Liquorice Burning #1 [ArHi] Part 1-12

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Mandy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#641

I love this story. Please update again soon!!

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Sonia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#642

This Is absolutely fantastic. I love how you juggle between time and places. It's w different concept, you've merged the important tid bits from the show with a story of your own, a story that shows what could have been.

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Sai Prasanthi

@Prasanthi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#643

Everything is little unclear but I guess that's how you want it to be. Akash, invitation, Arnav, Khushi...waiting for more. :-)

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#644

Originally posted by: serendipitylove
Finally an update!!!
And arnav is in mumbai...I take it the day he finally meets khushi after 3 long years isn't far away?
And I'm happy for Anjali and Ved...She deserves happiness too...
Do I sense something brewing between Raul and Khushi? Especially since his parting words were very profound...
And Aakash...I'm glad he wants to win her back, by hook or crook...After all all's fair in love and war right?😆 And finally that man has grown a spine! Thats gud news :) I'm sure the mysterious invitation has something to do with khushi...and i'm sure he didn't take down the number coz he already knows where khushi is!
Thanks for the pm gurl...Waiting for d next update 😊

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OMG! Just realised something!! Mrs Malik...Her son shot himself n destroyed d family...Arnav was a malik whose dad shot himself...Connecting the dots..I'm guessing this is Arnav's dadi!!😃
If it is, i'm guessing we have a "good dadi" in ur story, unlike the show😆

Well, they will have to meet obviously. How...and whether if its too late, you will have to wait and see! Something brewing between Khushi and Raul? About time, Khushi dated other people dont you think? Unless, you want her to wait for Arnav with all the uncertainity? Tells tells??

You make so much sense that there is nothing left to say!😉

And yes, a good dadi, I hated the one they showed in the show.😆

Thanks SL.

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#645

Originally posted by: Rhysenn
Awesome!

Thank you :)

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#646

Originally posted by: 45678
loved it.

Thank you #45678 :)

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#647

Originally posted by: shree10
Thanks for update an pm. Have been stalking this thread for an update. Hope you update soonish. Can't wait to read and know further!

Thank you Shree, glad to know you are enjoying this FF. Will update soon :)

Edited by -Aria- - 12 years ago

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#648

Originally posted by: casker
loved the update.

Thank you Casker :)

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#649

Originally posted by: Neha2014
Thanks for the PM..
Amazing update.
Will the invitation reveal the secrets..

Thank you Neha, glad to know you enjoyed the update.

Arnav is closer to finding Khushi than he has been the past three years ;)

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#650

Originally posted by: P4rveen12
A brilliant and fantastic update, simply amazing.

Written brilliantly and a superb read from start to finish.

Poor Akash was feeling so dejected after the phone call with Payal and it was quite shocking he did not note down khushi's number, I think personally he probably thinks that Arnav does not deserve Khushi.

Eager to read what's in the invitation that Akash has requested to be left on the desk, hoping Arnav will see it.

Anjali and Ved's part was sad, Ved trying to extract a promise from Anjali and there confessions of love was beautiful.

Awww both Arnav and Khushi were looking at the rain and Arnav remembering the time when he sent khushi in the car park and thinking how cruel he was.

Awww Khushi thinking back to what Mrs Malik's advice, hope Khushi does listen to it as it was amazing advice.

Loved the update, eager to read more.

Please continue soon and thanks for the PM xx

You are right about Aakash. And the invitation will be left on the desk, for Arnav - its up to him to find it and piece things together ;)

Everyone is trying to move on with what they have and yet no one is successful because they wronged one person collectively. Till she gets her happiness, they too won't :) But does her happiness lay with Arnav or not?

Thank you for sharing your thoughts on the update, will update soon.

Aria

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