Virman-ff-two left feet - part 18-ii

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MadhuChowdary

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Posted: 13 years ago

#231

hey anu...good to see ur update...as usual amazing one...virman's husband and wife speech was very nice...a bit funny...i think virat is changing...isn't he? and what's with maya ? i hope she will not create any hurdles b/w them...virat's going away gift scene was cute...finally update is good...yesterday SP and now TLF...hardworking girl...thank u so much for the updates and for the pms...take care...

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rasp_berry

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Posted: 13 years ago

#232

This is so cute...i like virman sweet romance...awwwee

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js1234

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Posted: 13 years ago

#233

honey you are a super writer! Lovely update once again - i love their relationship - i like this mature Virat.

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Aenna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#234

awww i just luved d
cute scenes dey r amazinggg
i wish virat also fall for manvi
strongly after being away from her
update soon..

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Syed695

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Posted: 13 years ago

#235

Nice and Sweet Update...! Love maanvi here..she made it clear to virat she listens to her heart n follows it so there is no onfusion on wht she wants and expects out of her relationships n life...where as Virat thinks n finds logic in everything he does...Now Sure he would miss her more than she missing him...and this would make him realize the depth of his feelings...he already loves her...but scared to admit..n this would b an icebreaker for him...where as maya i dnt think dat would affect i guess she would also know she is no where imp for virat anymore...Anu i am eagerlly waiting for ur next update...Thnks for the PM Buddy...! :)

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Kiekeboe

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Posted: 13 years ago

#236

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I really loved their patch, and what lovely husband-wife speech, superb written update.

Virat gift is just so touching and caring... ❤️

Edited by Kiekeboe - 13 years ago

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deepika03

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Posted: 13 years ago

#237

this story is so unusual and refreshing! cnt tel u hw mch i love it 😊 plz cntinue asap n thanx a lot fr pm

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meetu chaudhary

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Posted: 13 years ago

#238

beautiful update...showing all d emotions anger, love, care...luvd virat's concerned towards manvi...n the gift ws lovely...bt y maya is going with dem...lets c what gonna happen nxt...
Cntn soon n thnx fr d pm...

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sania

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Posted: 13 years ago

#239

Beautiful update!!
Loved how u explained all the different emotions in this update!!
Virat is still confused about his feelings, his gift was awesome!!
Can't wait 4 the next update!!
Plz continue soon & thanks 4 the pm!!

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nikki1211

@nikki1211

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Posted: 13 years ago

#240

yes personally for me posting updates is better than a thank you post...

you updated so soon...actually i finished reading yesterday so didnt hav to wait for long...lovely lovely update...i think i hav mentioned before that i just love the pace of this fic...its quite balanced...virman are away from home living on their own and big things hav happened since...they realize this marriage is no mere arrangement , they hav fallen for each other , they are willing to make the effort to make their marriage work...life is settled ryt now for them...bt i dont think its gonna continue for long...maaya is going to...and you mentioned she loved virat...i am pretty sure she will create problems...

i loved the familiarity that maanvi and virat hav with each other...yet things are new...virat discovering new things abt maanvi post marriage is so cute...i loved that sofa cuddling-cum-conversation scene...also small things...the dialogues...they were very virmanish and true to character...virat's "i am never going to complain of you not talking enuf" and maanvi's "i am going to finish saying all the things so that you dont miss me not talking"...i fell in love with maanvi all over again wen she doled out her wife-speech...that was brilliant...

you hav a true grasp of virman...loved this part...

take care...