Virman-ff-two left feet - part 18-ii

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preity_d

@preity_d

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#621

the tantrums of both virat and manvi was super cute
virat was little rude but kya kare he is rude :P

loved how he make her see the child and how emotional and cute mannu is
she was looking at the spot ... so touchy

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sweets1126

@sweets1126

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#622

Thaaank u very much for the update!!!:)) it was awesome!!:D

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sania

@Krazzy4u786

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#623

Awesome update!!!
Loved it!!
Can't wait to see what manvi's plan is!!
Waiting 4 ur next update!!!
Thanks 4 the pm!!

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kalpana

@jia123sagar

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#624

amazing update

maanvi is so cutee

she is virat's intern

virat is very strict to her

loved the ultasound part

plz cont soon

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Captain_Pari

@Captain_Pari

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#625

As always amazinggg! i love this VirMan ^_^ Hahaahh the naughtyy Mannu nd strict Virat :P enjoying it! can't wait to see Manvi's evil plan, update soon ;) :P

-Luv Pari

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deepika03

@deepika03

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#626

nyc funny part...reminded me a vee bit of dmg lolz ;)

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NushIsh

@NushIsh

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#627

I discovered your story today and read all 18 updates in one go. you are such an amazing writer the way you come up with plots and story lines are amazing.

love this Virat who changed himself and became more caring and understanding person because of love. and Manvi so naughty but yet so innocent. love your version of Virman so much .

the last part reminded me a lot of Greys Anatomy (are you a fan of that)

you bring about the right amount of passion, laughter and sadness to the story I was truly amazed by it all.

waiting for yur next update hope that I wont have to wait too long.

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Afshan

@afshanmk093

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Posted: 12 years ago

#628

sorry for commenting late!

ok firstly thankyouuu sooo much for updating tis my dhamkis worked on but man it was heel difficult task to persuade u to write on tis but me vaish n dina accomplished this task n made u wrote...

after a gap tis update was bang on... the same lightness has com again tis story is lovy dovy that i cant stop my-self to not to drool over this VIRMAN couple i mean they are sooo awesome together ( i so wish nia n kushal would act on this storyline of urz)

the beginning of the chap is itself so full of lov n virat's naughtyiness ...how he was tring to examine her bump!

the clinicals were hilarious virat was so dam strict ... her lines craked me up...'Arey, I don't understand anything. Yeh ho kya raha hai? Virat ne mujh se divorce kar liya hai kya? Aaisa kyu baat kar raha hai? Sach main mera boss ban gaya! And the duffer I am, I told him I was going to have fun in clinic duty. Mera toh solid band bajne wali hai."

but again he switched to his protective husband when the time of her appointment comes shooo shweet he called her to came to him n all the ultrsound time talks btw them were so cute... i loved the way he calls her nautanki/dramebazz every now n then

exicted to see whats cooking up in manvi's mind so plz update soon

again, actually now u better used to it that u r AN AMAZING WRITER! kitni tareef karo main ab? word hi khatam...love u...muah

luv,
ur bacha