Maaneet ff: My life's mistakes--(ON HOLD) - Page 12

I am not a mannet fan..still I liked it :)

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

precap is scaring me...

update was awesome...

Geet is learning city life...Ronith is new entry...

is this all Sameera's planning to make Maan-Geet separate by creating misunderstanding between them...if Sameera suggested and Geet also supported for Sameera's friend as English teacher then also Maan could have said no...Geet would not dare to go against his decision then why he is oblidging all Sameera and Geet's decisions if he don't like...

waiting for next part...

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Originally posted by: preeti.1

plz plz is ff me sameera ka khel jaldi khatam karna i dont want her between maaneet ...atleast geet ko to bata do samera ka asli rang

Originally posted by: kiran_rati

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The next part…… SORRY GUYS i needed to change this... as i was not very pleased with that update... sorry...sorry... do tell me how this one was...

Geet… Geet Singh Kurrana…. This girl had changed my life... she had bought so much of joy to this family…I kept looking at her play with my brothers…..

Maan… can I ask you something….?? Samira asked me as I was lost looking at Geet...

Hmm... I sung, not interested in what she was saying….

Wo…. Why does Geet have a separate room??? She asked me…

What???? How…. How do you know?? I was surprised as no one apart from the family knows this…

Actually I saw her coming out of another room today… and I guessed….. she said meekly…. Looking down…

Look Samira... this is between Geet and me… so if you don't mind….

Are you punishing her for what I did Maan??? She asked me suddenly…. We both never talked abt this topic for the past 2 years... I looked at her, as I dint understand why she was saying all this now….

What do you mean…?

That is what I also want to know Maan... what are you waiting for??? Geet is a very nice girl…. Everyone of your family loves her…. She is just perfect…. Then why are you keeping away from her?? She needs you… she is your wife….. she told me looking straight into my eyes…..

Look…. Don't…. but before I could say anything, she cut me…

No you look…. This is not only your life Maan… it is hers also…. She is 19…. She might have wishes and dreams of her life and you being her husband have a duty of fulfilling it…. Then why are you doing this…. I thought by this time, you guys might have moved on very nicely... but then, being her friend and well wisher, I just couldn't keep quiet after seeing what I did today…

Friend??? Well wisher??? Are you kidding me Samira…? I don't think you could be like this to anyone… you left me waiting for you in the register's that day, after promising me that you'd come… I was sitting outside the register's office for the whole day and you dint even think of explaining why you dint come… I spate out….. all these years of frustration, betrayal and humiliation….. I remembered how I had fought with Nani for this…. For marring her… and she never turned up….

Maan... she whispered…. Me majboor thi… you'll never understand…. But why are you thinking of all this??? Especially now??? You are married to Geet now and you have to move on with her….

Forget you???? Forget what happened??? That can never happen Samira…. You were my first love and …… I stopped myself before more words came out… how could I talk like this…??? That too in front of Samira?? I dint know what I was saying… I am so confused... I got up and left the lawn… not able to control my feelings anymore…. I dint know what I was doing anymore…

I'm sorry Maan... Samira whispered as she wiped her tears… but I cannot let it be…. this is not abt me or you… it is abt Geet's future… and also yours…. I want you to be happy Maan... cos even today…. I love you… she whispered again….. as she followed behind Maan to face him… Dev was really confused… he had heard everything that Maan was talking to Sam and also what Sam was whispering, as he stood behind the pillar where she was standing…. He left the place thinking of discussing this with Vicky…..

Maan don't think you can just leave like this…. Samira started as she barged into the study…. I don't understand why she is doing like this…. Why can't she let it be...?

GET OUT! I yelled at her… hoping she would leave...

No… I wont… and stop shouting… she retorted… shocking me

Listen… Maan… I don't know what you are doing with your life… I really don't care too… but I care of Geet... She is really innocent and very nice person… she calls me Di and I take this relationship very seriously… she said in a serious voice….. pls do this…. Spend sometime with her… talk to her… take this relationship future…. Pls think abt this…. She pleaded…. I could see tears in her eyes….

Why are you doing this Samira??? I asked her confused by her outburst….

Cos I don't want you to lose her also Maan… your aloofness would give her different signs and you might lose her forever… I don't want you to be alone… I would die to see you like that… she said as her whole face softened….. She then left the room abruptly….

I sat the whole day in the study… thinking abt what Sam said to me… it was true that I was attracted towards Geet…. I cared abt her too…. I want that smile to be fixed on her face for ever… but do I love her?? I dint know... Moreover, what did Geet want??? She dint even want to get married to me… but still she trusted me and stayed on... but what would she decided now??? I dint know…What if she decided to leave me, this house and go off… what if she dint want to continue with this marriage??? Marriage? What Marriage??? I dint even let her use my name… I reminded myself… she was still Geet Handa only…. Not Geet Maan Singh Kurrana……. The name bought a smile on my face... This… I liked… Mrs. Maan Singh Kurrana… I repeated aloud... It was really heavenly to hear that… I took the phone and made reservations for tonight with Geet… May be I would listen to Samira and take this relationship forward I thought… today I will take my wife…. On a date… I concluded as I left the study to look for Geet…..

Jodha Akbar??? Sach me?? I asked excited as Ronith told me today's plans…..

Yes sweety…. He smiled warmly… I know you like that movie and you are coming to my house to see it also… I have talked to Yash and Meera and they too are gonna come…. So challo….. he said as he pulled me out of the door…..

Arrey I have not informed Maan ji yet…. I said trying to get away from him...

So what??? You told Vicky no… he'll inform him….. wont you Vicky??? Ronith said looking at Vicky who nodded his head in approval….

Don't worry Geetu… I'll tell bhai… and Roni…. Drop her personally ok… if your busy... call me and I'll come to pick her up…. Vicky said seriously I really don't understand why he is always so worried abt me…. Even Ronith. he is always like don't talk to unknown people… don't do this, that…. it is not safe…. Oh... I tell you…. These people always are concern abt me… this really irritates me sometimes… but most of the times… I really feel loved…. I smiled to myself and left with Ronith waving bye to Vicky…. Who was busy with his call… we both reached Ronith's house in one hour…. Yash and Meera were already there….. We chatted there; saw Jodha Akbar and Golmall 3 movie... I loved it….. We were laughing our heads off… we had our dinner in his place itself…. All this time, I had forgotten to call back home…. And also to look at my watch…. By the time we decided to leave, the time was 10…. Ronith decided to drop and Yash and Meera left for their homes….

Ronith stopped the car in front of the Kurrana Mansion…. As I walked towards the house, Ronith held my hand, so…. Today was fun…. He said looking at me differently…. He always saw me that way… I dint understand his look at all…

Yes… Roni… it was fun I smiled…..

So... lets do this some other time... may be only us….. what say…? He said holding my hand in-between his…..

Sure… why not... I smiled at him and removed my hands of his…. I felt something weird… he wished me Good night and left and I too returned home… It was almost 11…. And no one was outside… I opened the door… and felt someone pull me rashly…. It was Maan… he dragged me into his room and closed the door…..

What do you think you are doing??? He yelled at me….

Kio acchi ghar ki bahu ese kam karti hai kya??? He shouted at me… I dint understand what he was saying… his eyes were red with anger…. His whole body was shaking in rage…. He pulled me closer to him by my shoulders and shook me…..

Tho… kaha thi??? Why dint you even inform me???

Wo... I told Vicky….

Vicky???? You told Vicky… but couldn't tell me??? What was so important that you left in such a hurry…? Was he so important???He yelled…. Holding me tightly…his nails digging into my skin….. I cried in pain... but Maan seemed unaffected….

I was waiting you for so long…… look at the time... he shouted pushing me towards the wall clock…. What is the time… he growled…. Speak up… he yelled… normally you speak to every one right…. So why not to me…. Huh??? Am I not even worth it??? Tell me… he shook me….

Its 11:30… I whispered…. Shaking… I was scared… I have never seen him like this… today he looked exactly how Brij Veerji looked when he was angry….. Words refused to come out of my mouth seeing him like this….

What I cannot hear you…. You can talk normally to every Tom Dick and harry but not to me huh?? I'm your husband damit…. Speak up…he yelled…What is the bloody time…..

11:30…. I cried a bit loud…..

Yes… correct… tho you know how to read time…. Then why the hell are you late…. What were you doing there with him…..?

Wo…. We were in his house… I replied meekly… scared…… my legs were shaking… my whole body shivering…

House… you both in his house??? At this time??? What the hell… he shouted pushing me…. My back hit the wall and before I could slid down, he caught my shoulders again pinning me….

What were you doing in his house…? How could you go to a man's house like this alone… that to to an unknown man's house…

He is my friend…. I said just like that, with out thinking….

Friend…… then what am I???? he asked pressing me to the wall

Wo… wo….. Aap bhi my friend... I said… I dint know what else to say….. I dint understand what else to say… I just said what came in my mind…. Cos that is what out relationship was…. As friends… best friends…. If he wasn't there, I would not even be alive…..

Friends??? I'm your friend???He said in a really painful voice…. his eyes showed some emotions which I dint understand…. But then it changed into anger…. He hold tightened and I cried in pain…. I was really painful…. He pressed himself on me… and I was having difficulty in breathing….

So Ronith and I am equal to you???

I dint understand his question….

What do you feel for him huh????

I…. I….

I what???? Do you like him or….or…..? tell me…..

I respect him…. He is nice….. I really l… but before I said anything more I felt his lips on me… he had done this with so much force that my head hit the wall behind me…. He cupped my face with his hands and turned it slightly…. I was numb with fright…. What was he doing… he bit my lips…. I cried in pain…. There was nothing nice abt this…. My head pained… my shoulder ached… and now my lips burned… he stepped on my foot and I gasped, opening my lips… he entered my mouth and started to suck….. I couldn't take this aggression anymore…. I couldn't breathe also…. I felt something poke me in my stomach…. I got scared even more... an unknown fear clutched my heart….I shivered….. He was not my Maan ji... He was some animal…. No not an animal… a beast…. A monster…. I dint know what later… I just fainted… out of pain, fatigue…. And mostly out of hurt….

What the hell….. how could I do this to her… she is just a kid…. Damit…. I felt like killing myself… as I carried her and placed her on the bed… I'm a monster….. I sprinkled water on her face… and prayed that she get up… I saw her eyes flutter and she opened it…

Maan ji….She whispered as her eyes filled with the memories of what happened few min ago…

Geet…. Drink this… I said as I helped her up… she sat down and drank water….

Wo… can I go to my room….She asked in a meek tone….

Hmm... I nodded my answer and she got up….. She was week but I was afraid to hold her… she somehow managed to go to her room and I sat down on the bed….. how low could I fall…..? what the hell happened to me…..? Vicky had told me when I was looking for her…. I was really upset that my first step towards our relationship was spoilt… but I also knew it was not her mistake… as she dint know and as before she had made plans with her friends… he had somehow pacified himself and had decided to take her out tomorrow… he had waited to tell her so.. But when he saw her with that Ronith… he dint know what came over him… Samira's words of losing her forever rang in my mind and then something unknown just took over me…. I really dint know what I did… I have never in my life felt like this… the anger, this rage… this possessiveness… was not even present with Samira… then what the hell was this with Geet….. I dint understand… guilt took over me… and I couldn't sleep... I got up and went to have a peek in Geet's room, just to make sure she is fine… I opened the door only to find her sitting on the dressing table's chair… she wore a white night dress… which reached to her feet…. It was a thin strap one… I went closer and felt something stab my heart…..I could clearly see my finger prints on it… the areas were blue now… Geet sat there trying to apply some cream on them…. I went closer and took the cream from her hand and started to apply it…. I saw her flinch with my touch... But then she got comfortable…. I saw her close her eyes as I moved my fingers softly on those marks… my heart cried seeing this… was she angry, wouldn't she ever forgive me…. I wondered… after Appling the cream…. I got up…. Thinking how I would apologize…

Sorry Maan ji….. came her soft voice… I froze… why she was apologizing….?

Please…. Maafi dedo na…… I promise I will never do this again… she said in a very sorry tone… I turned around to see her hold her ear and pout…. She looked so cute…. She was really a kid…. And what did I do to her….? I'm a monster…. I knelt down and cupped her face……

Nahi….misty….. I'm so sorry…. I shouldn't have done this…… I'm sorry I said again and again as tears left my eyes…… she nodded her head and wiped my tears….and I kissed her forehead… mishty…. I whispered…. As she smiled... ok... now all is fine…. Aap jao… and sleep…. She said smiling….. but I couldn't…. I couldn't leave her…..

Can I sleep here today???? I just asked her…. She nodded her head… she lay on her side of the bed and I slid beside her…… I pulled her to me by her waist and she came to me….. as usual…. Without any resistance….. we both slept hugging each other….

thats all... you guys might be wondering.. why i changed it.. i thought this update was more close to what he felt... the anger... and stuff... hope this was more emotional than the last one.. i thought the last one was pheka... so oly...

you guys can either edit ur comments or can comment along with the next one.. which will be up in few mins

part 11
awesome...
oh Sameera cares and loves Geet so much so truly...
but Maan doesnt wanna trust her and neither his bros...
and what is with this Ronit?
and Vicky idiot said he will tell Maan hai na, what happened to that?
idiot Vicky...
oh no hope Maan didnt consummate with out talking to her and explaining her and surely not in anger...
cont soon dear...

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