Liquorice Burning #1 [ArHi] Part 1-12

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inajnar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

V interesting ...

In the intro ...Is Khushi a figment of his imagination ? Just wondering

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Tammie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Ooh, you have me hook, line and sinker! I'll be watching for more!

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Venicestar88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

oh finally a proper full on redemption track... rubbing my hands in glee!!! BRING IT ON. Superbly written Aria... i've read both the start and ch.1 with great interest!! i'm going to kep an eye on this one for sure!!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: izzy0502
NICE UPDATE...

CONTINUE SOON

Thanks Izzy, will continue soon :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Shweta1691
Ooo...angry payaland patient ASR!!!! Now thats interesting😊
Loved it
Looking forward for more
Thanks for the PM

Thank you Shweta :)

And you are welcome for the PM. Lets see how long the patient ASR lasts ;)

Aria

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SARA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Very nice storyline please keep it up

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: AneesahJabeen
Poor arnva really seems to be in regret
Loving this payal!

Its just the beginning for Arnav. He is not fully there yet. Glad you liked this Payal. We lost that fiesty Payal who would stand up for her sister somewhere in the show too early.

Thank you AneesahJabeen :)

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Flash90

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

I like this...this is how payal should have been in the show...standing up for her sister...

Nice update😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Japonica
Oh, no, Aria, you can't stop now leaving us feeling miserable for him, understanding Payal's anger yet wishing someone or something will show him some mercy!

Don't know why i feel sorry for him despite his beastliness. I'm sure khushi would be most upset to see his sorry state. The one who realizes the pain he/she has caused and truly repents it suffers double the pain they have caused because they are forever beholden to the one they have wronged and life for them becomes an atonement.

Hey!

You are seeking mercy for him already? And the 'beast' hasn't really made his presence felt yet!! 😲

I agree though Khushi would be the most upset to see him in a sorry state and perhaps the only one who can bring him out of his misery. But he has miles to go...

@bold, beautifully worded, I'm not sure he is there yet. But there is truth in your words, lets see how this pans out.

Lots more to come. Thank you for your comment Japonica :)

Aria