknwn Guy, Nana-Nani's Concpt Of Gettin Anjali 1st Married !!
Continue Soon Pleej !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the update... had missed it... but anyway I am here...😃
Shyam being Khushi's bro... shocker...
wonder what happened between Shyam and anjali then...
2 and a half years of relationship...wow...Arnav and Khushi are really cute..

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