Virman-ff-two left feet - part 18-ii

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Geminimanna

@Geminimanna

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#241

Oh God! I love this story. I was smiling continuously while reading it and the particular scene of their patch up after argument was making me desperate as to how would they handle the situation? To me they are in a phase of tronsformation of their relationship. So I am a little bit nervous regarding their reactions while handling these particular situation. But I must say that you are very clear in your concepts and also have a strong grip of the story so far. Best of luck and thanks for the pm.

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preetipc

@preetipc

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#242

Loved the update.Loved the sweet moments between Virat and MAnvi. Someone has started loving, even if he does not want to accept.Loved the way u have explained Manvi's feelings.

Loved their conversations specially about the blushing part .It was so cute.U don't notivce those small small things wen u are just friends. Loved Virat and how he pacified Manvi. Loved the conversations between them wen he was about to leave. The last part of ur update was awesome. And miss maya is also with him.Hmmm, this two weeks dooriyan would hopefully bring them together even more closer after he comes back.hope nothing bad happens till that.Thanks for the pm

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#243

Lovely update Anu ⭐️.. sweet, romantic and fun-filled.. I loved Virman sofa conversation very much.. It was very cute 😛.. I really liked Manvi in this update.. She is sweet, caring, loving and at the same time positive and bold also.. I loved the way she expressed her feelings in front of Virat once again.. But Virat is a pragmatic and rational person. He always considers the pros and cons of any matter before he comes to any conclusion.. But he is little slow in matters of the heart.. He still couldnt realise it that he is in love with Manvi.. But I hope being away from her will help him to realise his true feelings.. I loved Manvi's 'biwi speech' and Virat's 'husband speech' .. I also liked the way Rahul was teasing Virat "tujh pe koi kitna bhi pyaar barsaye, tuje toh gobar hi lagne wala hai." 😆.. He is funny.. So Maya will be there with Virat.. not cool 🤔.. Will be waiting for your next update.. Thank you so much for the pm.. Take care 😊

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vamps1996

@vamps1996

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#244

ok miss blot blue ive read ur whole story today and must say reflects ur hard work keep going its awsomeee 👏

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princesshelen

@princesshelen

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#245

Cute update...
Luved the way virat pacify maanvi...it was so sweet...
The entire convo was superb...
Especially the goodbye scene
Virat is still confused with his feelings...
Hope maya dont create any MU between virman...
Update soon
Thnks fr the pm

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kgoyal

@kgoyal

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#246

loved ur ss dear

not able to comment by mob

but i read ur all ss n loved them to core plz pm me whn update next

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Kidrauhl

@Kidrauhl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#247

That was cute thanks for the pm 😃

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shona9

@shona9

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#248

Hey buddy...
Loved d update from d bottom of my of my heart...
Virat possesive hmmm...
Tnx for d pm...

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Kanwal_chohan

@Kanwal_chohan

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#249

This was the best update so far loved it
To the core specially how manvi ignored virat
Lol at how much manvi was talking
Awesome update loved it continue soon and do
Pm me

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preity_d

@preity_d

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#250

1st of all, I liked the line pyaar gobar lagta hain...
what a comparison 🤣

I wanna know...
Maya saw Virman kissing? what was her reaction? is she accepting Virat as a friend or she will try to get him back...
many things can happen to them in separation
I want Virat to realize his love
aww how caring he gave her phone because of him her phone broke
how cute

wanna read more and soon