Virman-ff-two left feet - part 18-ii

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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#611

this is like yu updated after years...😉
this update was just bang on ...👏👍🏼
it was fun reading this update ...the pregnancy part manvi's drama crying and arguing like babies its so adorable😃
and the way virat behaved with her all professional it was just soo much fun specially mannu's thoughts and reactions over it 😆😆
loved the update it was just soo awesome 👏

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Swati

@sweetyyyyyyy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#612

finally u updated...

nice update...
pls update regularly...

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.Yamin.

@.Yamin.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#613

Anu🤗once again u made my day with ur super awesome update👏👏👏
kya update tha yaar...mazaa aagayya😃😃...brilliant👍🏼👍🏼loved each n every bit of it❤️❤️❤️
it was soo virmanish😛i really enjoyed reading it...n once again a big smile played on my lips😃😃all thanks to u:)))
i was in another world while reading it...😃😃
awwn mannu is soo cute...the way she was angry ...such a cutie pie😳😳n the way she was complaining to her baby...awwn...i can't stop awwing...:)))this is superb cute...
once again a bang on update Anu...
Dr virat toh gayaa...😉dunno wat is cooking up in our mannu brain...😛this is really fun...really excited to read next part...will be waiting...thank u so much for the pm🤗❤️

Edited by yaminnthida - 12 years ago

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

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Posted: 12 years ago

#614

Anu you updated this one!!! 😃😃 Wow!! After a long time.. Thanks a lot 😃. Update was mind-blowing ⭐️⭐️.. Really enjoyed reading it.. Virat was checking out her bump.. Awww how cute.. Loved this caring, protective and loving hubby Virat ❤️.. But in the hospital, he is a completely different person.. Strict, disciplined and no-nonsense type of person.. Manvi is too adorable 😛.. Her thoughts her are hilarious some times.. Loved the ultra sound part ❤️❤️.. Beautifully portrayed 👏👏👏.. She was complaining to her baby about Virat!! So cute.. I liked Rahul-Priya convo.. But the ending made me curious.. What's cooking in her mind?? Really eager to read the next part.. Thank you for the pm.. Take care 😊

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Rachel19

@Rachel19

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Posted: 12 years ago

#615

wow finally u updated this story😊

i liked it virat being different in class yelling at manvi

and in the hospital he is being nice to her😆

now i'm curious what the plan is that manvi is thinking

about😛

please continue soon and please pm me😳

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Syed695

@Syed695

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Posted: 12 years ago

#616

Superb Update⭐️..!! u updated aftr a long time...First what a come back..Maanvi is Virat's intern...virat would be stern with during her time in hospital and he would pay back once he is home(they r even here)😆...This would be nice...but looking forward on how u develop this scenario further...as too much of nastiness would be overboard...Waiting for next n Thnks for the PM Anu..~!!!

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vamps1996

@vamps1996

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Posted: 12 years ago

#617

eeeksss anu felt great reading it after a long time :-D

the update was superrr cute i would say...

loved to read virman this way <3

the first scene was dammm cute and the thing i really liked it was u didnt make virat a lovy dovy husband indeed he is but he's a doctor a savoir at the same time so he cant neglect manvi's ignorance :-)

and the phone convo was dammm adorable...

this was my fav part "Cosying up with your intern is sexual harassment Dr. Virat. Abhi ja kar complaint karti hu!"

thnx for the om and the tag as well

update soon

lots of love~~

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roshreb

@roshreb

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#618

lovely update..❤️
love the way virat was checking manvi's belly!! 😛
virman is too cute ..
at wrk romantic virat is infact Hitler virat..
the end is intriguing.. " Manvi inwardly smiles an evil laugh"...

update soon not this one but addicted !!😛

Edited by roshreb - 12 years ago

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itsfate

@itsfate

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Posted: 12 years ago

#619

awesome update
loved it
continue soon
thanks for the pm

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jayanthi

@jayprabu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#620

Awesome update. Virat and Manvi's ultrasound moments were really good.
At the end what is cooking up in Manvi's mind now. Continue soon. Thanks for the pm.