Liquorice Burning #1 [ArHi] Part 1-12

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#621

Originally posted by: 1chilly
This update has confused me more.
What is the Mystery of the Invitation?
Aakash is hiding something.
I'll just wait or the next update to understand this better.

All I'm going to say is that, I'm loving the reactions to this update. More on all of that to follow soon. Thanks Chilly, will update soon!

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#622

Originally posted by: swetha_ch
Looks like Mrs.Malik is Arnav's grand mother. Thank God she is not like the one in Serial.
I just love all female characters of this story. Strong and confident.
Thanks for the pm..
P.S. Please update often..

Yes, she is his grand mother. Well, she like others in this FF has erred but I could never make her like how they showed her to be, she made no sense. Glad to see, you too like the strong female characters, I think it makes for interesting plays -

As others have pointed out too, there has to be an update a week! or sooner if possible. So will give smaller updates but more frequently from now on.

Thank you Swetha :)

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#623

Originally posted by: meem17
Awesomely written
Thanks for the update

Thank you Meem :)

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avika_ShArMa

@avika_ShArMa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#624

hey there!
came across this story today only...and didnt waste any time reading this. 😉

it feels so real!!...wish there was something along this line in the show too. anyways loved each and every chapter...hope you'll make arshi meet in the next chapter or anytime soon coz im dying to read that.

do you send pms?? me want tooo!! 😊

so so so hate that manager!! bas***d of one of a kind...! khushi should not back off...she's living her dream now and nothing should make her deter. wish someone can come and protect her and throw that manager out of the window to the dumpster! maybe arnav only?? what say? 😉

tc.

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#625

Originally posted by: daljeet
Akash is way too selfish. Raizada blood of course.

He is not concerned about finding Kushi, but getting his wife back and AGAIN Kushi is being used as a bait!!!! I HATE THAT.

Arnav asking her if she too is enjoying the rain was a poignant moment.

Maybe Akash is planning to separate his business or home from Arnav?

Mrs. Malik and Rahul's advise was worth it.

@bold 😆 Yes. Thats a given, the Raizadas are a selfish lot!

Loving the reactions to this update.

More on Aakash and what he is upto in the next few parts :)

Thank you Daljeet :)

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Sj236

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Posted: 12 years ago

#626

Wonderfully written !!
Wats in d invitation?
I seriously am amazed d way u create mysteries in d story!

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#627

Originally posted by: arshina223
I think all the Raizadas have f**ked up their mind, they are so f**kingly selfish that they now don't have the quality which makes one a human, the quality to see other's happiness than themselves for even once. Only khushi was the one who had this quality but that was also used by those f**ked up raizadas who always think of their damn happiness. Like akash is doing now. Such an asshole ,when he didn't know that if he was capable of keeping his marriage intact them why did he f**kingly married and now also he is searching khushi for becoz she is f**king 'key to his happiness' but not becoz she was wronged in so many ways and to set things right.

Seriously i don't want to say anything about anjali. She is the most selfish person in entire raizada clan. Now also she is f**king happy in when his brother is burning in hell from all these years, disgusting.

Loved Mrs. maliks. So she is indeed arnav's grandmother.

Loved rahul's words to khushi.

Please don't mind those inappropriate words i used it was just something snapped inside me when i read these line of akash . 'key to happiness' and 'by hook or by crook.'

Loved this update dear. waiting for the next update.

Aww don't worry about it, feel free to express yourself. I can understand where you are coming from, the Raizadas are pretty selfish, time and again as they have proved.

And I'm glad you brought up that irony in this situation - while her brothers and their wives are still stuck in their personal hell...Anjali is not. When in reality, she was a key player that set the whole thing in place...albeit unknowingly. Don't forget, Arnav never told her the truth back in the day. But all that said, I wanted to bring that up, and you've mentioned it.

Raul will obviously be more prominent as the story progresses.

Thank you for your honest response, loved reading every bit of it.

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#628

Originally posted by: yashal_khan
another awsumm update... akash want to bring khushi back for payal but why he dindnt note her no????
who is mrs malik???

continue soon pls

thanks for pm

There is a trail of unanswered whys in this story ...😛

Mrs.Malik is Arnav's grandmother.

Will continue soon.

Thank you for your comment :)

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#629

Originally posted by: Hriju321
I love everthing about this FF,right from the banner.Excellent update. Now lets see ASR and Khushi meet and the explosions that follow.

Thank you Hriju. No one has talked about the banner yet and I'm thrilled that someone finally did 😃

Next update soon!

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reshkn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#630

loved the update...

a bit confused wit akash's behaviour.. so arnav is in town to win her back..

mrs mallik's past..related? arnav's father shot himself to death too..😲she is a very strong character..hope kushi takes her advice and finds a new job..and Raul's words ..very true..

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