Maaneet ff: My life's mistakes--(ON HOLD) - Page 14

Originally posted by: preeti.1

awesome upddate ...maan startec to love geet but geet is so naive that she does not understand his feelings or efforts ...

i want to kill that rinit ...always try to come in between maaneet ...

geet is naive i understand but she knows that she is already married to maan than y she let ronit come close to her ...

plz geet maan se atleast puch to sakti he na ronith k saath kahi bahar jaane se pehle ?

i hope precap dekh k lag raha he k sameera should make her understand about hubby n wify realtion aur geet ko ye samjhana jaruri he k ab usko sab se jyada maan ko attention deni he ...kisi aur ko nahi ...

plz geet should manaofy maan this time

Geet really doesnt understand the relationship between hubby and wife... as she never seen or lived like that... she has lived in a very protective... or to say in a closed environment before marring Maan and after.. Maan and his bros have also been protective.. so she doesnt understand society's norms and basic things... moreover Geet is not in love with Maan.. for her Maan is a very important person in her life... so she doesnt think he is her hubby...

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

for part 11...

yes I liked this edited update...

so Maan knew that she is innocent and he was informed by Vicky...

but after watching her with Ronith he lost his control...he thought that he loved Samira but the reality is that he never loved Samira...just it is his ego to be dumped by her which is making him brood for what happened... he is jealous to see Geet with Ronith because he loves Geet now truely...

u edited that cheek kiss also and this is right to do...that was not appropriate...Ronith is friend to her so it is not right...

he is sorry to force her and she forgive him...he slept in her room in same bed with her...

now going to read part 12...

thanx for pm...

Samira was th first crush for Maan... as he had no elders to guide him as he lost his parents... he doesnt understand the difference between love and crush...
and for Geet... she is still not in love with Maan... she takes Maan as a very close friend and a person who has always helped her...and Geet is really a soft person... she was timid.. but being with Maan and family, she has become a better... but still is very soft and forgiving... so for her forgiving Maan was easy...
i changed the part... as i thought Maan's anger and jealousy was not shown properly in that part.. but hope i have done ok in this one... also i wanted to show Geet and her feelings.. and her thoughts too...
thank you for likeing my effort yaar...

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

please yaar iss Samira ko beech mein se bhagao...

I can't stand her and her sweet talks...

I think she is planning a huge game...

why she is so much interested what happening between them...

on one hand shs is playing all goody-goody with Geet and concerning with Maan...and other hand she is playing with Maan's jealous natuer and temper...she is staying close to them on pretext of care so that she get all first hand information about relationship between them and then she will come close to Maan...she may be planning along with that Ronith to create misunderstanding between Maaneet...why will Ronith give such a party same day...

please don't kill Maan's character by let him make physical relation with Samira...some mistakes can never be forgiven...I will really hate him if he will do such mistake...

Geet is also so stupid...when she knew that Maan has asked her to go out with him then why she ate so much with Ronith...other take advantage of ur situation when u give them opportunity...she understands what Ronith wants but don't want to understand what Maan wants...she is giving too much importance to that Ronith...first she was uncomfortable with Maan but she has become so free with Ronith...

interesting update...

thanx for pm...

yaar Samira plays a very imp role in this story... she will teach so much to Geet here... and her nature will be describd very soon... and her past with Maan will come up aslso...

and Geet... she is like that... the day she grows up she will change... she is innocent and believes everyone.. she is nly 19 yaar... ad has no parents or elders to guide her... she undestand only love and anger... that is all... so all those people she loves come under friends...

part 12
nice part...
oh ho not again...
yeh Geet bhi na...
Sam better teach her something...
poor Maan...
cont soon dear...
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Sam is very imp in this story... she will teach a lot to Geet and Maan...
she has a completely diff charecter in this story...

again mu...

this much MU

nice dear😊

Sam is good. But situations r the enemy for Maan here which he misunderstand for Geet.
Wondering wen will Maan and Geet learn abt each other.

Originally posted by: snehapriya

Sam is good. But situations r the enemy for Maan here which he misunderstand for Geet.
Wondering wen will Maan and Geet learn abt each other.

they will understand eachother ...but presently not happening as here maan is confused but is angry possessive type... And get is 19and is teenager...her understanding of married life is limited...
Sam will help her in this...

Originally posted by: goldenmoon

waiting

will update tomo or day after...