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Posted: 12 years ago
First of all more than anything am FINALLY happy u updated!!! It was damn hard to convince u! :P Coming to the update.. I was jumping around while reading it!!!! EEEKKKSSS!!! The first part is like Awww!!!!! Haha soo cute the way Virat was checking out Manvi's Bump! Coming to the intern part.. Oh god! Virat was freaky!!!! He was acting like a maniac!!! And poor Manvi... The ultra sound part again was sooo damn cute!!! I hope Manvi is still mad at him! I wana see him pacify her now!! :D Man I Cant wait for the next part!! Can u post it today instead of addicted! :P :P Never mind I'll just go n re-read the whole FF again! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
LOVELY UPDATE !

Just read the whole story its AMAZING !
Its a different concept with them being doctors!x
I love the way you add humour especially into the last update!
U are an amazing writer !x

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Thx for the Pm and continue sooon 👍🏼

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
loved maanvi a lot
she was so cute
please continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg wat present surprise...updt of tlf? Goddd hope i m not dreaming...lolzzz

superb, mindblowing updt...truly awesome...1st part where virat was caring, romantice, possesive n in the 2nd part in hospitel he was cocy, professional, focused, attitude man...split personality...manvi was so cute...hwww virat made her cry...dadies complaints to unborn kiddo was so so so cute...i thinks its all her pregantcy mood swings...cont soon n thnx alot fr the updt
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yay!!! my favourite ff has been updated...!!1😊It was Awesome..Please give a faster update next tym...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
i love it!!!
i wanted to go onnn reading it,, i was disappointed in meeting an end.. its such a rocking update.
u know wat, in my eyes u are like a chubby bun ryt now, i want to bite u at the moment... i dont know how to put that feeling, i feel like cuddling u, its such a cute, sweet, funfilled update dii

well talking about the characters, i was able to capture an innocence filled manvi..
from her feeling embarrassed at her husband observing her belly, from "I am born smart.", from her proud statement ''Virat always listens to whatever I say'' to her friend, from her huge disappointment, from her ''but-I-answered-it-now'' expression, from her crying vt all might out of the anger at virat, from her cute revenge of teasing back virat, from her disappointment of not able to locate her baby, from her sweet complaint about virat to her unborn life & from her ''"My sweet little baby.." she kisses the screen.''
she's filled vt innocence, love & life.. she's too pure, too cute & too beautiful in her character... too sweet to digest.. i love her!!

virat on the other hand, he's professional.. dedicated.. down to earth character.."A thing worth doing is worth doing well. You will have to be an extremely responsible person to be a good doctor."
& tooo smart,, he taught a beautiful lesson to her wify didnt he? smart.. his antics proved that she must give some serious attention wen it comes to work dat too a doctor, dealing vt life is not a joke ofcoz.. in that way i appreciate this virat for treating her rude & proving his point smartly... but i wonder wats gonna happen as ''Manvi inwardly smiles an evil laugh''

the other characters here are rocking too.. Priya, Rahul & sneha..
i adored priya wen she inquired about all girls in interns with rahul & his answer + look.. & sneha, wen she tried her best not to laugh at a disappointed manvi.. cute!!

u are carrying the same passion & love in the update though u are touching this piece after a long time,, really brilliant..
to end my comment,, get my hugs, kisses & love & love only!!!
hats off to u dii!!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsm update.. am glad you updtd this one... virat is manvis boss now... great... this is gonna be fun... cont soon
shaimah thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
This is amazing
So happy reading it after a long time
Continue very soon and thanks for the pm!!!
virmanfan013 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow u updated after long time
it was a wonderful update as always
curious to know what's going on in manvi's brain
plz cont soon this time
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww...
Firstly thanku so much for d update
It's just bang on..fab...
Awesome update. ..virat scold manvi awww so pleasing
Plz update soon ds tym

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