Liquorice Burning #1 [ArHi] Part 1-12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1051

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Liquorice Burning II

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1052

Originally posted by: simi.99
Nice

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1053

Interesting story.will come back and edit my comment. just started reading.

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mklam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1054

Wonderful story. Arnav's despair when she's missing, Khushi's grit and determination to follow her passion (flavours of the kitchen seeps throughout the story) and now the redemption begins. look forward to the next update!

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Deepa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1055

FF was very touchy... well written... many twisted words and suspense...

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illa

@illa8

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1056

just started reading ...its a great story

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Khuarv

@Khuarv

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1057

I came across this story recently. It's the best redemption
track . I love the story and they way you wrote it. The guilt
of treating khushi in such a unfair manner is killing Arnav.
Khushi has physically moved on but the past has her in it's
clutches firmly thru emotions. Your writing makes the reader
feel the emotions felt by the characters. Very beautifully written.

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1058

Originally posted by: mklam
Wonderful story. Arnav's despair when she's missing, Khushi's grit and determination to follow her passion (flavours of the kitchen seeps throughout the story) and now the redemption begins. look forward to the next update!

Thank you!

Originally posted by: harshdb
FF was very touchy... well written... many twisted words and suspense...

Thank you!

Originally posted by: tina_1234
Awesome story

Thank you!

Originally posted by: illa8
just started reading ...its a great story

Thank you!

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#1059

Originally posted by: Khuarv
I came across this story recently. It's the best redemption
track . I love the story and they way you wrote it. The guilt
of treating khushi in such a unfair manner is killing Arnav.
Khushi has physically moved on but the past has her in it's
clutches firmly thru emotions. Your writing makes the reader
feel the emotions felt by the characters. Very beautifully written.

Than you!😳

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