Liquorice Burning #1 [ArHi] Part 1-12

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#651

Originally posted by: Vidhi_K
I just clicked. Mrs Malik is arnavs grandmother. Nice update.

Yes, she is. Thanks Vidhi :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#652

Originally posted by: nataliya
👏just read it in one go.beautifully writen ,keep it up.pm me

Thank you :)

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#653

Originally posted by: segad
honestly nt sure i understood the chapter. even akash knew where khushi is?? and payal was staying away for khushi's sake and still akash did nothing to bring arnav khushi together?
i knew anjali was a nutcase but akash bhi??

khushi aur payal in paagalon se dur hi rahe to accha hai

@bold, 😆 yes the entire family is same isn't it?

So does it mean, you will be happy if Khushi ends up someone else and not Arnav?

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#654

Originally posted by: missmk
Luv it

Thank you :)

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#655

Originally posted by: katunkka
This has been so good went through all the chapter. You can write so well and you capture the emotions very well too. Hope you update quickly because I'd like to read this further.

Thank you so much for your wonderful words of encouragement :)

Will update soon!

Aria

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#656

Originally posted by: Dimz13
I'm surprised that there are things happening in the Raizada mansion that Arnav is not aware of...! Anjali knows where Kushi is...and even Aakaash is cognizant to that fact to a certain extent...! They have kept Arnav in the dark...till he finally comes to his senses...! wow now that I did not see coming...! What invitation is Aakaash talking about..?

now that Aakaashis pushed against the wall he decides to get the ball rolling...to bring Kushi out of her exile..and how does he plan on getting it done..? Drop bread crumbs for Arnav..?

Mrs. Malik has given some very good advise to Kushi...not that she need any...she has faced far too much at a very young age...but everyone and then a nudge in the right direction is good.

Raoul seems to be shaping up to give competition for Arnav when he finally makes is appearance before Kushi..! And Mr. R seems to have some very sane thoughts.

What's the deal with Ved and Anjali...from when are they serious about each other...I assume they are not married...?

I guess, Arnav will finally learn that he is not the only one who can keep secrets and play with lives ;) Whether thats good or bad, only time can tell.

You make a lot of sense, nothing much to add to that ;)

Except is everyone willing to see a happy Khushi, even if its not with Arnav?

Ved and Anjali are not married ... how and when they met may or may not come up in detail later in the story. It has been mentioned in one of the earlier parts that Ved was Anjali's doctor at one point of time, and helped her overcome depression following her divorce from Shyam.

Thanks Dimz. Next update soon!

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#657

Originally posted by: soaringskies
i loved the update aria...!!! i am not so sure about how arnav will react to all this when it comes in light.. And i am glad you are back on track by updating regularly..😆 eagerly looking forward to the next update...😃

I agree, Arnav will be shocked to say the least when things come to light. He will learn that he is not the only one who can keep secrets and play with lives. But at what cost, will the revelations come. Is it too late already for a happy ending?

Yes, I got a kick on the butt for not updating sooner. One update a week is what I am aiming for now.

So next update could be any minute or within the next few days ;)

Thanks SS :)

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#658

Originally posted by: _disha_
Definitely Akash knows much more than what he is letting out !

Anjali ..i dont know what to make of her .. she knows they all wronged Khushi but somehow she doesnt seem to be sorry or guilty or has just moved past that .. i don't understand her! Is she in touch with Khushi or just knows her whereabouts due to Ved ??

Mrs Mallik seems to have a big role to play in the future ! Little of Arnav here but deifinitely like to see him grovelling !

Good to see everyone finally suspecting that there is more to Aakash than what meets the eye, he is definitely an integral part of this story ;)

Anjali is a flawed character like others and perhaps the weakest of the lot who was never given a chance to come to her own... may be this is finally her path to self discovery?

Mrs. Malik is Arnav's Grandmother - Khushi potentially can bring the entire family together...or let it crumble to pieces

Oh don't worry, Arnav will be doing more than a little grovelling :D

Thanks Disha, will update soon :)

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#659

Originally posted by: raws
wow

Thank you Raws :)

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Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#660

Originally posted by: avikasharma
hey there!
came across this story today only...and didnt waste any time reading this. 😉

it feels so real!!...wish there was something along this line in the show too. anyways loved each and every chapter...hope you'll make arshi meet in the next chapter or anytime soon coz im dying to read that.

do you send pms?? me want tooo!! 😊

so so so hate that manager!! bas***d of one of a kind...! khushi should not back off...she's living her dream now and nothing should make her deter. wish someone can come and protect her and throw that manager out of the window to the dumpster! maybe arnav only?? what say? 😉

tc.

Glad you found this story and Thank you for dropping by and leaving this comment, sharing your thoughts.

Arshi will meet but not going to make it any easier for Arnav ;)

I do send PMs as mentioned in the Note at the end of the updates. Please do read.

We all want Arnav to beat the crap out of the manager don't we?😆