Liquorice Burning #1 [ArHi] Part 1-12

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sumond

@sumond

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#631

Lovely update from start to finish. Thanks for the pm

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tinsel

@tinsel

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#632

The 'invitation' seems to hold a mystery.It looks like Mrs.Malik is Arnav's grandmother and Akash seems to be hiding something.A super update👍🏼

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#633

Originally posted by: stories.1408
seriously brilliant work again.mrs malik is n interesting character.does she know about khushi nd raizadas...plz clear on her pov if possible.aakash is also helping kkg indirectly all those yrs I think.one point that apways irks me is that y these ppl waited for so long...3yrs before setting d balls on d move or is it that bcoz asr accepted his crimes only after so long...plz clear if poss

No Mrs. Malik does not know everything about Khushi, yet. They will get to know more about eachother... About your other question, Anjali did not give Arnav those divorce papers for three years...may be if she had given them earlier, it would have jolted Arnav. All this should be answered by the end of the story though.

Thank you for sharing your thoughts on the update :)

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#634

Originally posted by: piyaaich
amazng update... little confusing.., thanx 4 d pm

Hey Thanks...I understand what you mean by confusing but this part had to be there...things should clear up gradually from here. Just be prepared to connect the dots ;)

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vgedin

@vgedin

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#635

I'm going to wait before I form an opinion about Aakash. At this point all his actions, good or bad, seem to be motivated only at finding his own happiness. And thats pretty selfish. So I'm going to to clear my head and wait for you to tell me more before I decide.

So now I know who Mrs. Malik is. Both Deeya and Mrs. Malik.. they're like pez dispensers churning out pearls of wisdom and lessons for life every now and then. But this Raul seems to be an interesting boy :)

Each one is burning in their own personal hell, will any of them ever find solace? Redemption?

PS - Thanks for the PM! The language in your story makes me happy, its absolutely flawless :)

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Nishi

@Ni_singh

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#636

interesting update...so this Mrs. Malik is Arnav's dadi...

wonder what Akash is planning to do...and the mysterious invitation...

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Samyxx

@Samyxx

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#637

Oh Arnav! Go and find your Khushi fast..

She wants you to find her..

That's why she sent you the letter..

Loved the update...

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pearl.b

@pearl.b

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#638

Nice update...eager waiting for arnav to meet khushi after three long years...wonder whats on akash's mind...arghhh cant wait...please please update soon.

Thanks for the update.

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zyanah

@zyanah

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#639

"When a man does not respect the wishes of a woman, he deserves none himself"-i can read this line again and again but I think it would take a lifetime to figure out its true meaning!

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#640

Originally posted by: aura9
akash didn't take down the number. Well, i guess he have had enough, what did he mean by he is gonna get his wife back by hook or crook, is he gonna be the next ASR, oh he already is. Who is this deeya.

Yes, he is already an ASR.😆

What is he going to do? You'll have to read the next updates for that ;)

Deeya is Khushi's friend.

Thank you Aura :)