Virman-ff-two left feet - part 18-ii

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karanshalaka

@karanshalaka

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Posted: 12 years ago

#261

Manvi's words would work just lyk a magic for any1... Virat finally committed... Luv Rahul's support for Virat... M waiting Virat to meet Manvi and confess his feelings to her... D update was ssly awesome...
Continue soon n do PM!

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naina

@naina927

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#262

hey anu i loved it yaar... u are just amazing... everything was just too perfect... virat losing confidence, manvui comforting n soothing him... virat missing manvi... how virat had confidence in what manvi said... i love how he realised his feelings n how he said i love u tooin a flow... an dthis maya she can never change... and it was too funnyy... rofl "I should have just seduced him"

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sreshta90

@sreshta90

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#263

hey its awsome.. i loved it i loved it... loved manvi nd virat phone convo thats sooo sweet..first i feared thinking that maya trying to brainwash virat.. but happy that virat dinn took it serious.. nd at last im laughing like crazy wen maya thought to seduce virat a bit loud in front of Ankush.. nd Akush reaction aftr hearing her was hilarious... nd do update soon... thanks fr pm😊😊

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meetu chaudhary

@mits40

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#264

m speechless yr...what a update...
Virat finally realise his feelings fr manvi...
Luvd d way manvi supported virat...ph convo is sweet everthing goes in flow..its jst amzing n soo natural...
I want li'l bit romance in next update...
Cntn soon n thnx fr pm swty...:)

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Aenna

@Aenna

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#265

Waooo virat just said
love u to manvi without realisingg
hope he realize soon...
Yr it was just Terificc...
Update asap

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Jannat

@Jannat94

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#266

hey that was an awesome update like always
Sorry 4 not commending on last update
Both update was hillarious
Love the way virman relationship is growing
Finally virat also says that magical words to manvi, coincidently it was but
I hate maya, plz kick them out from virman life
Hope virat won't be seduced by so called jealous maya
Thanx 4 d pm
Waiting 4 ur next part... Update Soon

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Kiekeboe

@Kiekeboe

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#267

*res

edit

What a wonderful and emotional update.

you made Virat feelings and heartbreak so very well written ... I really loved the way Virat made Maya shut up.

Edited by Kiekeboe - 12 years ago

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preetipc

@preetipc

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#268

Loved the update so much. I have read it more than five times even before commenting.Loved the golden heart conversation. ❤️Manvi is so lovely❤️.Loved the natural conversation between them. hated that maya😡.Loved the chanchal and Manvi's talk to Virat.Loved MAnvi's answer to Virat and his word about Manvi and love.Loved the whole update.Thanks for the pm😊

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princesshelen

@princesshelen

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#269

Amazing update...
The way u explain virat POV was awesome
Hate maya
Updatr soon
Thnks fr the pm

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Kanwal_chohan

@Kanwal_chohan

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#270

Omg it was awesome yaar I'm speechless loved how
Virat got attached to chanchal also loved how manvi
Made virat gain his confidence back hate Maya she's
Such a witch finally jee accepted his feelings beautiful update
Loved it to the core continue soon and do pm me

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